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Where To Next
I found that picture today
from the day when we first met
wandering streets of town
you said hey, where to next?
Where to next, hey hey?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, hey hey?
With furniture made of boxes
a mattress on the floor
we built a life together
turned into so much more
We’ve walked some darker roads
had turns we didn’t expect
but we’re still walking together
so honey, where to next?
Where to next, my love?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, my love?
Wherever we’re headed,
we’ll get through
If we’re going nowhere
I wanna go with you
Through the better and the worse
the sickness and the health
I look at what we’ve got
and all I see is wealth
Where to next, my love?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, my love?
I know we’ll get through
from the day when we first met
wandering streets of town
you said hey, where to next?
Where to next, hey hey?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, hey hey?
With furniture made of boxes
a mattress on the floor
we built a life together
turned into so much more
We’ve walked some darker roads
had turns we didn’t expect
but we’re still walking together
so honey, where to next?
Where to next, my love?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, my love?
Wherever we’re headed,
we’ll get through
If we’re going nowhere
I wanna go with you
Through the better and the worse
the sickness and the health
I look at what we’ve got
and all I see is wealth
Where to next, my love?
I wanna go with you
Where to next, my love?
I know we’ll get through
Written by
brokentitanium
(k.)
Published 8th May 2023
| Edited 9th May 2023
Author's Note
Reposting with the song! The verses got a little rearranged from the original poem.
Backing music by Ross M on bandlab.com.
Backing music by Ross M on bandlab.com.
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Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 2:13am
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8th May 2023 1:10pm
Thank you!! I REALLY loved this music track right away. And the guy had already given it that title (meaning he wasn't sure what else to add to the track), which was all I needed to get the idea for lyrics. Love it when that happens. I'm really pleased with this one. I wrote something that isn't angsty!!!! 😆
Appreciate your support always.
❤️k
Appreciate your support always.
❤️k
Re: Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 1:11pm
Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 3:11am
The long and winding road in life ( thank you Beatles). A mystery, indeed.
Nicely done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Nicely done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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8th May 2023 1:12pm
Yeah, one never knows what to expect, but it's good to have a companion for the road.
Thanks, bk!
❤️k
Thanks, bk!
❤️k
Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 5:01am
Dear K,
I’ll tell you where to next! The nearest record label and radio station!! Totally love it. Don’t suppose you’re looking for a backup singer? (Just kidding. I sing like Lucy Ricardo)
Awesome. H🌷
I’ll tell you where to next! The nearest record label and radio station!! Totally love it. Don’t suppose you’re looking for a backup singer? (Just kidding. I sing like Lucy Ricardo)
Awesome. H🌷
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8th May 2023 1:14pm
Radio?? What's that? 😉 Maybe someday I'll compile my stuff into an album on spotify...
Thanks always for your exuberant support!
❤️k
Thanks always for your exuberant support!
❤️k
Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 5:41am
You are SO good K...
I was eating an edible sugar cookie...
Likely to send me to outer space...
Just went riding out by the lake...
So so beautiful K...
But yes...
Your voice is wonderful...
Your art is beautiful...
I was eating an edible sugar cookie...
Likely to send me to outer space...
Just went riding out by the lake...
So so beautiful K...
But yes...
Your voice is wonderful...
Your art is beautiful...
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Re: Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 1:22pm
So, my first thought was "wait, aren't all cookies edible?" .... haha, took me a second. 😆
Thank you for listening and for all those kind words!
😁k
Thank you for listening and for all those kind words!
😁k
Re. Where To Next
8th May 2023 10:33am
Dear K,
This is a great poem. The best thing to say is I LOVE IT. Go on writing this kind of great poetry. J.Z.
This is a great poem. The best thing to say is I LOVE IT. Go on writing this kind of great poetry. J.Z.
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8th May 2023 1:23pm
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8th May 2023 10:51pm
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9th May 2023 1:42am
Re. Where To Next
9th May 2023 3:47am
Well how cool is this! You nailed it! What an awesome talent to share with us here. Thank you!
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10th May 2023 2:22am
Re: Re. Where To Next
19th May 2023 1:49am
Some of us in here enjoy seeing the mediums expanded upon. Such as singing, and some who recite, and some paint, etc.
I absolutely see this site as a kinship in here. So why not revel in the talents of one another?
Plus, perhaps it also encourages others to try other mediums as well.
All a bonus to me.
I absolutely see this site as a kinship in here. So why not revel in the talents of one another?
Plus, perhaps it also encourages others to try other mediums as well.
All a bonus to me.
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Re: Re. Where To Next
19th May 2023 2:59am
Celebrating each other is what it should be about! Thanks for being one of the awesome ones. Kinship is a good word for it.
❤️k
❤️k
Re. Where To Next
17th May 2023 5:14am
Re: Re. Where To Next
17th May 2023 5:21am
Many thanks for the read & listen... ooh, and RL too! 😁 Much appreciated, I'm really glad you like it.
❤️k
❤️k
Re: Re. Where To Next
17th May 2023 5:25am
I could really ramble in your comment section about this vibe
But I chose to keep it simple
Just know...I really appreciate the sentiment
In regards to your muse
Much respect indeed
But I chose to keep it simple
Just know...I really appreciate the sentiment
In regards to your muse
Much respect indeed
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Re: Re. Where To Next
17th May 2023 6:08am
Even your restrained praise is very gratifying. It's good to know you get my vibe.
The respect is mutual. 🙏
The respect is mutual. 🙏
Re. Where To Next
15th Jun 2023 1:22am
Absolutely beautiful! I am always in awe of your talent. What an absolutely amazing voice. No comment would be sufficient to express my admiration of you K! :)
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15th Jun 2023 1:27am
Aww! Thank you, Kx! I'm really glad you like this one. It's not an exciting story, but it's a true and faithful one.
❤️k
❤️k
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24th Jun 2023 7:18pm
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