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Fall winds carry fluttering leaves through the air
Waves crashing upon this rocky shoreline
Ticking like strikes on a clock as I count the moments
The moments until this void in my chest is filled
Long has it been since you left these rocky shores
Long still has been my search for your replacement
As a ship that travels vast waters from harbor to port
Waiting for a cove to weigh anchor and call home
Waves crashing upon this rocky shoreline
Ticking like strikes on a clock as I count the moments
The moments until this void in my chest is filled
Long has it been since you left these rocky shores
Long still has been my search for your replacement
As a ship that travels vast waters from harbor to port
Waiting for a cove to weigh anchor and call home
Published 26th Oct 2023
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26th Oct 2023 2:01am
Hey, there you are…
Love this second poem from you. How long do we have to wait for a third (fourth, fifth…)?
Love this second poem from you. How long do we have to wait for a third (fourth, fifth…)?
26th Oct 2023 4:54am
26th Oct 2023 12:16pm
As long as you're sailing & not adrift, you'll find your destination. 🙂
27th Oct 2023 3:11am
This is really reaching out in its expression towards an emotional feel. I like the overall theme, as the metaphor suits the "adventure." The season of autumn could've been more intertwined, if I were to offer advice. Otherwise, this is heartfelt, and succinct. I hope you dare to venture into further development of your artistry.
