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Hands
Her hands caught the tears
The pain in her,
Was a hurricane
She only knew of one thing to do
And her steady hands carried the blade
Gently across her wrist.
Bitting her lip she swore,
That the pain would be no more,
As her hands caught her tears,
She wished herself away from here.
The pain in her,
Was a hurricane
She only knew of one thing to do
And her steady hands carried the blade
Gently across her wrist.
Bitting her lip she swore,
That the pain would be no more,
As her hands caught her tears,
She wished herself away from here.
Published 21st Apr 2012
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21st Apr 2012 4:27pm
The imagery in the line "The pain in her was a hurricane" is perfect. I've been in that place and that single line brought me back with a vengeance. Well written.
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