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clinging to whispers
gentle rolls the building tide
its nature's constant
the inevitable push & pull
unpredictable & ever unknown
tethered eternally to Moon's endless rhythms
yet ever adrift
as intoxication seeks satiation
suckling softly at passion's shore
eliciting gasps & tender sighs
pressure in the downward
dragging ever outward
only to eagerly surge back in
a relentless barrage
washing over & under
...overwhelming...
always hunting more
while delicate hunger tugs
pulsing 'neath panting surface
when need & want compete
each laden with such desperate strength
growing & devouring
...and so...
batten down
sink bedrock deep
lest the battle unsettles
knocking unwary off unsteady feet
such is the force at work
...the ferocity...
the savagery ravishing me
whenever He summons
and softly speaks...
Published 28th Aug 2023
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28th Aug 2023 1:33am
so sexy and passionate beautiful Willow
I love the imagery of you being summoned evokes 💕
I love the imagery of you being summoned evokes 💕
28th Aug 2023 10:11pm
28th Aug 2023 2:50am
There's no wonder Naajir collab with you, this is everything and then some. We love when the piece is drawn out like the act itself until your everything pops. Tight
28th Aug 2023 10:13pm
Thank you, I_IS_ME! It's always a learning journey when collaborating with someone as talented as Naaj. Appreciate your time and thoughts on this one. 😊
28th Aug 2023 4:11am
28th Aug 2023 10:13pm
28th Aug 2023 4:20am
I was enthralled and completely taken with the imagery you cleverly created... such ferocious savage need is palpable in a way that sparks a nerve and is truly something that I can identify with.
Thrilling read, which deliciously aches in all the best (and sometimes the worst) ways.
Thank you for sharing.
🌹B
Thrilling read, which deliciously aches in all the best (and sometimes the worst) ways.
Thank you for sharing.
🌹B
28th Aug 2023 10:14pm
I read your comment several times and it brought me smiles every time, Bluevelvete. Thank you for such a great comment 😊
28th Aug 2023 7:39am
I echo I IS ME's comment, so likening the act to the movement of the tide on shore. And they speak of "the tide of passion"!
28th Aug 2023 10:15pm
