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Observations Come Easy with Dogs
I woke up thinking about love
Affection too
Onyx came over and licked my face
Then we went out to walk
Everyone is polite at that hour
I see Stella and her owner daily
The dogs wag their tails frantically
Jump all over each other
They became fast friends
It's been 4 months now
Observations come easy with dogs
The morning is not complicated
We go out at dawn
People nod and say good morning
Even if we don't know each other
In time we will
That's the morning report
Grateful for each day
Affection too
Onyx came over and licked my face
Then we went out to walk
Everyone is polite at that hour
I see Stella and her owner daily
The dogs wag their tails frantically
Jump all over each other
They became fast friends
It's been 4 months now
Observations come easy with dogs
The morning is not complicated
We go out at dawn
People nod and say good morning
Even if we don't know each other
In time we will
That's the morning report
Grateful for each day
Published 28th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Most days are the same. The walk takes exactly 30 minutes. Then my dog eats fast and goes back to sleep. I read and write poems ...
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28th Apr 2023 12:55pm
Yes, grateful for each day’s genuine simple pleasures. And poems that reflect them. Nice read to start the day!
28th Apr 2023 12:59pm
28th Apr 2023 2:28pm
Wow nice routine. not hectic. Quiet life nd yes, going out for a walk with the dog in the morning, and the actions of the dogs make us befriends with many people. Your dog is in silent mode or sad mood now I think 😅. Well nice reading!
28th Apr 2023 2:35pm
Yeah good stuff
She's actually a really happy dog
Very affectionate and loves to lick my face.
What more can I ask for ??
Everyone should have a dog !!
Thx dimpy
She's actually a really happy dog
Very affectionate and loves to lick my face.
What more can I ask for ??
Everyone should have a dog !!
Thx dimpy
28th Apr 2023 3:09pm
I think only my comment is looking bad here.. well sorry if you feel bad n she is definitely cute i was saying about her mood. Well be happy!
28th Apr 2023 4:07pm
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28th Apr 2023 2:46pm
Awesome dog and nice little gem of a gratitude poem.
28th Apr 2023 2:52pm
Many thanks Pink
She's a sweetheart and brings joy to whomever is around her ❤
Get close, you're bound to get a lick !
She's a sweetheart and brings joy to whomever is around her ❤
Get close, you're bound to get a lick !
28th Apr 2023 2:47pm
Awww! Look at that expression! She is a sweetie! Love and affection is what it’s all about!
28th Apr 2023 2:53pm
Yes !!
A great dog and wonderful companion on walks. We look out for each other on the crazy city streets.
You've got dogs. You know !!
Thanks NG
A great dog and wonderful companion on walks. We look out for each other on the crazy city streets.
You've got dogs. You know !!
Thanks NG
28th Apr 2023 5:37pm
This was not a ‘the fuck’ moment my dear. You showed your soft and introspective side, and it’s so much more richer than your ‘in yer face’ side.
I like both sides of you, but the quiet way you analyzed the day and dropped some deep-thought bombs was appreciated.
Good shit.
28th Apr 2023 7:59pm
That's a WOW comment
It's crazy but I woke up this morning dripping in love sentiment. Maybe it's because I actually slept pretty good for a change.
My new dog Onyx brings out the best in me.
You can't help but to pass it on.
Thanks for liking both sides of me. I like this side better too ....
Appreciate
It's crazy but I woke up this morning dripping in love sentiment. Maybe it's because I actually slept pretty good for a change.
My new dog Onyx brings out the best in me.
You can't help but to pass it on.
Thanks for liking both sides of me. I like this side better too ....
Appreciate
29th Apr 2023 1:51am
Your dog gets a playmate and you get the owner's playmate. Keep on writing.
29th Apr 2023 1:56am
29th Apr 2023 1:59am
We like this dude, the pic the piece, and the comment. It's all relaxing to our mind, Tight
29th Apr 2023 3:33am
She's a soulful creature
Wants love and gives it
What more can a dog lover want?
Appreciate ME
Wants love and gives it
What more can a dog lover want?
Appreciate ME
29th Apr 2023 5:02pm
BIG
Stella is looking at you and saying "Are you done yet?". Lol.
It's so nice to read these mellow, introspective writings of yours. It's easy on my eyes and brain. Like weekends should be!
Wonderfully done, PoetSpeak.
Stella is looking at you and saying "Are you done yet?". Lol.
It's so nice to read these mellow, introspective writings of yours. It's easy on my eyes and brain. Like weekends should be!
Wonderfully done, PoetSpeak.
29th Apr 2023 5:20pm
Thanks so much for the great comment Styx.
I've written a lot of intense stuff and there will probably be more but my dog stories are all natural and fun to pen. She brings out my good and I honor her with hearttful writes.
Appreciate
Stay tuned
I've written a lot of intense stuff and there will probably be more but my dog stories are all natural and fun to pen. She brings out my good and I honor her with hearttful writes.
Appreciate
Stay tuned
3rd May 2023 7:35pm
It's too bad dogs can get all along better than
people at times.
BL.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
people at times.
BL.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
3rd May 2023 8:49pm
23rd Jun 2023 11:57pm
It’s nice to see that people are pleasant with each other. Persos it’s the early morning air, but doggies usually make people smile.
Nice work
Nice work
24th Jun 2023 00:25am
Yes, she's an awesome spiritual guide.
Can't help but to love her. She's a BIG MUSH.
Thanks Mister W
Can't help but to love her. She's a BIG MUSH.
Thanks Mister W
