... Like I don't know you...

Hahaha, hahaha, naughty naughty Lady. This will receive a lot of comments it is so freaking tight

Oh yes! so incredibly naughty... more than anyone could ever fully fathom. ;) So what are you saying ME, that everyone wants to handle me roughly especially since I am freaking tight. lol Well I guess we will see but I really love knowing I have your faith in my ability to convey my feelings in a way that people will connect with. That makes me feel good!

This awakens my dark side fully. I could follow your instructions to the letter.
Richard

Oh Richard, I love awakening the dark side fully and then feeling the full intensity of those feelings is truly something else isn't it? I bet you could follow my thoughts to the letter because I can definitely feel that dark side coming to light in your words. ;)

You definitely know me better than anyone I have met.
Would meeting help either of us?
R

I can see you definitely understood and connected with this one. :)

A riveting piece of hot, wet sex! Dirty as fuck but really good!

Well hey Vision, what could be better than some really hot wet sex? Lots of sweat and other fluids to go around, keep them flowing until the point it's painful... and then push even harder. ;) Dirty as fuck, hell yeah!

There's another side to Kx.
Treat her like a glass angel and you're the one who will break and be shattered.  No, give her what she wants.  Total mayhem in her loins and twisted sexual barbarian tactics you only fantasize about in your sick mind.  Do all that, then maybe you have half a chance to see inside her demented mind circus ....

BIG LIKE

RL AWARD

So many sides... polished by cutting, grinding... Sometimes treated like glass but more often have endured a lot of cutting and grinding in order to be exactly what others want me to be. But I suppose trying to control someone else can break you too. And oh so much mayhem in the loins. All men want to be a twisted sexual barbarian sometimes right? But you should see what goes on in a woman's mind (at least this one)... That demented mind circus has the most incredible rides you will ever experience. Still sometimes she does love being treated like glass too.

You need to be fucked rough and very hard but you also need to be loved. You will enjoy orgasmic bliss over and over again.  Keep on writing.

Ah, actually I was just saying that in the last reply, that I still need to be loved despite all of my intense sexual desires, fantasies, and needs. Enjoying orgasmic bliss over and over is one of the best things in the world. It's such a wonderful reset button for the mind, body, and soul. Thanks for the continued encouragement Francisco. :)

I hate you so much

lol Straight to the point, I love that comment it says a lot! ;) Nothing like the intensity of emotion to make things scary, fun, exciting, or... Certainly makes you feel alive for better or worse.

I go with the energy of my partner and aim at the target of mutual pleasure!

I know what you mean, I always feel the energy of my partner strongly but people can also strongly feel my energy. I have been told my energy projects intensely. :p But I get the most pleasure from my partner's pleasure.

Feels like synchronicity

another stirring excitation...powerful vision...loved it L

I love stirring excitation... and that you can share my vision with me through my words. Knowing you loved it makes me happy BC. Powerful visions can certainly lead to much excitation when shared. ;)

Dear K,

Jesus! I’ll be back after a cigarette and cold shower. Killer last line. Sometimes a girl just gotta have it rough and tumble. Did I already say killer last line? Yeah I did! Hot write sister. H🌷🌷

I know ways to keep that cold shower hot! ;) I can definitely tell you get it, the last line certainly sums it up doesn't it? A good rough and tumble is definitely needed to get out all that frustration and anxiety that builds up inside. We definitely have needs damnit, so many needs. Haha, yeah you did and I am definitely smiling knowing you connected with me on this one Honoria. ;)

Dirty girls unite!
There’s nothing better than war between the sheets. Sure, he may end up a casualty, but eh….
Beautiful pic, btw.

Haha, oh boy when dirty girls unite that can definitely be very steamy! ;) A war in between the sheets, hell yeah! we know who can take more don't we? :p So in the end we will always win... and he may end up a casualty but he will always want to come back fighting again; if he is still breathing. Perhaps he can even win a round a two. I thought the pic was a great match. Looking for something that expressed the feeling but was classy and erotic without being too...

A deep and penetrating write indeed, sexual aggression slammed into the readers eyes,
A thing of brutal beauty.

Deep and penetrating, well I really love your word choices there. Sometimes you just have to slam things, right into the readers eyes. ;) Really love that you see it as a thing of brutal beauty. I have to admit I do love tender and loving too but sometimes there are so many ways to experience the intensity of emotions. So many things are so very exciting...

I always like force in sex... Just awesome piece...

Hey dimpy, oh yeah you can definitely feel it when there is forcefulness in sex. That incredible intensity of being taken like that, to be lusted after and desired so much. There are so many ways to express our emotions and feelings, and exploring them all deeply definitely keeps things exciting. Love that you could feel this one. ;)

I can't help but to feel the pain of a past trauma(s) behind this poem. You write well, and certainly have a creative outsource of expression. Perhaps the best way to cure the mind is through absolution of the flesh.

Welcome to DUP Lantern_Core. I hope you like it here. It's interesting and very intuitive that you picked up on the pain of past trauma. It does often have a way of showing through in different ways and certainly has a way of shaping us, and even our proclivities. Thanks for saying I write well, I really appreciate it! There are so many ways to express ourselves. I think you are so right, one of the best ways to cure the mind is through the flesh; whether it be sex and intimacy, whitewater rafting, cycling, the gym, or anything that makes you focus on the body instead.

Do you believe in luck or is it all in the numbers ?
Would have to be a mathematician to get the exact combination of exquisite lust and infinite orgasms to quench our intrinsic desire …,

As soon as I’m out of jail I’ll be looking for you …

They got me on a stolen kisses charge.
Out soon

Don't believe much in luck but the numbers never lie...
I have always been very good at math, the combination of exquisite lust and infinite orgasms is a never ending equation... that intrinsic desire only grows, multiples...

Out of jail huh? well look at you bad boy... how long is it for this time?

Stolen kisses... oh yeah, they will definitely put you away for that...
You have to get it in writing... lol * cough *
Well glad they went easy on you so you are getting out soon.

There is escapism here for sure & it takes a trusting (not just thrusting) partner to deliver it correctly with just the right force, I'd imagine. One could simply follow your instruction... harder... HARDER! Lol. 😉

That's for sure, we are all trying to escape from something I suppose. Or perhaps it's just trust in one's own ability to be able to take it all no matter how much force is applied. But so much more than just thrusting... Yes, just follow the instruction in whatever form it comes... in the eyes, in the screams, gasps for air, shaking, or perhaps even a word or two. Begging for it to ... :p

No one writes erotica like you do. Super sexy as always.  

Great ink, friend 😁

P.S. love that pic.

Oh yeah, I love visits from the Devil's Child. ;) After all, the Devil does seem to want to always keep up with my desires. Damn! what a wonderful compliment that is, so happy you can feel it too. I am sure the Devil's Child has many dark desires and knows how to make a girl scream. :p I do love erotica! Always want to be super sexy. ;) Oh yes! that pic certainly captures some of the feeling here! Hard not to love it...

Hoi hoi
Fashionably late for the party?
Lovely poem, lovely emotions. It reads like a dream. And a inspiring picture to go with it.
It doesn’t get any better I guess?
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Hey there Johnny, you are never too late for the party. :)
So happy you found it lovely, and that you could feel my emotions.
Sometimes dreams can come true. ;)
The picture certainly sets the right mood I think...
And yeah, it doesn't get any better... Mmmmm....
I really appreciate you coming by to join the party!

Maximize the love hate – extract every last drop of unforgiving rough passion.

When the hints go unsolved; you just spell it out in bright neon lights on the largest billboard what you need and want. If this clue doesn’t solve the mystery, time to move on to another sleuth.

A trip to the furniture store may be needed after this romp. Or better yet, a call to a handy person to fix what’s broken.

Another superb “raw” poem by an expert in peeling back the onion and showing what’s at the core.  Unencumbered raw lust and submission.  The edge where stop and more blend into the same. Love the 2nd to last line. Great pic too.

Absolutely, why waste all the hate... It's such an intense emotion that can be harnessed into unforgiving rough passion. ;) Nothing wrong with being pushed hard... breaking all the boundaries.

The hints come fast and hard certainly they are displayed in bright neon, and naked skin... dilated pupils, sweat, and infinite need and want. Alas, the mystery of a woman's needs, wants, and desires only grow more intense the more you feed them. But even more so the desire to fulfill all of yours...

Hell yeah, that's the spirit... some heavy duty solid wood furniture is the way to go.

Raw is definitely at the core... Lust and submission... a highly volatile combination. Stop means more... ;) Have to go back and look at the 2nd to last line. The pic is definitely a sexy one.

Like angry fucks, with power and stamina, they tend to bring out the more raw, animalistic impulses that heighten the senses.
Great pen dear K.

Oh yes, an aggressive fuck fueled by raw animalistic impulses certainly heightens the senses, the feelings, and rocks the body hard. If you are going to channel that energy I cannot imagine a better place to put it than... * nevermind, naughty look * Great to see you Wally as always... Keep up that power and stamina... ;)

Interesting verses. (Although *interesting* is not the propper adjective)  
They make me wonder;... hardcore soothing daily routine and stress?
... ...  
What would you think of the following songlyrics?:
Pat Benatar *Sex As A Weapon*  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DD_d5mkZ52M

... ...

I like interesting... ;) Makes you want to explore things more doesn't it? Hardcore daily routine to reset the mind and body... and relieve stress. Really like the song, sex certainly can be used as weapon but the deeper it cuts the more you feel it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTFwQP86BRs

Nine Inch Nails - *Closer*  !  
Industrial rock...  I like it.  
... ... ...  
NIN's album * Hesitation Marks *  
Songs:
"The Eater of Dreams"
"Came Back Haunted"
"Disappointed"
"Satellite"
"Various Methods of Escape"
"While I'm Still Here"

... ... ... ...

Love the strength in this line
"Fuck me like you hate me..."

Hey there Fia! That's a lovely name. Nice to meet you... Yeah, I can tell you know what I am talking. ;) The more strength the wetter things get... Nothing quite like the intensity of some intense rough sex. :)

Thank you for the compliment. You have my attention.

you are right... I don't know you... but I'm scared to find out ... someone who can put out words of this magnitude

Oh yes! It's so right... don't be scared to find out. I am not too scary most of the time. * cough, innocent look * The words come from the body, mind, and soul; and an insatiable need to feel everything intensely... :)

Here I am back again
As usual, your writing makes readers salivate
You leave us breathless and immersed in your burning thought
I enjoyed your writing incendiary erotica

Welcome back MP, it's good to see you. :) I must admit I do love making people salivate and igniting that fiery passion. Breathless and immersed is perfect... I am so glad you can take part in my burning thoughts. ;) 'incendiary erotica' ooo I love how that sounds... so HOT!

That moment when shit gets real and no fucks given (pun kinda intended) is a sweet one, sometimes it's the only way to be.  Love this write waaaay too much lol ;)

Oh yeah, shit gets very real when she pisses you off enough that no fucks given... or shall we say the roughest fuck given. :p Still there will no doubt be many bite and claw marks on you as you push those boundaries of pain and pleasure... I know I bite and claw when very excited. And you can't love it too much damnit... ;) Oh to be punished... I am a very bad girl...

I can see that :p if she's not biting and clawing screaming and laughing you're not doing it right hahaha variety is the spice of life lol

Brutally indignant and seductive.  Fantastic write and emphatically legitimate.  Spontaneous savagery.  Anonymous sexual flagrancy.  What every woman wants from the man who deserves to give it to her because he's beautiful and built to do it.

and to the guys...
(Don't presuppose this is a call out to just anyone... if you have to ask, stand aside and watch)
This is for the takers.

Technical note:  Love how you use bold and italics to emphasize phrases here, Kristina.

Meg
xoxo

Hey Meg, well all I can think of right now is how much I need a sexy nurse. ;) (and you are incredibly sexy!)
So feel free to give me the really rough treatment anytime...

I do love your descriptions. I can tell you really get it which is no surprise. What every woman wants for sure, or at least us anyway p

The takers definitely know how to get things really wet. ;)

So happy you think the formatting adds to it. I must admit I am very impatient with the formatting but always hope it's worthwhile for some.

I hope someone is doing things that will keep that beautiful smile on your face this weekend. xoxo

I feel like i hate you....

lol Well inspiring intense emotions is what I do. ;) Because I have needs damnit! :p