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sullen
keep your head down
emptiness invades my hallowed places
sorrow comforts
I find solace in tears
lonely redeemer, sadness
I cry to no one
it doesn't matter
stillness in a moment
wrings my insides
black and white art
melancholia is in love
I seek to understand her
in my sullen thoughts, keen
trying to understand my depths
silent screams assail me
quiet prophet walking it off
in my sanity weep, and on the morrow,
pick myself up off the floor
Published 28th Aug 2023
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28th Aug 2023 8:36am
melancholia is in love
I seek to understand her...I like this.🌹good read dear Crimsin.
I seek to understand her...I like this.🌹good read dear Crimsin.
28th Aug 2023 2:46pm
28th Aug 2023 1:49pm
28th Aug 2023 2:47pm
28th Aug 2023 2:45pm
28th Aug 2023 2:48pm
hello dearest Adagio I'm happy you enjoyed the darker aspects of this write I enjoy them also have a great day today 💕
28th Aug 2023 3:12pm
Sullen silence
I really don't know what exactly is hurting you.
There are a few people and a few things that get bad, that hurt.
You've tried asking yourself, but all you get is that you're sad, for some reason.
You get angry over the little things. Don't enjoy the things you used to enjoy.
You are not smiling like you used to smile. You feel that something is missing. A part of you has been lost somewhere. Some of your feelings lie bruised inside your soul. You feel a darkness lurking inside of you, yet you glow in bouts of desperate attempts at happiness.
It is as if you are crying out for help, without making any noise.
I really don't know what exactly is hurting you.
There are a few people and a few things that get bad, that hurt.
You've tried asking yourself, but all you get is that you're sad, for some reason.
You get angry over the little things. Don't enjoy the things you used to enjoy.
You are not smiling like you used to smile. You feel that something is missing. A part of you has been lost somewhere. Some of your feelings lie bruised inside your soul. You feel a darkness lurking inside of you, yet you glow in bouts of desperate attempts at happiness.
It is as if you are crying out for help, without making any noise.
16th Sep 2023 4:26am
16th Sep 2023 00:37am
It takes certain courage to understand what we're feeling and pick ourselves up again knowing we may get knocked down or something worse may come. Your piece gives us that hope.
16th Sep 2023 4:26am
