deepundergroundpoetry.com
MAGNIFIQUE!
Magnifique
his physique,
so unique!
Day's less bleak!
Worth a peek
if you seek
view of cheek!
his physique,
so unique!
Day's less bleak!
Worth a peek
if you seek
view of cheek!
Published 23rd Jul 2023
Author's Note
Word (heard mentioned in video clip of the Gainsbourg-Birkin duet "Je t'aime") was poetry prompt. Imagining a woman admiring a man's naked body while telling another woman about him..
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 6
reads 206
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
23rd Jul 2023 9:08am
23rd Jul 2023 6:55pm
It's obvious you're talking about yourself again Solomon & why not! Loved the way you wrote this in all its aspects, especially alluding to the perceived female perspective. Actually, they probably talk about me that way too, behind my back. I will NOT entertain any other theory, lol. Well done on this. Really enjoyed!
24th Jul 2023 5:29am
24th Jul 2023 7:05pm
Yes, the peek...and resulting desires...magic fire. UP, UP and away. Hugs and peace, Oral.
26th Jul 2023 7:06pm
He is so fly
He’s quite a guy
His flaccid tool will catch your eye
When he’s excited you will spy
The size of it did multiply
Must touch it soon or bye and bye
She must have some or she will cry
Loved the poem! Could not resist this extension…
No pun intended… lol
He’s quite a guy
His flaccid tool will catch your eye
When he’s excited you will spy
The size of it did multiply
Must touch it soon or bye and bye
She must have some or she will cry
Loved the poem! Could not resist this extension…
No pun intended… lol
26th Jul 2023 7:52pm
