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Cold starlights
Caressed in your
Dark blanket of twinkling
Diamonds and shivering cold.
Swirling agony and wonder
Abusing my questions
Making My thoughts suffer.
Glazed over sight trained and caged
By The Blackened twisting skies.
Absorbing the cold starlights
Now imprisoned behind blue eyes.
Dark blanket of twinkling
Diamonds and shivering cold.
Swirling agony and wonder
Abusing my questions
Making My thoughts suffer.
Glazed over sight trained and caged
By The Blackened twisting skies.
Absorbing the cold starlights
Now imprisoned behind blue eyes.
Published 7th Jan 2024
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12th Jan 2024 11:24pm
Interesting metaphors: enjoyed the read...look forward to more. Hugs and peace, Oral
12th Jan 2024 11:26pm
13th Jan 2024 6:08am
14th Jan 2024 00:44am
The eyes are windows into the soul. What you see is a journey in and of itself. Nicely written.
26th Jan 2024 6:46am
9th Mar 2024 4:11am
"Abusing my questions
Making My thoughts suffer."
I could chat over coffee or whiskey on these words for a while....nicely done
I wish you well. This speaks of pain.....<3
Making My thoughts suffer."
I could chat over coffee or whiskey on these words for a while....nicely done
I wish you well. This speaks of pain.....<3
9th Mar 2024 2:40pm
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20th Mar 2024 4:24am
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
Love the juxtapositions in this piece.
...and that last line is smashing.
Great work, much enjoyed.
...and that last line is smashing.
Great work, much enjoyed.
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- Edited 7th Apr 2024 6:45am
15th Mar 2024 2:02am
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17th Mar 2024 2:35pm
Cold Starlight, yet there was underline heat to it's tone.
Such a soft intriguing piece. Good to read you again.
Such a soft intriguing piece. Good to read you again.
17th Mar 2024 7:59pm
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