Dark Secrets

Haiku is your calling.

😊 - they are fun.
Thx for checking out!

Wow! This one packs a punk. Perfectly done! Love it!

The last line was hard to come up with, believe it or not. I had vultures eating the secrets revealed as a meal, lol.

So happy you liked thanks for RL

Have a blessed day!

It's my pleasure. Be blessed, my friend!

Short and strong and dreary ...

Thanks for sharing, and happy times forever

It was kinda grim, lol. Thank you for reading & commenting

And much happiness to you always

This rocks!! Great imagery as well.

Thank you, I liked the image too, not that I would want to be in the dungeon, lol
Just the secrets,

Thx for reading!

this is great beautiful Debbie 💕

Thank you Crimsin ❤️

Ooh, I felt the chill.
You rock, girl.

I like that!
Thank you so much!

Very dark… interesting

I think maybe we all take a secret or two to the grave. Thanks for reading, I was going for dark.

Dear D,

I liked the dark aspect of this piece. It reflects a place I go to but don’t like speaking out loud. Much obliged to you for putting it out for me. 😊
H🌷

Thank you and you are very welcome.
I like to write about the feelings that are hard to express

Have a great night!

Quite evocative and brilliant.  I agree with adagio - maybe haiku is your calling.  This has inspired me to give haiku a try.  Overall, very solid, conceptually considerate, and original.  It shows that you're a seasoned writer.

Hi, I actually was so intimidated to write a haiku.
Nope I wasn't going to do it. But I did.
Everyday you should do one thing you fear or have
never done before
I wrote one, now I'm addicted, lol.
I read about them before I wrote one.
I would be so excited to read a haiku by you.
It's very different to me then writing a poem.
Thank you for all the really nice comments.

Have a great night!