Inevitable

Cool senryu, lots of depth.
I’ve held it’s bony hand and we’re friends now.

Nice. A friend you can count on.
Thanks for reading. Appreciate it.

Nicely done...

Thanks!

Good job at using dense metaphorical analogy.  Makes for solid brevity.  "Shadows in our room" kind of implies a disposition, which could have several interpretations.  Nice double entendre in "death is observing."  It comes across to me that it could imply the act of observation can be death, as well as death itself is observing someone or something.

Appreciate the read. Thanks! Correct. I gave the reader the chance to make a determination on what they make think it means. Appreciate the comments.

You're welcome.  Leaving things open to interpretation can be quite the skill.  The only thing is if it's too ambiguous or abstract, it can go over the reader's head.  That being said, there is some great lyricism and poetry in ambiguous and abstract metaphors that offer multiple interpretation.  Makes room for uniqueness, individuality, and originality.  Anyway, I'm sure you're aware, hah.  Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for the comments. Some of my poems aren't poems, there just rants or ideas that came into mind. I throw them down and create a story or some abstract piece. I'm better at haiku's then writing something to intricate or heavy. Your poems are very detailed and show great skill. When I have a chance I'm going to read some more of your poems.

What really is "inevitable" is the will to create.  It can be simple, but if the inspiration is there, just about any idea can be worked out.  Takes the heart.

Valid point.

hello dearest Visions I'm so happy you are here with your dark writes they're brilliant I loved shadows in the room I can feel them here 💕

Thanks Crimsin. I enjoy writing a dark poem from time to time. Your awesome. Thanks for the feedback.

Last line is a knock out punch
Left me feeling....

BIG

Appreciate the read & feedback.

Killer senryú
(get it!?)

Har Har Har, I know... lame joke, couldn't help myself.

in all seriousness, I really enjoyed the creativity and brevity used.

Great work, K
🌹B

Good Morning Bluevelvete,

Thank you so much for reading & commenting. I appreciate you.

Best,
Keith

Dear KO,

What everyone else said. 👆🏻
I enjoyed (?) the macabre of this while appreciating the “that’s life” factor. So well done. H🌷

Thank you Honoria. Your words inspire!