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Abraham's Legacy
Few memes have spiked Western Civilisation more
than the vicious concept of ‘original sin’
a master-stroke of manipulation — its core?
The many are damned — a few self-righteous get in
Forced choice — binary division — heaven or hell
plus fear-guilt-shame tipped cleverly into the mix …
ask: whom does all this abject horror serve? Well, smell
the demon control-freaks with their carrots and sticks
Weird clothes and ceremonies embed the mystique
obscure language elevates the gate-keeper few
moulding group psychology with covert techniques
trapping innocent seekers, their minds in a stew
An atrocious track-record of violence and hate
cutting deals with despots, dictators and mad kings
pedophilia, brutal orphanages — their weight
desacralising Nature while the choir sings
Forever anti-women, their vain He-Man god,
jealous, partisan and vengeful, stokes the next war
spins stories of a ‘Promised Land’ … and gives the nod:
crusades, jihads, genocides — all godly and pure
Abrahamic ‘might-is-right’ spreads survival hell
the poor, defenceless and weak always take the brunt
the war industry pockets profits as “God’s Will”
religious pigs, when questioned, merely shrug and grunt
Popery, quackery, Protestant thwackery
the sick Abrahamic religions quench their thirst
with snowballing hate, belligerent pokery —
long due this deception was burst.
(after Heathcote Williams, 1941-2017)
than the vicious concept of ‘original sin’
a master-stroke of manipulation — its core?
The many are damned — a few self-righteous get in
Forced choice — binary division — heaven or hell
plus fear-guilt-shame tipped cleverly into the mix …
ask: whom does all this abject horror serve? Well, smell
the demon control-freaks with their carrots and sticks
Weird clothes and ceremonies embed the mystique
obscure language elevates the gate-keeper few
moulding group psychology with covert techniques
trapping innocent seekers, their minds in a stew
An atrocious track-record of violence and hate
cutting deals with despots, dictators and mad kings
pedophilia, brutal orphanages — their weight
desacralising Nature while the choir sings
Forever anti-women, their vain He-Man god,
jealous, partisan and vengeful, stokes the next war
spins stories of a ‘Promised Land’ … and gives the nod:
crusades, jihads, genocides — all godly and pure
Abrahamic ‘might-is-right’ spreads survival hell
the poor, defenceless and weak always take the brunt
the war industry pockets profits as “God’s Will”
religious pigs, when questioned, merely shrug and grunt
Popery, quackery, Protestant thwackery
the sick Abrahamic religions quench their thirst
with snowballing hate, belligerent pokery —
long due this deception was burst.
(after Heathcote Williams, 1941-2017)
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 10th Feb 2024
| Edited 27th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Heathcote Williams (1941-2017), actor, dramatist and activist poet, author of book-length poems such as Whale Nation, Autogeddon, Royal Babylon, American Porn..., and one of my heroes - I thought I'd try and honour him.
This poem is about the three Abrahamic religions (Judaism, Christianity, Islam) as institutions, and their negative impact on history.
It does not negate the actions of many wonderful people who have done many wonderful things in the name of one of these religions - or in the name of some other religion, or no religion.
(photo credit: Savannah Theis)
This poem is about the three Abrahamic religions (Judaism, Christianity, Islam) as institutions, and their negative impact on history.
It does not negate the actions of many wonderful people who have done many wonderful things in the name of one of these religions - or in the name of some other religion, or no religion.
(photo credit: Savannah Theis)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Abraham's Legacy
10th Feb 2024 11:44pm
Expertly summed, sir!
The Levantine influence on pathos and ethos has been the worst boat anchor to human progress ever, and then heinously compounded by capitalism in more recent times.
The Levantine influence on pathos and ethos has been the worst boat anchor to human progress ever, and then heinously compounded by capitalism in more recent times.
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18th Feb 2024 6:09pm
Thank you MS. If there were any 'good ideas' behind these religions, when they got institutionalised they quickly became 'bad ideologies', with all the attendant horrors of any ideology. RL much appreciated.
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I’m not religious, but I think Jesus was alright, and I think the old testament meant he never had a chance to change anything; the development of so called christianity going large was down to the romans, not to him
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18th Feb 2024 6:11pm
You're right; what were some great teachings got hi-jacked by the Romans. 'The Holy Roman Empire' says it all, in a way. Religion in the service of politics.
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11th Feb 2024 1:14am
And all of this time I thought God was about love.
Powerful write, Josh. On my RL.
hugs,
buddhakitty
Powerful write, Josh. On my RL.
hugs,
buddhakitty
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Thnaks BK, and for the RL. As an evangelical christianity survivor, it took me over two decades to subsequently unravel it all and disinfect myself. Part of that journey was the recognition of the inbuilt psychotic nature of a God who claims to be a God of love on the one hand, whilst simultaneously threatening hell on the other. Typical psycho-energy.
Re. Abraham's Legacy
11th Feb 2024 9:51am
Dear J,
When put into perspective as this I can see why atheism makes sense. I can really appreciate this outlook because the history is true. I continue to believe in a god but more in the form of light source. Outstanding piece. H🌷
When put into perspective as this I can see why atheism makes sense. I can really appreciate this outlook because the history is true. I continue to believe in a god but more in the form of light source. Outstanding piece. H🌷
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18th Feb 2024 6:24pm
Thank you H, and for your generous RL, { again :) }. I'm not sure exactly what an atheist 'believes' but I reckon it requires great faith to be an authentic atheist, that there is nothing but 'blind pitiless indifference' driving the universe. I've had too many 'other-worldly' experiences in life to believe there is nothing beyond the merely physical.
I think your understanding of god as a 'form of light source' is a good choice and more up my street too; and certainly a better image than a bearded he-man-god with a big stick.
I think your understanding of god as a 'form of light source' is a good choice and more up my street too; and certainly a better image than a bearded he-man-god with a big stick.
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11th Feb 2024 2:34pm
Bravo, Josh! Excellent write and oration. Spot on truth as well. I just said to someone yesterday that more people have been killed in the name of religion than for any other reason.
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18th Feb 2024 6:27pm
Thank you A for the acknowledgement; and RL. Justifying killing others takes on another level when you can bring religion into it. I guess that's why most political systems like to have a big religion on their side to add justification to their otherwise 'merely' geo-political reasoning.
Re. Abraham's Legacy
18th Feb 2024 6:16am
This has it all, love this descriptive deep dark dive ..Great inspiration, too. Just too bad it has to be all true ..
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Re: Re. Abraham's Legacy
18th Feb 2024 6:31pm
Hi PR, thank you for dropping in here again. It's that old thing of good ideas becoming bad ideologies as they get institutionalised; means justifying ends ... and if the ends have god's approval, then of course the means can go to town with even less restriction. (I see Gaza as a tragic case in point regarding Zionism).
Re. Abraham's Legacy
18th Feb 2024 5:35pm
Tough presentation but worthy of thought; thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace,
Oral
Oral
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Thank you for commenting, O. I've been wondering for some time how to present the negative impact of organised religion -- well..., this was the result. Lots of good people in the name of these religions have also done good stuff.
And these three monotheistic religions have some wisdom too, hidden away in their texts. It's a shame they so easily get hi-jacked by politics, or even offer their services to politics (as currently with the Russian Orthodix Church supporting Putin and the war in Ukraine). Hugs and peace also, Josh.
And these three monotheistic religions have some wisdom too, hidden away in their texts. It's a shame they so easily get hi-jacked by politics, or even offer their services to politics (as currently with the Russian Orthodix Church supporting Putin and the war in Ukraine). Hugs and peace also, Josh.
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22nd Feb 2024 2:16pm
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22nd Feb 2024 2:37pm
Wow; thanks Liam. In that case you will like Heathcote Williams who I was trying to 'honour' with my poem. You can find him on youtube. RL 🙏
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22nd Feb 2024 2:38pm
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22nd Feb 2024 2:53pm
Thank you yes I'm enjoying reading from him he was a playwriting as well
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22nd Feb 2024 5:45pm
Yes, he was a playwright too, but I'm not familiar with any of his plays.
I have a copy of his "Royal Babylon" book-length poem (which I think can be down-loaded for free, now). I have yet to read his book-length poem "Whale Nation" which brought him to prominence in the late 1980s.
I have a copy of his "Royal Babylon" book-length poem (which I think can be down-loaded for free, now). I have yet to read his book-length poem "Whale Nation" which brought him to prominence in the late 1980s.
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22nd Feb 2024 10:47pm
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10th Mar 2024 7:42am
Such a profound piece, dear Josh. Huge LOVE (into the reading list it goes)
"The many are damned — a few self-righteous get in" > unfortunately this has always been the case and will probably always be the case too. Fortunately more and more people are taking their blindfolds off and speak up.
"Popery, quackery, Protestant thwackery" > enjoyed the wording tremendeously!
It's great to hear your voice, gives the poem some extra punch.
...will read some of your other work too (stil landing, still catching up)
"The many are damned — a few self-righteous get in" > unfortunately this has always been the case and will probably always be the case too. Fortunately more and more people are taking their blindfolds off and speak up.
"Popery, quackery, Protestant thwackery" > enjoyed the wording tremendeously!
It's great to hear your voice, gives the poem some extra punch.
...will read some of your other work too (stil landing, still catching up)
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10th Mar 2024 12:57pm
Thank you Duende, as an evangelical christianity survivor I always believed one day recovery from religiosity-PTSD would have to have a poetic output or two of 'revenge' -- or perhaps 'clear seeing' :) RL much appreciated, Josh.
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10th Mar 2024 1:44pm
You're welcome Josh.
I was raised catholic, which comes with quite a story (I've written a poem about it which will be here in a bit) so I hear you on the religiosity PTSD.
Thanks for sharing this gem!
I was raised catholic, which comes with quite a story (I've written a poem about it which will be here in a bit) so I hear you on the religiosity PTSD.
Thanks for sharing this gem!
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Re. Abraham's Legacy
13th Mar 2024 10:08am
Poor old Abraham, if he'd known what kind of mess he started...
This poem captures the whole bloody history of Christianity so well, presented as the Religion of Love, while stabbing its followers in the back.
Looks like many of us come from a lineage of multiple generations of religious-trauma-survivors. No wonder it's taking us so long to recover.
I agree with Dartford, Jesus didn't stand a chance.
This poem captures the whole bloody history of Christianity so well, presented as the Religion of Love, while stabbing its followers in the back.
Looks like many of us come from a lineage of multiple generations of religious-trauma-survivors. No wonder it's taking us so long to recover.
I agree with Dartford, Jesus didn't stand a chance.
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13th Mar 2024 3:43pm
If it was a 'homeopathic' recovery, then that's one month for every year it's been going on. So 2000/12 = 167 years, starting from when the remedy is taken, and with a family lineage that's on the case in each generation. (just a thought) 💜