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I Fell In Love
You are the colours of my life.
So I took mortar from
my fractured paths
and built a temple for you.
Published 15th Apr 2024
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15th Apr 2024 9:13pm
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16th Apr 2024 12:18pm
It's so wonderful when you start seeing colours again...
I love how you have taken the idea of mistakes, pain,
emptiness, loss, and other fractured paths... and
used those to build something beautiful for someone.
No doubt a spectacular temple and strong foundation.
Certain to have all the girls swooning. ;)
I love how you have taken the idea of mistakes, pain,
emptiness, loss, and other fractured paths... and
used those to build something beautiful for someone.
No doubt a spectacular temple and strong foundation.
Certain to have all the girls swooning. ;)
16th Apr 2024 12:39pm
Thank you such a wonderful comment, im glad you understood the weight of this little scribble. . .I am not adverse to some swooning ;)
16th Apr 2024 4:04pm
Simply stunning, in awe of this little write.
It's a rare gift to transform pain into beauty...
It's a rare gift to transform pain into beauty...
16th Apr 2024 4:37pm
