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Toying with boys.
There's shit on forks
handed round the table.
K-K's rolling a joint,
and his eyes burn on me
the entire night.
Fuck it,
I'm a little shit faced and the gathering
is hazy to me.
Yet Mr. A's shadow is on the wall, all bare feet
and ready, if you know what I mean.
Load me a bomb,
I want to go home.
It's past my bed time,
it's past ten now.
My foundations are falling at the sides,
I have panda eyes and a lazy spine
but he won't mind
when I crawl into bed
after a night out
with the lads,
feeling like the hottest chick
in that little hot-boxed room.
No, he won't mind,
he'll tuck me in
and fuck me
until they're
irrelevant.
handed round the table.
K-K's rolling a joint,
and his eyes burn on me
the entire night.
Fuck it,
I'm a little shit faced and the gathering
is hazy to me.
Yet Mr. A's shadow is on the wall, all bare feet
and ready, if you know what I mean.
Load me a bomb,
I want to go home.
It's past my bed time,
it's past ten now.
My foundations are falling at the sides,
I have panda eyes and a lazy spine
but he won't mind
when I crawl into bed
after a night out
with the lads,
feeling like the hottest chick
in that little hot-boxed room.
No, he won't mind,
he'll tuck me in
and fuck me
until they're
irrelevant.
Published 22nd Apr 2012
| Edited 25th Apr 2012
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23rd Apr 2012 4:04pm
LA
:)
My favourite lines
'Load me a bomb,
I want to go home...'
and
'I have panda eyes and a lazy spine..'
Works just fine. Packs a punch.
Love the end as usual. It smites and snarls.
A little something..
'the group
are all hazy faces to me.'
Grammatically speaking, the group should
be singular( as a whole, a single entity).
probably a tweak(use of a noun) could work.
'The group is all hazy faces' could work as well IMO.
:)
My favourite lines
'Load me a bomb,
I want to go home...'
and
'I have panda eyes and a lazy spine..'
Works just fine. Packs a punch.
Love the end as usual. It smites and snarls.
A little something..
'the group
are all hazy faces to me.'
Grammatically speaking, the group should
be singular( as a whole, a single entity).
probably a tweak(use of a noun) could work.
'The group is all hazy faces' could work as well IMO.
25th Apr 2012 2:59pm
Thank you, Ww6. I think writing's suffering at the moment because I am. I always think I get better when I'm down but no, it's just drivel through a drainpipe.
25th Apr 2012 6:19pm
26th Apr 2012 6:35am
