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Our Dirty Secret
I could
Be a good girl
If I wanted to be
If you
Want me to be
We both know
That’s not
The way
It is
Nasty
Dirty
Sweaty and grimy
Carnal war
Then we
Wash it all off
Make me pretty
And do it again
Be a good girl
If I wanted to be
If you
Want me to be
We both know
That’s not
The way
It is
Nasty
Dirty
Sweaty and grimy
Carnal war
Then we
Wash it all off
Make me pretty
And do it again
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
Sometimes basic is best. No need for poetic words or romance and frills.
Sometimes basic is best. No need for poetic words or romance and frills.
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Re. Our Dirty Secret
1st Mar 2024 10:53pm
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1st Mar 2024 10:54pm
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1st Mar 2024 10:53pm
Agreed, there is a saying, "it is what it is." why complicate things? Tight one Lady
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Re. Our Dirty Secret
1st Mar 2024 10:57pm
I admit it I know I’m a BIT of a romantic, but I am enthralled by the raw “basic” animal instincts when it comes to the nitty gritty. ;)
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1st Mar 2024 11:02pm
You do write the most divine romantic poems, my friend.
Romance most certainly has its place, but there are times when raw primal urges are what’s called for. Glad you can appreciate this write.
Romance most certainly has its place, but there are times when raw primal urges are what’s called for. Glad you can appreciate this write.
Re. Our Dirty Secret
1st Mar 2024 11:04pm
Hardcore and rough then throw in some romance and sexiness and you got a perfect night with your partner. Fantastic poem.
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2nd Mar 2024 1:08am
I try to see it the blue collar way even though I'm a Grey collar bloke ...
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2nd Mar 2024 1:13am
Blue collar works, so does grey. I’m waiting for the day you show up in a profile pic sporting beige and shooting the bird.
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