Lastly

The girls got Skilllzzzzz
Great read beautiful
Love and light
Ron x

lol... Thanks for the best motivational oomph, Ron. You really kick-started my sense of self, this morning. I can't quite explain fully how much that was needed.... So deeply grateful for you.  

Thinking of you and hoping you're feeling better.
Loads of well wishes,
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xoxo

Hi Blue,
How's your day so far?

Exquisite pen. Particularly like verse 8.

Take care.
X

I'm hanging in there, dear W.

Thank you for reading and for getting something from my small attempt at trying to write from a deeper perspective... of love.

Or maybe it's just what came to mind... lol.

Either way, I truly appreciate your kindness of feedback.

Be well and be safe out there.
🌹💙 💙
-B

Beautifully done, Blue!  You’ve captured the very essence of that moment where lust and love converge, bleeding like watercolors into each other, becoming something wholly new.  This was a joy to read 💖

I can't help but feel all aglow from your amazingly kind and truly consequential observations, Luna. My endless self deprecating inner monolog, seems to have quieted her usual incessant nagging, which is such a beautiful feeling you've gifted me with.

These lovely comments as well as your generous list add are so meaningful, I gladly take the warmth they've generated with me throughout my day today.

Again, so so thrilled that you've found some enjoyment, here with me.... what a treat, indeed.

Much love and deepest thanks.
🌹💙
-B

"...stokes places
full of secrets begging to be spilled"

There's a certain beauty as the petals of a flower unfolds 🌼

I love watching the slow reveal of how her flowering self opens so gently and oh so proudly under the right circumstances.... It's a true sight to behold.

Thank you for inspiring me like you do.

🌹💙 - 🌼

The language of lust and love was so beautifully composed. It was like the greatest love song.  
Your talent amazes me. AMAZING. This is one of my fav from you.  
I can only hope to achieve such excellence one day as you have displayed. Thanks for a beautiful start to my morning. 💙

I just read again. Poetic ecstasy in my mind.  
Masterpiece.

Well, D... you've left me flabbergasted!

My inner self is often not so nice to me... lol. That's actually putting it mildly, but I'm getting better at self love and care as I age and as I use the proper therapeutic tools, to achieve that goal. I mention this, because you've unknowingly added such monumental and moving fuel to that endeavor.

Thank you so much for seeing me and my writing the stunningly beautiful way in which you do. I am so grateful for that and simply for the opportunity to share what I'm able.

Much love and all my sincere appreciation,
🌹 💙 💙

You left me so inspired, I posted a poem called Expedition Eyes. It doesn't stand a chance to yours 😊  
 
I also work on therapeutic tools to improve my self worth. And I truly mean every compliment I give you from the bottom of my heart.  

Self love is by far the most important love. Be so kind to yourself.

Must be soooooooooooooo nice to be in love. Too many people no longer believe in that magic.             Kisses, Robert.

lol... I wouldn't know, this is just my imagination at work Musings of what my little hopes and dreams aspire to find...Motivated/ inspired by a poem I read here on DUP!

Thanks for reading and for making me feel magical, dear Robert!

Now, the morning is definitely looking up!

🌹💙 💙
-B

Beautiful writing Susan, your word choices seem particularly unique and inspired. Terrific energy throughout. Sounds like a reciprocating relationship budding through good communication.

It's all fantasy and while inspired by a poem here on DUP, it's my imagination's conjuring with the help of the universe's potential of possibilities... One can dream and hope...✨  

Wishes are lovely motivation.

Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me, you have such keen insight... which I totally adore. The generous list add made my morning, much obliged.  

I'm still in the process of reading your epic collection, it's such quality writing, Daniel. I can't wait to finish then listen.

Hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself, my friend. - 🌹
xo

I appreciate you, the insight into your writing and the time invested in mine. You're a beautiful person.

a walk in the woods with joyous penetration ....love the swirling approach to intimacy...L

Sometimes taking in the fresh air is all you need to get the creative juices flowing.... Thank you for coming along and enjoying what you read.

🌹💙 - x

Hi B:)

This does sweep you off your feet - just like love should in my humble opinion.
You gave it life here with your talent for words that do swirl - just like bcpoet stated.
all the stanzas are great - they transition so smoothly and keep the momentum of love moving
towards a beautiful ending. Thanks for this lovely journey.  Love is in the air!!

Hey there, A!!  
I'm often unable to get a poem to the place on the page exactly like I hear it in my head, so your very welcomed and thoughtful sentiments mean that I might have come as close as I could have hoped!.. So a big thanks for that and for how your were able to feel in the air, what I had very much hoped to try to generate.... Gotta love a bit of.. love  
 
It's always a pleasure to see you, so glad to know it'll hopefully be on the reg.  
 
(Please tell me you've finished the newest season of Yellowjackets?!.... Omfg... hit me up if /when you do! daaaayum!)  
 
🌹💙 💙 - B

Oh, Lady Blue! The build in this piece is intoxicating. Climbling an Everest of pure, super-charged, passionate sensuality❣ OMG how it made me tingle🥰 I love the granularity with which you scrutinize temptation, "learning exactly how
to expand and contract
the very molecules of temptation itself." The double entendre of this passage satisfies my obsession with the intoxicating scent of love, "Scents of wildflowers
silver limbed pines
and crisp earthiness
waft an unmistakable deep heady ambrosia
freely from the misty, rich wilderness
dense thickets of wondrous solitude
converge all around us"
Oh my what that does to me💞
And then the spot on accuracy of this passage describing the all consuming nature of love making is ecstasy in full bloom,
"we whole body acquiesce"
Damn that's beautiful word usage❣ I just may have enjoyed this piece😍
Bravissima, Brava🐻💞🐰

Is there a better compliment then someone saying that you've given them the tingles?? Me thinks not!

You're such a beautiful source of happiness, sweet dreams and warmth of wisdom, dear BB. You just get how I'm trying to communicate my softer side and all that I hope it be, creatively and it does my heart wonders to feel that kinship..that understanding.

I love love LOVE that you found something within my words that stokes your flames and which keeps you continually interested in my poetic journey.

Much love and all my utmost adoration for being here,
🐻💞🐰🐻💞🐰🐻💞🐰🐻💞🐰🐻


🌹💙 - B

Me and you are going for the wild ride of Love. LOL.  You are burning my mind.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

You're a feisty one, Francisco!
It's wonderfully fulfilling to feel the warmth of love's essence, so glad you've sampled it a bit here...

Keep on charming 'em!

🌹B

I keep charming you my beautiful strong smart sexy lady 😘.  

The last stanza though 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Very powerful....

Thanks so much for that kind comment, POft.


I'm extremely thankful for your visit.
🌹💙

Hope all is well with you.
-B

Delved very deeply into the senses B...

I like the shifts in tempo...

And the effect of buildup in the final 1/3
of the poem...

Worked so so well...

Wow...

So...

I have only recently kind
of been thinking of what I might want in a partner...

I don't know if I want all that...

However...

Passion is a must...

And to me...

It is rare...

But the best of things...

I would rather have passion than anything, I think...

I view writing as a passion that
is such a luxury...

A saving grace...

This has such a luster,
like that of someone with a paradise of passion...

:)))

(Going to mayhaps do a write called: Paradise of Passion.

As you may know...

I have trouble writing erotica...

Not because I am repressed...

It's a long story...

But I do have to say,
I realize I know myself maybe better than ever...

But yes...

I always know I can bend an idea however
the hell I want...

So I will do that write...)

Going to do it to pic I was going to write to...

Nice to see a new piece from you...

ANd see you as well...

This is strait fire...

<3

Wow, long time no see!  
Much thanks, Pablo.

I appreciate your words here.

-💙

Your bravura penning of the erotic, passionate, emotional, blissful journey as you emotionally transition from two to one. Your romantic glee radiates from this piece.

Thanks for feeling that essence of romance here, Leo. Your kind and supportive words of feedback have me feeling so accomplished in all that I hoped for this piece to convey. I'm truly grateful for the generous list add and all the fantastic insights you've left with me today and so many days, previous. I've seen one school of thought milling around that made me think, which is that today's experience on site is far different from it's origin because there's not the same sense of community feel, with less feedback of merit and way more ass kissing. Well, while I have zero ill will towards anyone and I wholly appreciate everyone's opinion, I can't help but politely disagree. I have had both constructive criticism and feedback from those who just wanted to stop by to leave their thoughts of kinship, which I will always find helpful and infinitely welcomed. I deeply value you being one of those awesome folks that proactively participates in being truly consequential with your well thought out and constructed feedback, as well as your fabulous knack of using the absolute perfect amount of ass kissing (ha!!... I tease I tease!) You wonderfully unite members in such a warm and inclusive way, which to me creates a resounding successful sense of community... Way to go there, my friend.    
   
Seriously though, I'm enormously glad you are here with us and that you take the time to leave the best food for thought.      
       
Much love, dear Leo      
🌹💙

Well damn.  Somehow I feel taller from reading this.  As if it's uplifting message is strong enough to support us all as readers.  
Writing should have an effect on a reader, to me.  Not just be a "good read".  Whether it's by putting them in the moment or by being a really well written piece, it's value is the impact it leaves on a reader. (When posting to a public domain.)
This write achieves both. It's interesting, it's luring, and it's well crafted.

Bravo, Susan.  Really!

Awww shucks, Styx... Thank you, my friend.

I love how uplifted you let me know you were, what a beautiful piece of information to start my day with today... That will stay with me as a nice little bit of pride and accomplishment, one that I'm incredibly grateful for.

It means a lot to me that you stop by to leave your wonderful takeaways with me. The way you see the world always infuses me with a little hopeful magic, just when I need it....

Thank you for that... sincerely.

🌹💙 💙

Hoi hoi
If, after reading this, there are still people doubting the possibility of LOVE….
The people who are already madly in love can only see this as a beautiful confirmation.

And almost French in nature: you can say almost anything if you mind your language.
What a marvellous piece of work!!!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
You really know how to flatter a lady, dear Gus!!  

Here's a big ol' thank you for simply taking time to stop by to say hi and to read my little poem. I am so delighted that the feeling of love flowing all around us, was felt by you here..... That's beyond cool.  

I'm thrilled you found something within the lines or perhaps an essence, to marvel upon.
That's a truly an unexpected and amazing compliment... - 💙

It's always a joy to get your feedback.
Much love,
🌹-B

Dear BV,

This makes me want to be “in love”. The constant obsessive thoughts for someone. I had that once. We never met. I don’t even think he knew who I was (typical) but it was such a high thinking of what might have been if only…
I’d have to cut and paste the entire poem to tell you my favorite lines. The piece just journey’s though a lovely process of desire and care. Beautifully written. H🌷

To know that you felt that urge to be "in love" after reading my attempt at romance just makes me soar!

I think we've all been there before, (I know I have) falling for someone who is clueless to our existence, so I totally understand that beautiful sense of agony and wonderment with the daydreams of 'if only'!!

Your thoughtfulness and understanding support makes this attempt at an out of my comfort zone kind of write, feel way more secure in it's space.

Thanks for sharing your valuable perceptions, H.
It's always so welcomed and deeply appreciated.

🌹💙 💙
-xo

Oh! To experience such love.
Wonderful.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏🏽

I concur, KP
Wonderful, indeed.

Thank you for stopping by and for your generous list add... - 💙


i hope your Spring into Summer is treating you well.
-x

👏 👏 👏 absolutely incredible 👏 nice ink 👌 spill blue!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

You're a lovely little highlight of kindness. Thank you for stopping by with such terrific feedback, R.

It's soul infusing, to know you've found something here on my page, that moved you. I love writing in this style, so I'm beyond thrilled that you too, enjoyed.

Warmest regards,
🌹 B

Your very welcome 🙏 blue! Peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

This is a ride into forest solitude and lovers in magic woods where timeless dreams are unfurled in the heart of mother nature. Each image is a miracle of passion that blossoms before my very eyes into a poppy field where love is the petals that unfold into art mosaics of impressionist genius. There is a reality here that beats like the calypso drums for tango dancers on fire with a passion beyond credos or innocence that feels like a mythical Eden on the day the first couple surrendered to the pearl of heat and the sweetness of fruit savored. And then that ending that brought the consummation of a sacred flame into full starburst a melody of stars bursting in the dream fulfilled. Girl, you got the magic pen, and tonight as on all nights before it swept me away.

XoXo
John

As the kids say nowadays, this is another certified banger (no pun intended).
"lost in obscurity of intoxicating throes
riding waves of wild thunder
[held steady by your strong hands]" it's lines like these that make piece feel so beautifully erotic and classy at the same time.

Phenomenal piece.

Sometimes I forget about the depths that I often go to in writing a piece, hoping to find the cusp of desire and keep it there... teetering.

I heartily thank you for sharing your insightfulness with me and feeling what I tried my best to convey. You're a gem, Walter.

🌹B