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Blood Priestess
Arrested in the dead of night
By cloaking shadows and
Swift Ferocity.
her icy grip
Sharply piercing my veins
With scalding fangs.
passionately embraced
by death and love
And The cost of pain
From her succulent Feeding
Off my life blood.
A lustful torment I can’t and will not deny.
Now Trapped within her soulless
shoebox
My breath receding
Finding comfort in the darkness
with no holes for breathing.
I am reborn.
My once familiar soul has been
discarded and torn
I am drained hollow.
Now Walking the path
of dead rose petals crushed
Beneath her elegant feet
To her I will follow.
No mercy for my suffering.
No mercy for the earth
In a man’s once soiled heart.
No mercy from
The blood priestess.
But I’ll serve her well.
By cloaking shadows and
Swift Ferocity.
her icy grip
Sharply piercing my veins
With scalding fangs.
passionately embraced
by death and love
And The cost of pain
From her succulent Feeding
Off my life blood.
A lustful torment I can’t and will not deny.
Now Trapped within her soulless
shoebox
My breath receding
Finding comfort in the darkness
with no holes for breathing.
I am reborn.
My once familiar soul has been
discarded and torn
I am drained hollow.
Now Walking the path
of dead rose petals crushed
Beneath her elegant feet
To her I will follow.
No mercy for my suffering.
No mercy for the earth
In a man’s once soiled heart.
No mercy from
The blood priestess.
But I’ll serve her well.
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Re. Blood Priestess
8th Apr 2024 8:21am
I absolutely love this! 🦇
" No mercy for the earth in a man's once soiled heart" - wow..
That line blew me away.
" No mercy for the earth in a man's once soiled heart" - wow..
That line blew me away.
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12th Apr 2024 7:00pm
Re. Blood Priestess
8th Apr 2024 11:22am
"A lustful torment I can’t and will not deny."
"No mercy from
The blood priestess.
But I’ll serve her well."
Very thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed these lines the most.
"No mercy from
The blood priestess.
But I’ll serve her well."
Very thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed these lines the most.
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Re: Re. Blood Priestess
12th Apr 2024 7:01pm
Re. Blood Priestess
8th Apr 2024 12:03pm
Re: Re. Blood Priestess
12th Apr 2024 7:02pm
Thanks her, this poem started off as something else.for some reason it just evolved into a vampire poem lol
Re. Blood Priestess
8th Apr 2024 3:05pm
As someone who is fascinated by vampires I really like this one.
It has such a dark and edgy feel to it. Out of the box for sure.
It has such a dark and edgy feel to it. Out of the box for sure.
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12th Apr 2024 7:03pm
Re. Blood Priestess
10th Apr 2024 8:31pm
Digging the vibe of the poem, it played vividly in my mind. You captured a passion well, even though there's pain there is still dedication and admiration. I love the way you ended with a vow of loyalty.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Blood Priestess
12th Apr 2024 7:06pm
Thanks Lj,loyalty is important especially when you have no choice lol and vampire queens demand every bit of it.
But the rewards can be very delicious 🤤😘
But the rewards can be very delicious 🤤😘
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11th Apr 2024 1:39pm
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Re. Blood Priestess
15th Apr 2024 10:48pm
Hahaha, freaking cold one dude. We was thinking of a coffin being being called a shoebox, death being the collector. Tight
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Re. Blood Priestess
16th May 2024 5:12pm
"Now Walking the path
of dead rose petals crushed
Beneath her elegant feet"
Okay, I'm putting up my favorite verse too! Love this imagery. I'm a fan of vamps... my window is always open.
Lovely piece, Sir Jigg
of dead rose petals crushed
Beneath her elegant feet"
Okay, I'm putting up my favorite verse too! Love this imagery. I'm a fan of vamps... my window is always open.
Lovely piece, Sir Jigg
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17th May 2024 4:47am
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Re. Blood Priestess
this is a very impressive poem. i love how you put the verses together so well. dark. and spastic as well. well done my friend
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Beautiful poem
31st May 2024 6:11pm
You are the man in the moon, like atlas with the weight of the world. Time to break free of that :P
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