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I cried
( my picture of the eclipse )
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As usually deny?
Will they
Regret
The next day
Or forget
The reason why?
We are all in this
Together
All of us
Forever
You and I.
I cried and
Cried
Not for the Sun
Nor for the Moon
That’s a lie.
I cried and
Cried
For the people
For my children
Who were Nearby.
Those who had
Witnessed
This miracle
And did not
Cry.
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As usually deny?
Will they
Regret
The next day
Or forget
The reason why?
We are all in this
Together
All of us
Forever
You and I.
I cried and
Cried
Not for the Sun
Nor for the Moon
That’s a lie.
I cried and
Cried
For the people
For my children
Who were Nearby.
Those who had
Witnessed
This miracle
And did not
Cry.
Written by
Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 8th Apr 2024
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Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 9:05pm
Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 9:26pm
You did very well Sam, capturing that moment of near eclipse with your camera. I also felt emotional watching the coverage on TV, more so for the human reaction to it, if I'm honest. 😊
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Re: Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 9:48pm
Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 9:51pm
Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 9:52pm
Great write dear poet.
is a deeply emotional and introspective poem that explores themes of loss, longing, and the shared human experience.
your poem delves into contemplation about mortality and the desire to escape, questioning if death is imminent and if there is a chance for renewal.
your shift highlights your emotional depth and compassion, emphasizing the shared humanity and the capacity for connection and empathy.
is a heartfelt reflection on the complex range of human emotions and the bonds that tie us together, reminding us of the power of empathy and the significance of shared experiences.
is a deeply emotional and introspective poem that explores themes of loss, longing, and the shared human experience.
your poem delves into contemplation about mortality and the desire to escape, questioning if death is imminent and if there is a chance for renewal.
your shift highlights your emotional depth and compassion, emphasizing the shared humanity and the capacity for connection and empathy.
is a heartfelt reflection on the complex range of human emotions and the bonds that tie us together, reminding us of the power of empathy and the significance of shared experiences.
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Re. I cried
8th Apr 2024 10:56pm
hello dearest Sam we are told the stars are in the skies as messages of great events some people have the ability to read the constellations sadly here in the states it is a dying artform only few still understand it is indeed a miracle and marks an event or occasion it is beautiful that deep inside you... you recognize this 💕
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Re: Re. I cried
9th Apr 2024 3:56am
I’ve spent a life time reading the stars… literally.. I have a phd in that… yet still I know nothing
Re. I cried
Re: Re. I cried
9th Apr 2024 3:58am
And I thought you were busy doing ..mmmmm… inside…??
Glad you did enjoy it… although I wouldn’t want you away from your….mmmm….
Glad you did enjoy it… although I wouldn’t want you away from your….mmmm….
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9th Apr 2024 3:59am
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Re: Re. I cried
9th Apr 2024 5:22pm
OMG I touched you heart... OMG.. OMG... well, this is your fault for touching mine...