utterances of sin

sometimes words are not always needed

this is true thank you dearest Wolf for reading and commenting 💕

I like your use of the shorter form here. It carries a stronger impact than it would have if it was longer, I think.

thank you dearest Jack thank you I agree I was going to make it longer because I struggle with brevity... I'm happy the power of the poem wasn't lost in the wordiness I am good for usually...

The thoughts, words, and actions, somewhat patterned in opposition, transparent to vicarious juxtaposition, supposed upon the dichotomy, beckoning to belong.

thank you graciously dearest Connotation for such an intelligent comment 💕

Dear B,

Very impactful. This makes me think how often I’ve been in this predicament and really regret opening my mouth. Not a word wasted here. Excellent piece. H🌷

hello beautiful Honoria thank you graciously love one 💕 for understanding...

This really resonated with me.
I love this so much.
Your word choice is brilliant.

thank you graciously dearest poet I love hearing from you 💕

Sometimes words escape from our lips way way way before we can think of the consequences.             Kisses, Robert.

hello dearest Robert it's true they do I am a talker sometimes you know? thank you my friend 💕

Or Its doubt creeping across your mind like smoke across lips. There's power in the brevity of this poetic puff. 💖

thank you graciously beautiful Ahavati perhaps doubt I deeply appreciate your insight 💕

Awkward! That is how it reads to me. No fancy reply needed here. I hope the words won't hang in the air for too long as this suspense is even killing me! Excellent write! 👌

thank you dearest Billy love your comment 💕

And this brevity delivers quite the message.
Well done.