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Brooding
First day of Spring
Cold
Windy
I’m brooding
Not because I love heat
It’s not that
It’s something else
I could tell you my feelings
Won’t burden you
Darkness consumes me
I welcome the brutal truth
Because truth is rare
I walk lonely, dog by my side
Time is an invoice
You pay or else face the consequences
Cold
Windy
I’m brooding
Not because I love heat
It’s not that
It’s something else
I could tell you my feelings
Won’t burden you
Darkness consumes me
I welcome the brutal truth
Because truth is rare
I walk lonely, dog by my side
Time is an invoice
You pay or else face the consequences
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Brooding
19th Mar 2024 6:46pm
This is one dark piece of writing. Truth is rare for most to speak without lies. Your poem & the painting are superb! Nicely executed.
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19th Mar 2024 6:54pm
Thank you K.O.
Yes I go dark sometimes.
Usually I have a painting to fit my moods.
I’ll be ok, just expressing
Thanks 🙏
Yes I go dark sometimes.
Usually I have a painting to fit my moods.
I’ll be ok, just expressing
Thanks 🙏
Re. Brooding
19th Mar 2024 8:48pm
Brooding on the long-anticipated first day of Spring. And we've had many of those.
Invoice say five-hundret dolla
Invoice say five-hundret dolla
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19th Mar 2024 8:57pm
I’d pay up happily if this damn melancholy wasn’t consuming me. I hope we don’t get any
National Melancholy Days anytime soon …
Thanks Kii_Ahn
National Melancholy Days anytime soon …
Thanks Kii_Ahn
Re. Brooding
19th Mar 2024 10:29pm
Sometimes you just have to sink into the brooding for a bit. Here's a nice dark accompaniment for you:
https://youtu.be/LG-ulPwpz10?si=nskzTpJrxsWpjXmk
Then, look at those beautiful doggie eyes, get a few kisses, and pick yourself up.
Great art & words - love how you express yourself.
xx
❤️k
https://youtu.be/LG-ulPwpz10?si=nskzTpJrxsWpjXmk
Then, look at those beautiful doggie eyes, get a few kisses, and pick yourself up.
Great art & words - love how you express yourself.
xx
❤️k
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19th Mar 2024 11:33pm
Thanks Super K
I'll be just fine, just one of those off key days.
Doesn't mean shit to a tree ...
Appreciate your comment and for looking out for me
🤠❤💖
I'll be just fine, just one of those off key days.
Doesn't mean shit to a tree ...
Appreciate your comment and for looking out for me
🤠❤💖
Re. Brooding
19th Mar 2024 11:02pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VgurldoZISI
I love the painting and the emotions expressed ❤️
I love the painting and the emotions expressed ❤️
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19th Mar 2024 11:35pm
Dark and brooding
Yeah, sometimes that's me.
Black is my sunshine
Thanks Brenda
🖤💛🖤
Yeah, sometimes that's me.
Black is my sunshine
Thanks Brenda
🖤💛🖤
Re. Brooding
Orgasmic bilss over and over again is making her happy. Keep on writing.
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19th Mar 2024 11:35pm
Re. Brooding
20th Mar 2024 00:54am
BIG LIKE!
Time is an invoice. Just wow. I wish I had thought of that. Sometimes the paintings overshadow the poetry, or the paintings and poetry are balanced; however, this poetry knocked the painting out of the park.
And, yes, we Scorpios thrive on truth. The rawer the better.
Time is an invoice. Just wow. I wish I had thought of that. Sometimes the paintings overshadow the poetry, or the paintings and poetry are balanced; however, this poetry knocked the painting out of the park.
And, yes, we Scorpios thrive on truth. The rawer the better.
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Yes
We Scorpios thrive on truth despite what the truth might deliver at times. Raw should be our middle names, agree …
I’m flattered that you think the poem blows away the painting. Brooding takes on a life of it’s own. It must be written to excommunicate it from out tortured souls.
I feel better now.
Thank you lovely Ahavati, eternally grateful for your comment and RL
Appreciate you !
We Scorpios thrive on truth despite what the truth might deliver at times. Raw should be our middle names, agree …
I’m flattered that you think the poem blows away the painting. Brooding takes on a life of it’s own. It must be written to excommunicate it from out tortured souls.
I feel better now.
Thank you lovely Ahavati, eternally grateful for your comment and RL
Appreciate you !
Re. Brooding
20th Mar 2024 3:04am
Same. But I am hot and sweaty. Maybe for the right/wrong reasons.
This should be hanging in my home. Love it. <3
This should be hanging in my home. Love it. <3
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20th Mar 2024 11:31am
Yeah, brooding is an Artist's best friend.
Get lost in my spiritual moodiness, it will never let you down !!
Thx for all !!
Get lost in my spiritual moodiness, it will never let you down !!
Thx for all !!
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23rd Mar 2024 1:17am
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24th Mar 2024 9:18pm
Flossing is majorly important for oral and over all health.
My question is, do you floss in the nude? <3
My question is, do you floss in the nude? <3
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24th Mar 2024 9:33pm
Usually just wearing my Under Armour microfiber man boxer panties that are luxuriously soft ...
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25th Mar 2024 1:10am
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25th Mar 2024 1:50am
It is
I don't like to wear clothes much at home ...
All purpose near nudity ..
I don't like to wear clothes much at home ...
All purpose near nudity ..
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25th Mar 2024 2:29am
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25th Mar 2024 2:31am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/470239-flossing-not-a-sex-poem-but-could-be/
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20th Mar 2024 4:41am
Dear PS,
Solid write. Lonely, so get it. This piece had me reflecting on all the conversations I have in my head because I’m lonely sometimes. And other times…well…who knows? This poem is just amazing. Awesome. H🌷
Solid write. Lonely, so get it. This piece had me reflecting on all the conversations I have in my head because I’m lonely sometimes. And other times…well…who knows? This poem is just amazing. Awesome. H🌷
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Re: Re. Brooding
20th Mar 2024 11:34am
Dear H,
You know when I wrote it I knew it wasn't just about me. I wrote it for all of us who often feel the juxtaposition between elated and down in the frigging dumps ... So yeah, thus for you too H ... With moody art too !
Stay tuned babe
Thx !!
You know when I wrote it I knew it wasn't just about me. I wrote it for all of us who often feel the juxtaposition between elated and down in the frigging dumps ... So yeah, thus for you too H ... With moody art too !
Stay tuned babe
Thx !!
Re. Brooding
20th Mar 2024 10:31am
Time doesn't heal all wounds, it walks us through them. Just keep walking and you will be struck by a new thing. There is an amazing depth to you and your painting. See you on the sidewalk.
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20th Mar 2024 11:40am
Yeah Thor
As much as I want things to be like they were back in time, they're not. So I use that energy in art and words. Your support is phenomenal Mister.
Stay tuned, more Art soon, words are always floating.
Thx !!
As much as I want things to be like they were back in time, they're not. So I use that energy in art and words. Your support is phenomenal Mister.
Stay tuned, more Art soon, words are always floating.
Thx !!
Re. Brooding
20th Mar 2024 11:20am
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20th Mar 2024 11:43am
Yes he did
And you say them as well !
Appreciate your courage and blatant sexuality.
I'm gonna rock till I drop for I am the great unknown artist and poet who won't sell out ..
Thx
🤠❤
And you say them as well !
Appreciate your courage and blatant sexuality.
I'm gonna rock till I drop for I am the great unknown artist and poet who won't sell out ..
Thx
🤠❤
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21st Mar 2024 9:26am
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20th Mar 2024 2:14pm
I always like your paintings but sometimes forget to tell you... N yaa thank you for your compliment ❤
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20th Mar 2024 3:59pm
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21st Mar 2024 8:41pm
I only lie to protect when the the truth is so ghastly …
That’s usually in a business sense …
That’s usually in a business sense …
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Re. Brooding
Cold weather tends to do that, it's a mood changer. But I'm sure your doggy makes for great company on those early morning walks.
BL
BL
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Yeah Wally
The hound is a sweetheart. Got some ocd issues but who doesn’t ??
She’s a great companion and keeps me moving
Thx W
The hound is a sweetheart. Got some ocd issues but who doesn’t ??
She’s a great companion and keeps me moving
Thx W