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No Redemption
A lot of poets spend time and ink saying they're not poets
Well that's not me
2000 poems later I'm something
Redemption is a bear
I think about repentance
Then pour another drink
Flagrant foul, 2 shots and the ball
Well that's not me
2000 poems later I'm something
Redemption is a bear
I think about repentance
Then pour another drink
Flagrant foul, 2 shots and the ball
Published 2nd Apr 2024
Author's Note
Last line is a basketball term.
It seems to fit a lot of my circumstances...
It seems to fit a lot of my circumstances...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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The author encourages honest critique.
2nd Apr 2024 4:27pm
General, congratulations on 2000! Looking forward to the next 2000. Hugs and love, Oral
2nd Apr 2024 4:31pm
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2nd Apr 2024 4:35pm
You got it Mary
As I like to say
Stay tuned and fasten your seat belt
Filter is off !!
Thanks !
As I like to say
Stay tuned and fasten your seat belt
Filter is off !!
Thanks !
2nd Apr 2024 4:36pm
Fantastic!! Congratulations for reaching 2,000. Many more my friend.
2nd Apr 2024 4:39pm
2nd Apr 2024 4:44pm
Congratulations on such a wonderful milestone of creating. It’s fantastic. ❤️
2nd Apr 2024 4:50pm
Thank you so much !
It’s been a wild ride and there’s plenty left in my tank !
Appreciate your comment !!
It’s been a wild ride and there’s plenty left in my tank !
Appreciate your comment !!
2nd Apr 2024 5:09pm
2nd Apr 2024 5:13pm
Yes
Words are our breath and foundation
We poets have a responsibility to tell our stories and to speak for those who won’t or can’t …
❤️
Words are our breath and foundation
We poets have a responsibility to tell our stories and to speak for those who won’t or can’t …
❤️
2nd Apr 2024 4:48pm
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2nd Apr 2024 6:08pm
Who needs redemption when we have you? Out loud & proud & saying what many won't/can't.
That's correct Willow
And if they don't behave ...
Well, there's always the Hickory switch
You do know I sell wood
Get wood
Give wood
Stay tuned
More bad behavior ahead...
Thx
🖤
And if they don't behave ...
Well, there's always the Hickory switch
You do know I sell wood
Get wood
Give wood
Stay tuned
More bad behavior ahead...
Thx
🖤
2nd Apr 2024 8:59pm
2nd Apr 2024 9:13pm
Actually I am ....
11 years in the making...
Thanks so much for your support and friendship over the years ❤
11 years in the making...
Thanks so much for your support and friendship over the years ❤
2nd Apr 2024 9:57pm
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2nd Apr 2024 10:06pm
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2024 10:27pm
I've never counted how many poems I've written since 2009 on other poetry sites. 2000 is a hell of a lot. To be able to combine fine art with words is a plus and to be commended. :)
2nd Apr 2024 11:25pm
Thank you so much DragonBlood.
When I read my list sometimes I'm amazed at how many emotions and subjects I've involved myself in. Sometimes I say to myself, did I write this, it's not half bad ...
I appreciate your comment
Stay tuned, I'm just getting started 🤩
When I read my list sometimes I'm amazed at how many emotions and subjects I've involved myself in. Sometimes I say to myself, did I write this, it's not half bad ...
I appreciate your comment
Stay tuned, I'm just getting started 🤩
3rd Apr 2024 00:35am
One drink for you and one drink for the ladies and then orgasmic bliss over and over again.
3rd Apr 2024 00:44am
3rd Apr 2024 3:29am
Oh dear Poetspeak filter off. We all in trouble. Had to laugh at the read. Thank you.
3rd Apr 2024 11:31am
That's my job E
To be off color and provide humor in the ruins ...
Hey, we're poets and rogues, we're supposed to be #$&*%$%@ ...
Stay tuned for more bad behavior...
Thanks
To be off color and provide humor in the ruins ...
Hey, we're poets and rogues, we're supposed to be #$&*%$%@ ...
Stay tuned for more bad behavior...
Thanks
3rd Apr 2024 1:43pm
Hey
I have read only few of the last 2000 but will definitely read the next 2000... keep writing... N congrats for 2k...
I have read only few of the last 2000 but will definitely read the next 2000... keep writing... N congrats for 2k...
3rd Apr 2024 1:58pm
Thanks so much dimpy
I'll try to write some Supreme erotica in your name and likeness ...
You Rule
Thx
💜💚🖤
I'll try to write some Supreme erotica in your name and likeness ...
You Rule
Thx
💜💚🖤
3rd Apr 2024 4:13pm
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3rd Apr 2024 10:33pm
That's because you're hardcore and you've got those 38 specials to protect you ..
3rd Apr 2024 10:36pm
3rd Apr 2024 10:45pm
Must be nice despite the back problems ..
Knowing and getting that attention you crave but being able to put that fucker in a vice grip if you so desire..
I kinda know everything....because I listen ..
Knowing and getting that attention you crave but being able to put that fucker in a vice grip if you so desire..
I kinda know everything....because I listen ..
4th Apr 2024 9:26pm
4th Apr 2024 5:30pm
Oh - I missed this one: a belated congratulations on your 2000 poems!!!
That's indeed a helluva milestone. The part about the poets saying they're not poets made me laugh out loud. You are definitely a poet and I'm one too. There, I said it. Looking forward to the next ...
BIG LIKE ;-)
That's indeed a helluva milestone. The part about the poets saying they're not poets made me laugh out loud. You are definitely a poet and I'm one too. There, I said it. Looking forward to the next ...
BIG LIKE ;-)
4th Apr 2024 5:51pm
Yeah, if after 2000 poems if I'm not a poet than who would be ?
There's also the 800 sex poems I deleted because I was saying the same thing over and over again but that's another story...
Thx D
I'm marching on !
There's also the 800 sex poems I deleted because I was saying the same thing over and over again but that's another story...
Thx D
I'm marching on !
9th Apr 2024 3:06am
I just came across you and I enjoy what I see. congratulations. 2000 wow Fia xoxo
9th Apr 2024 3:31am
Thank you so much Fia
Joined in 2013 and went on a mission that has never stopped.
Appreciate your comment !!
Stay tuned
X
Joined in 2013 and went on a mission that has never stopped.
Appreciate your comment !!
Stay tuned
X
6th May 2024 1:12am
Poet and artist, with all the raw honesty is what we like around here.
Here's to the next 1000 poems sir.
BL
Here's to the next 1000 poems sir.
BL
6th May 2024 1:29am
That's another 5 years.
Wow, I'd be ancient but still writing dirty poems ..
BL back
Wow, I'd be ancient but still writing dirty poems ..
BL back
