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Black Hole Heart
My black hole heart
will suck in every ounce of love you give
and still be
empty
Once your acts of kindness
cross my event horizon
no matter how monumental your efforts
they will be crushed by the gravity of my need
into an infinitesimal
meaningless
speck
until you are
ultimately
frustrated to tears
and leave me
bereft
.
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Re. Black Hole Heart
Dear K,
This reads exactly how I live each day! How clever of you to know and put it to poetry. The amount of guilt I inflict on myself for exhibiting similar thoughts and actions leads me down a rabbit hole do deep I’m never getting out. Ooof, this is rough seeing in black and white. Excellently put, with a raw finesse I really appreciated and overtly admire. H🌷
This reads exactly how I live each day! How clever of you to know and put it to poetry. The amount of guilt I inflict on myself for exhibiting similar thoughts and actions leads me down a rabbit hole do deep I’m never getting out. Ooof, this is rough seeing in black and white. Excellently put, with a raw finesse I really appreciated and overtly admire. H🌷
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Re: Re. Black Hole Heart
25th Sep 2023 3:58pm
I'm still unpacking this myself. It feels ugly.
Thanks for your kindness.
❤️k
Thanks for your kindness.
❤️k
Re. Black Hole Heart
25th Sep 2023 2:21am
wowee beautiful Broken One I can really relate to this write it's me too
I hate that I'm like that as well but none the less there it is... great write painful too ❤️
I hate that I'm like that as well but none the less there it is... great write painful too ❤️
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25th Sep 2023 3:59pm
Thanks, Brenda. It's definitely not a comfortable write. But I'm glad I'm not alone here.
❤️k
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Re. Black Hole Heart
Vodka, BDSM, Strapped …
Replace empty with pain
Works every time
No prescription needed
The Chamber awaits you woman
Red Like
X
❤️
Replace empty with pain
Works every time
No prescription needed
The Chamber awaits you woman
Red Like
X
❤️
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Re: Re. Black Hole Heart
26th Sep 2023 1:03am
Well, um... not my drug of choice but I'll take your word for it! You're incorrigible. 🤠
Thanks for the love, Poet.
❤️k
Thanks for the love, Poet.
❤️k
Re. Black Hole Heart
26th Sep 2023 1:40am
The honesty in this is painful. I commend you for putting
it out there regardless of how uncomfortable it was to write:)
it out there regardless of how uncomfortable it was to write:)
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Re: Re. Black Hole Heart
26th Sep 2023 9:14pm
It was quick, unedited and raw. Yes, painful to articulate. Thanks for your kindness.
❤k
❤k
Re. Black Hole Heart
2nd Oct 2023 3:26am
I'm out of RLs again.... dumb rule!
This is a great write, for its implied warning that isn't really meant, I think. Kinda like a feral animal, that growls at first. Yet it will succumb to kindness if persisted with.
I love the power that it emits throughout the write.
Well done and very cool.
This is a great write, for its implied warning that isn't really meant, I think. Kinda like a feral animal, that growls at first. Yet it will succumb to kindness if persisted with.
I love the power that it emits throughout the write.
Well done and very cool.
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3rd Oct 2023 1:56am
I'm glad you found some power in it. This came out of a pretty crappy moment of self-loathing. You're right that it was more of a cry for attention than a warning, though.
I'm in a better place now. Thanks for your kind observations.
❤️k
I'm in a better place now. Thanks for your kind observations.
❤️k
Re. Black Hole Heart
20th Oct 2023 3:57am
I’m a little behind in my readings but I love running into your spills that offer weighted emotion and escape.
Great work
Great work
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Re: Re. Black Hole Heart
20th Oct 2023 12:52pm
Thank you, Wally. Even when the poetry well is pretty dry, eventually something bubbles up. I'm way behind in both reading and writing...
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