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skyline (dismembered)
that sky
panicked,
the blueness
of
the clouds
and storm
caused
aftershocks,
it's bones
being
dismembered,
grey eyes
welling up,
trembling,
dropping
heavy tears.
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Re. skyline (dismembered)
10th Feb 2024 5:20pm
The metaphoric use is just so damn pretty...
Excellently poeted, J
Ty for sharing
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Excellently poeted, J
Ty for sharing
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:40pm
Agree with Blue...your use of metaphor here ties so much together. Very beautifully crafted

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