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Çold Coffee
I left you
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
Published 9th Feb 2024
| Edited 13th Feb 2024
Author's Note
No sugar
Just the facts
Miraculous
Just the facts
Miraculous
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9th Feb 2024 5:21pm
9th Feb 2024 8:13pm
I take everyone one on one.
Hearts are in the eye of the beholder I believe ...
Hearts are in the eye of the beholder I believe ...
9th Feb 2024 5:22pm
9th Feb 2024 8:14pm
9th Feb 2024 5:40pm
While I drink tea, every now and again I have to have a good, hot cup of coffee! The only problem is when you order in restaurants and it's lukewarm. Ick!
9th Feb 2024 8:15pm
Hot and cold is a clever comparison to use in this, and the last three lines cap it off nicely. Love is the magnet that pulls people together, it seems.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
9th Feb 2024 8:16pm
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10th Feb 2024 00:36am
Coffee and tea have always been companions of my happiness and sorrow.. witnesses of emotions.. Well you wrote beautifully.. Temperature rising n all...
10th Feb 2024 00:57am
The poems come to me in a flash and I write them before they can get away.
I’ve always said I could write a sex poem faster than someone could fry an egg …
Thx d
I’ve always said I could write a sex poem faster than someone could fry an egg …
Thx d
10th Feb 2024 1:01am
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10th Feb 2024 1:52am
It's not unheard of for me to find a cup of coffee in some weird place in the house that I've forgotten for hours... always a welcome surprise!
Leaving happens... it's the coming back that keeps things hot.
❤️k
Leaving happens... it's the coming back that keeps things hot.
❤️k
10th Feb 2024 1:55am
10th Feb 2024 2:08am
There's too much I'm not saying these days. Time to get writing again...
14th Feb 2024 2:04am
10th Feb 2024 3:22am
I enjoyed reading this article about being hot and cold like a cup of coffee ☕️ nicely done my friend 😏🤞
10th Feb 2024 3:49am
I tried to tie it all together.
Needs and wants.
Appreciate your comment Stoney.
Grab a cup
Thx
Needs and wants.
Appreciate your comment Stoney.
Grab a cup
Thx
16th Feb 2024 3:47am
10th Feb 2024 4:41am
Dear PS,
Loved the play on words in this write. For me, While it’s coffee it’s also some relationships with people I find can run hot and cold, gone away and come back, I thoroughly enjoyed this fast paced write. Now where can I get some hot tea? 😊🫖H 🌷
Loved the play on words in this write. For me, While it’s coffee it’s also some relationships with people I find can run hot and cold, gone away and come back, I thoroughly enjoyed this fast paced write. Now where can I get some hot tea? 😊🫖H 🌷
10th Feb 2024 12:59pm
Dear H,
Yes, I wrote this in about 2 minutes.
Had the idea, was drinking a cup, caffeine jolt poetry.
I should know more about tea but I don’t. Herbal and Organic ginger lemon is as far as I can go …
Many are fond of Earl Grey.
I can’t argue with that but I love women …
Thx babe
Xx
Yes, I wrote this in about 2 minutes.
Had the idea, was drinking a cup, caffeine jolt poetry.
I should know more about tea but I don’t. Herbal and Organic ginger lemon is as far as I can go …
Many are fond of Earl Grey.
I can’t argue with that but I love women …
Thx babe
Xx
10th Feb 2024 8:19pm
10th Feb 2024 9:10pm
"We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising"
"No sugar
Just the facts
Miraculous"
....a man's sexy hand holding something brilliant....
what is said man holding on to?
<3
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising"
"No sugar
Just the facts
Miraculous"
....a man's sexy hand holding something brilliant....
what is said man holding on to?
<3
12th Feb 2024 12:38pm
It's a cup of Joe
Innocent and thought provoking
Where would we be without Joe ??
Innocent and thought provoking
Where would we be without Joe ??
13th Feb 2024 1:44am
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12th Feb 2024 9:45pm
Oh man, now I need a coffee! Love the poem...for its simplicity, its imagery and its depth!
Kept it simple Willow
Just like a cup of deli coffee yet with a lot of story to tell.
Wrote itself
BIG
Thanks W
Just like a cup of deli coffee yet with a lot of story to tell.
Wrote itself
BIG
Thanks W
17th Feb 2024 7:36pm
Nothing like a nice brew to make the heart beat faster (in all it's metaphorical meaning of course).
BL
BL
18th Feb 2024 00:46am
Nothing like that elevated feeling with your morning cup.
Eyes wide open, anything is possible …
Thanks Wally
Dig the BL
Eyes wide open, anything is possible …
Thanks Wally
Dig the BL
9th Mar 2024 3:24pm
9th Mar 2024 3:51pm
You got me to comment #40 … I love that !
Sitting at 39 was hard
Yeah, something about coffee that is a metaphor for life stories. Such a simple need for most but so intrinsic in stature and eye opening …
Thx so much for your comment and RL !
Means a lot to me
Sitting at 39 was hard
Yeah, something about coffee that is a metaphor for life stories. Such a simple need for most but so intrinsic in stature and eye opening …
Thx so much for your comment and RL !
Means a lot to me
