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Spring Mirth
Plush olive and maroon leaves
tempt my weariness with a reprieve.
Flaunting their secret scarlet beads.
Blossom with a lusting thirst for
spring rain's, gently weeping eyes.
From a milk white sky, one for which
the dogwoods vie.
Birds soar the mood less sky.
They fly right through the lingering goodbyes.
Echoes in the air that had no care to die.
The ones that had no why.
Like hungry winter parts with floral spring.
Barren bark and blossom had their fling.
The magnolia had no care with her lavish flowering.
All this rebirth, it's within the endings we find the mirth.
tempt my weariness with a reprieve.
Flaunting their secret scarlet beads.
Blossom with a lusting thirst for
spring rain's, gently weeping eyes.
From a milk white sky, one for which
the dogwoods vie.
Birds soar the mood less sky.
They fly right through the lingering goodbyes.
Echoes in the air that had no care to die.
The ones that had no why.
Like hungry winter parts with floral spring.
Barren bark and blossom had their fling.
The magnolia had no care with her lavish flowering.
All this rebirth, it's within the endings we find the mirth.
Author's Note
The image is a close zoom on our crabapple tree
That tree always inspires me.
That tree always inspires me.
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11th Apr 2024 8:46pm
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12th Apr 2024 00:28am
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12th Apr 2024 00:49am
I can easily believe that. You've got a green thumb and such a deep appreciation for nature.
Thx for stopping bye!
Thx for stopping bye!
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12th Apr 2024 5:19am
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12th Apr 2024 7:41am
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12th Apr 2024 11:03am
Cheers to rebirth! To our seasons of spring inside ourself.
Thx for reading 💜
Thx for reading 💜
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12th Apr 2024 12:12pm
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13th Apr 2024 1:39am
Very uniformly expressive with the technical part of the poem, and nicely described visual components to tell the transitioning story and emotional flow of the poem. You really capture the atmosphere of seasonal change quite in your own unique way. Thanks for sharing!
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13th Apr 2024 8:26am
Hello and thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Such nice comments, I appreciate.
Such nice comments, I appreciate.