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Love interruptus
She was a prude
Didn't like the writings
To be crude
It was on the high ground of morality
She was flying
Until, until, until
She found THOSE letters in her husband's affairs
And that was the end of her world of purity
Right there.
Didn't like the writings
To be crude
It was on the high ground of morality
She was flying
Until, until, until
She found THOSE letters in her husband's affairs
And that was the end of her world of purity
Right there.
Published 20th Sep 2023
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20th Sep 2023 11:24pm
Morality isn't much fun and hard to keep honest ...
Hopefully she has dirty thoughts that are pleasing now ...
Hopefully she has dirty thoughts that are pleasing now ...
That was a bit in response to a message I got from a poet on this site: she did not like my answer to one of her poems and blasted me in a private message. Unbelievable. This is DEEP U P after all........but she was shocked by my idea of her going for a threesome to shake things up a bit.
I shall keep away from her site. best for all.
I shall keep away from her site. best for all.
22nd Sep 2023 2:40pm
Sometimes interruptions can be a plus. Like your unique pattern in this short poem. LOL, O
22nd Sep 2023 2:52pm
6th Oct 2023 1:51am
In today's world, it's hard to keep an optimistic view of loyalty and purity. It's like a glass pedestal, not only will it break but it's bound to cut deeper.
6th Oct 2023 2:55pm
