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Cotton Candy Man
300 Cotton thread count
Cinnamon sugar sheets
Dizzy spinning around
Melting me at 300 degrees
Into liquified sugar
With his candy hands
Finding all of my
Four sweet soft spots
I’m smiling dying
Keeping me breathless
Addicting him to
Tonight and dopamine
He’s smiling humming
Completely shameless
Taking small bites
Here and everywhere
Watching ourselves
In our mirrored dresser
Making a licking
Sticky candied mess
He’s taking his sweet time
My Cotton Candy Man
I’m making him all mine
With fine sugary strands
Cinnamon sugar sheets
Dizzy spinning around
Melting me at 300 degrees
Into liquified sugar
With his candy hands
Finding all of my
Four sweet soft spots
I’m smiling dying
Keeping me breathless
Addicting him to
Tonight and dopamine
He’s smiling humming
Completely shameless
Taking small bites
Here and everywhere
Watching ourselves
In our mirrored dresser
Making a licking
Sticky candied mess
He’s taking his sweet time
My Cotton Candy Man
I’m making him all mine
With fine sugary strands
Published 29th Oct 2023
Author's Note
Wanted to write about candy since it's Halloween - but this song came on and it
turned into something else. LOL
It's fun:)
Blu DeTiger - Cotton Candy Lemonade
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-oAK1lTliU
turned into something else. LOL
It's fun:)
Blu DeTiger - Cotton Candy Lemonade
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-oAK1lTliU
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29th Oct 2023 3:39am
30th Oct 2023 11:50pm
Hey LDF!!
I'm kinda addicted to comfy soft cotton sheets. haha
Had to add that in somewhere.
Happy Halloween!
Be sure to eat a huge gyro with
lots of tzatziki sauce for me.
Love the stuff!!
I'm kinda addicted to comfy soft cotton sheets. haha
Had to add that in somewhere.
Happy Halloween!
Be sure to eat a huge gyro with
lots of tzatziki sauce for me.
Love the stuff!!
29th Oct 2023 3:46am
This is indeed a little naughty but in a sweet way Lady. You are very talented don't be afraid to show it, this is tight
30th Oct 2023 11:54pm
Hey Meme!
It is isn't it!!
Wanted to write something with extra heat
and little spin of sugar. hehehe
Thanks for stopping by and taking a read amigo!
It's always appreciated:)
It is isn't it!!
Wanted to write something with extra heat
and little spin of sugar. hehehe
Thanks for stopping by and taking a read amigo!
It's always appreciated:)
Anonymous
29th Oct 2023 3:47am
Oh my!
This was definitely a confection for the senses.
My sweet tooth has been fed
Thank you for posting this wonderful
Write
This was definitely a confection for the senses.
My sweet tooth has been fed
Thank you for posting this wonderful
Write
30th Oct 2023 11:57pm
Hey Confluence:)
Thanks for your snaps on this. It's not my usual jam
but I'm rolling with it:) Just heard the song and thought
about cotton and candy as two separate things. Then started blending
and this is what I came up with.
I love the challenge of
saying it without saying it:)
Thanks for your snaps on this. It's not my usual jam
but I'm rolling with it:) Just heard the song and thought
about cotton and candy as two separate things. Then started blending
and this is what I came up with.
I love the challenge of
saying it without saying it:)
29th Oct 2023 4:02am
Yuk! I mean yum! It's just the mess it could cause, right? Do you really want that sweet candy all over your mush (mouth) & in your hair, lol?
31st Oct 2023 00:01am
Hey Billy:)
It is a mess but that's what
showers are for - that can be part 2!
later gator!
It is a mess but that's what
showers are for - that can be part 2!
later gator!
29th Oct 2023 4:28am
Dear A,
Definitely a double entendre write that makes the reader smile like mad in any direction they want to go. 😊
Very enjoyable and uplifting song/poem that makes us all crave some candy cotton or otherwise 🍫🍬🍭🍡 H🌷
Definitely a double entendre write that makes the reader smile like mad in any direction they want to go. 😊
Very enjoyable and uplifting song/poem that makes us all crave some candy cotton or otherwise 🍫🍬🍭🍡 H🌷
31st Oct 2023 00:06am
Hi H!!
That's the challenge isn't it - to say it without saying it. Sometimes
it's better to let the reader decide where to go with some detailed hints.
Letting them be the director.
It's all part of the fun of writing.
It's always great to hear from ya amiga:)
Thanks for the RL too!
That's the challenge isn't it - to say it without saying it. Sometimes
it's better to let the reader decide where to go with some detailed hints.
Letting them be the director.
It's all part of the fun of writing.
It's always great to hear from ya amiga:)
Thanks for the RL too!
29th Oct 2023 5:00am
31st Oct 2023 00:08am
29th Oct 2023 6:55am
Like the double-entendre of this write. Favourite line, for alliteration:
Four sweet soft spots [which you have left to imagination]
Four sweet soft spots [which you have left to imagination]
31st Oct 2023 00:11am
Hi Sol:)
Some things are better left to the imagination.
I think it's easier for the reader to put themselves
into the story that way.
thank you so much for the read and comment amigo:)
Some things are better left to the imagination.
I think it's easier for the reader to put themselves
into the story that way.
thank you so much for the read and comment amigo:)
29th Oct 2023 9:39am
31st Oct 2023 00:16am
29th Oct 2023 12:30pm
31st Oct 2023 00:20am
Hey Cipher:)
Thanks for your snaps amigo.
Wanted to try something that is different from my
usual writing but still have my voice to it.
Hope that makes sense. LOL
Thanks for your snaps amigo.
Wanted to try something that is different from my
usual writing but still have my voice to it.
Hope that makes sense. LOL
29th Oct 2023 1:02pm
Your man is bring you "his candy". Enjoy your man's candy. Keep on writing.
31st Oct 2023 00:21am
29th Oct 2023 3:32pm
And the salt of our skin....
I like how you retain details of conversations... (which may be used against me down the road! Lol)
It's beyond a sugar rush now. I want your cinnamon skin on my tongue. And your moans humming against my neck, making my pulse do double beats.
Your write here is testament to your ability to weave art from reality.
You're incredible.
I like how you retain details of conversations... (which may be used against me down the road! Lol)
It's beyond a sugar rush now. I want your cinnamon skin on my tongue. And your moans humming against my neck, making my pulse do double beats.
Your write here is testament to your ability to weave art from reality.
You're incredible.
31st Oct 2023 00:30am
Well hey honey:)
Oh my - what a comment!!
You're throwing me off with how to reply! But I'm
going to put my big girl panties on and try. hehehe
I know you have a sweet tooth and like to take bites!
We always have fun when we're together so I wanted to exude
that chemistry towards the bedroom in this write. I wasn't going to post this but I'm proud of what we share - so yeah - I posted:)
No you're incredible - wanna know why - cause you're going to
put your big boy boxers on and take me to the mall:)))
MWAAAAA!!
Oh my - what a comment!!
You're throwing me off with how to reply! But I'm
going to put my big girl panties on and try. hehehe
I know you have a sweet tooth and like to take bites!
We always have fun when we're together so I wanted to exude
that chemistry towards the bedroom in this write. I wasn't going to post this but I'm proud of what we share - so yeah - I posted:)
No you're incredible - wanna know why - cause you're going to
put your big boy boxers on and take me to the mall:)))
MWAAAAA!!
31st Oct 2023 00:43am
That whole mall bit just brought out my stoic avatar!
Fine, I will wear my big boy boxers and go. But I'm wearing my Jameson hat and some shoes, too. Lol.
Fine, I will wear my big boy boxers and go. But I'm wearing my Jameson hat and some shoes, too. Lol.
31st Oct 2023 00:49am
You are nothing but adorable. Even when frowning and being
stern and serious!! hehehe
stern and serious!! hehehe
30th Oct 2023 12:49pm
so sweet...
the wit you so so possess,
always with that class
you wrangle the words,
much more do they convey, not less
ah, that sweetness...
how many reads...
how many licks,
does it take to not make the toostie roll last.
enjoyable
as my mind translates the poetic seed.
the wit you so so possess,
always with that class
you wrangle the words,
much more do they convey, not less
ah, that sweetness...
how many reads...
how many licks,
does it take to not make the toostie roll last.
enjoyable
as my mind translates the poetic seed.
31st Oct 2023 00:45am
Hey Mystic!!
Well hey there buddy!!
hahahaha
You are quite the poet mister.
This comment shows that:)
Hope you stick around and post a few more
poems.
Okay my turn - lets see here
The mystic of mysteries
of tossed stones
creating currents
of written lines
waves of circles
coming and going
never knowing
when the tossed poem
is the last one
______________
Glad to see you pop in buddy:)
Well hey there buddy!!
hahahaha
You are quite the poet mister.
This comment shows that:)
Hope you stick around and post a few more
poems.
Okay my turn - lets see here
The mystic of mysteries
of tossed stones
creating currents
of written lines
waves of circles
coming and going
never knowing
when the tossed poem
is the last one
______________
Glad to see you pop in buddy:)
6th Nov 2023 1:35am
This is so sweet I just want to eat you. * nevermind, innocent look *
Damn girl, you are sweetest kind of candy.
How could he not be addicted... I know he is. :p
But he better watch out because I might want to make you all mine. ;)
This is some wonderful erotica Chica, love it.
Damn girl, you are sweetest kind of candy.
How could he not be addicted... I know he is. :p
But he better watch out because I might want to make you all mine. ;)
This is some wonderful erotica Chica, love it.
6th Nov 2023 1:51am
Hi Kristina:)
This comment gave me a sweet toothy smile. hahahaha
You flatter me!!
I'm so happy you enjoyed. It was fun to write.
He's a cotton kind of guy
I'm a candy kind of girl .
So I wanted to blend something that was fun.
So happy to see you!!
Thanks for the RL too!
You are awesome!
This comment gave me a sweet toothy smile. hahahaha
You flatter me!!
I'm so happy you enjoyed. It was fun to write.
He's a cotton kind of guy
I'm a candy kind of girl .
So I wanted to blend something that was fun.
So happy to see you!!
Thanks for the RL too!
You are awesome!
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18th Apr 2024 1:56am
Hi Sam,
I was having fun with this write.
A lot of truth and a lot of metaphors. LOL
thanks for the visit!
I was having fun with this write.
A lot of truth and a lot of metaphors. LOL
thanks for the visit!
