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Grace Beautiful One
gentle faith I feel it all
rising grace hold me tightly
within my sacredness I doubt
forgive me
beautiful hope see me true
inside the holy dark
help me to grow
learning my place in the garden grown
a sunflower beholding your truth
not shying from your beauty
so in love with you
with looks of longing
they faint inside
help me to explain
the things I hear and see heavenly
chaste of vision
lest I speak arrogantly
proverbs of the Exalted
please chastise me
when I go astray
I wish so badly to be given a place
in the celestial kingdom
Published 10th Nov 2023
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10th Nov 2023 11:41pm
Your words evoke such strong sensations, curiousness and emotions. Well done.
10th Nov 2023 11:46pm
10th Nov 2023 11:48pm
10th Nov 2023 11:49pm
aw thank you dearest poet for feeling me so passionately I hope you have a beautiful Evening as may be the case 💕
10th Nov 2023 11:52pm
It's almost one in the morning here
Your writing really makes us feel your feelings
Your writing really makes us feel your feelings
11th Nov 2023 1:12am
11th Nov 2023 00:02am
11th Nov 2023 1:13am
thank you graciously dearest Ron I hope you have a lovely evening love and light 💕
11th Nov 2023 2:32am
There is so much beauty in this.
The yearning for wisdom explained in your unique style.
Finding our place here and the here after.
The yearning for wisdom explained in your unique style.
Finding our place here and the here after.
11th Nov 2023 3:31am
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11th Nov 2023 11:46pm
That's a beautiful poem to Grace.
“Grace is the voice that calls us to change and then gives us the power to pull it off.” – Max Lucado
Awesome poem, dear Crimsin.
“Grace is the voice that calls us to change and then gives us the power to pull it off.” – Max Lucado
Awesome poem, dear Crimsin.
12th Nov 2023 00:37am
19th Nov 2023 3:20am
Like a prayer, this felt very humble, to communicate in such a way it connects to the universe and to other readers as well.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
19th Nov 2023 3:32am
thank you Wally for understanding I am saying a prayer to help me explain what really I don't understand... I deeply appreciate you 💕
