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Daydreamer
A daydreamer full of aspirations
kisses the sky
Observing the mortal realm
wandering as she goes
Keen child of wonderment
revolving in strength
don't underestimate the power of love
Vulnerability peaks and the energies surge
revealing another wavelength undisturbed
Evolving in dreamtime
to flex wings unused previously
Turning in the elements
to spin on the backs of paper elephants
Marching over time
swept up in the moment
breaking the brittle dawn
Sister to knowledge
tiny motivator
on the grander scale
her Father wages war
the great equalizer
Gentle faith rises to greet him
as a thousand eyes watch
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Re. Daydreamer
11th Nov 2023 5:19am
nothing wrong with daydreaming, but don't let it carry you too far away from reality
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Re: Re. Daydreamer
12th Nov 2023 00:26am
hello dearest Wolf of course but sometime imagining things as they could be is a relief 💕thank you for your insight...
Re. Daydreamer
11th Nov 2023 7:34am
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12th Nov 2023 00:27am
Re. Daydreamer
11th Nov 2023 1:36pm
Beautiful display of poetic balance and prowess, words linked together like a strong chain of thought, unbreakable.
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12th Nov 2023 00:28am
Re. Daydreamer
11th Nov 2023 2:06pm
That 2nd stanza is so incredibly powerful. Love & vulnerability are 2 of the most beautiful & strong forces there are. Beautiful poem, Brenda
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12th Nov 2023 00:30am
Re. Daydreamer
11th Nov 2023 4:34pm
From one daydreamer to another this speaks of the journey. There is always guidance as well as pitfalls, and of course the watchers. Really amazing write.
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12th Nov 2023 00:35am
Re. Daydreamer
12th Nov 2023 00:09am
I am a day dreamer...dreams of roses and unicorns, of falling stars on midnight black hair, of kisses and hugs on a summer day. I love your poem, dear talented Crimsin:)
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12th Nov 2023 00:36am
thank you beautiful Grace for the love on this write I hope you have a lovely evening 💕
Re. Daydreamer
12th Nov 2023 8:18pm
Whoa! Coincidently I posted a daydream one today, unknowing til now about yours. Yours is so ethereal, like a true dream should be. I like the ones that make me feel at peace. This one does that. Wonderfully written, Crims.
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Re: Re. Daydreamer
19th Nov 2023 3:27am
hello dearest Styxian sorry for the late reply I saw your poem it was beautiful about your dad teaching you 💕
Re. Daydreamer
19th Nov 2023 3:22am
Your painting scenes and emotions with a deep sense of wonder and love.
Amazing work.
Amazing work.
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Re: Re. Daydreamer
19th Nov 2023 3:28am
I love our creator for the good and through the bad thank you Wally I'm in love with him...