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Lend Your Hand
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
Published 27th Feb 2024
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27th Feb 2024 2:15pm
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27th Feb 2024 7:07pm
Nice, brief poem, with encouraging morality. You make some good points and compare and contrast with your rhymes quite well. Sacrifice and long-suffering, though they may not be pleasant, are always important, particularly in relationships and community. This poem reminds me of that, and that's a pleasant reminder. Anyway, good job. Take care, and I'll see you around.
27th Feb 2024 9:09pm
Thank you Connotation for your feedback. Your words are truly appreciated.
