Dark Prism

Beautiful contrast and contradiction.
I see more hope than sadness.
Grainy dark photo brings home the sadness lament.
I’m staying tuned for a sequel…

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You know I am full of contradictions... and contrasts too...
Yes, there is a lot of intense passion to battle the sadness... still I am dealing with a lot at the moment so it's hard. I thought the pic was a good match and a glass of wine too, although I like Red wine... Ah, a sequel... who knows... maybe...

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This would be a good spoken word entry too

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You never know... Putting in your order I see. ;) And more... BIG too. :p

I'm good at giving orders ....

Haha, you said it... What other orders... * Nevermind, don't answer that * lol

I watch and wish there was something to take away the pain...you are never alone

Hey Tim, thank you for the super sweet sentiment and message. Some things you can never really be prepared for even if you know what to 'expect'. It never feels like you can do enough. It's nice to know you are not alone even when you feel like it sometimes. Thank you.

I always appreciate it so much when someone add something to the reading list. And I love it when you come back to give me such detailed feedback and looking forward to your observations.

Really glad you are not complaining about my gothic overtures and slinky sex romps... Because those are part of me. ;) I could write a lot more vulnerability but I suppose I don't like showing that. Generally I want to make people feel good and I suppose I need that too but still writing out the pain is necessary sometime and perhaps I should do it more.

Yes, indeed it does feel like our senses are infinite and that can be truly overwhelming at times. I am very sensitive so my senses can be exhausting at times. That's why I LOVE the peace of the mountains. Or riding my bike or going to the gym which helps get me out of my head. I think I am very sensitive to electromagnetic fields. I think I am attracted to them. I am really glad you could see the delicacy in that line. The fragility and beauty.

I am glad you liked the rotation and contrasts. The experience of each feeling and sensation but as you say not lingering there. Unable to stay there for too long lest being caught in them forever. The aroma and flavor of life is something that changes often. It seems the vintage is always being refined and defined. I am not sure it was intentional, I just write as it comes but often in contrasts and contradictions that represent my life and things from my life.

Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts and also this sweet and kind message. I will do my best to hold on tight to the lighter parts and look at the future in the best way that I can despite the difficult time and I know that's all my Mom would want.

This is beautiful poetry.
Regards
James

Hey there James. It's good to see you. :) I am really happy you found it to be beautiful poetry. That means a lot to me. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot.

Wow! what an amazing reply. I am speechless. It's such an incredible write and it rhymes too. I love seeing the elements of mine in it and it makes me really happy to have inspired you to write this! Thank you so much for this gift. I really am speechless so I might come back to it. ;)

When you with the right person you try to make each other happy.  Keep on writing you sexy lady.

It's very important to try and make each other happy when you are with someone, that's so true. I will keep on writing. :) Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Francisco. I really appreciate it.

You truly welcome  Ms KristinaX.

When you know things are coming and are unavoidable it doesn't make them any easier
I hope and pray for you my beautiful friend
Love and light
Ron xx

No it doesn't, you keep holding out hope and on the good days you think maybe something can chance but it doesn't. And so you go through the stages of grief in preparation and try to hide that from everyone else. Thank you so much for your hope and prayers Ron! You are so sweet and I really appreciate it. Love and light back atcha always...

Every so profound...

And beautiful...

Well hey Cipher, it's great to see you. I am glad you found it profound and beautiful. That means a lot to me. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much...

All previous comments say exactly what needs to be said.
(Hugs)
Mary

Thank you so much for the hugs Mary. It means a lot to me. You are such a lovely person and I really appreciate you so much.

I look forward to these glimpses into the emotional presence and motivation of your artistic expression. The write has presence and depth of meaning with a succinct and impacting proportion.

Hey there Daniel... I am glad you find value in this type of expression of my emotional presence and motivation. My writes often have many meanings and much depth in the meaning that is perhaps easily missed so I like that you see it and found an impact from that. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it so much.

I hear you, I hope that others are taking the time to peer into what moves in the writing as well, instead of just rolling out tongues like the wolf cartoon on the Hollywood and Vine sign or rubber stamping it with catch phrases. It's my pleasure K, I hope you're doing alright.

Superb poem with hints of wry wistful muse thread running through love and hope. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Hey there Zaynab, I really love that you found it a superb poem and could see the love and hope running throughout. (And the wry wistful musing of it too). Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that. I will try to read your newest soon as well. :)

Hi Kristina,

I love the idea of a dark prism.
You're opening with the rainbow is so lovely and contrasting to the title.
I agree with PS (but don't tell him!!!)  I do see more hope than sadness.
Great pic too.   Makes you think - don't always judge a book by it's cover.

Hey there beautiful girl. :) A dark prism is beautiful too isn't it, like a rainbow at night. There is definitely a lot of contrast in it. I won't tell PS, we don't want him to get a big ego do we? ;) Yes, I would like to think there is more hope and I am glad you see that. I thought the pic matched pretty well and it's so true about not judging a book by it's cover. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me Adel. I always love seeing you.

PS sees everything.
He's a witch doctor with a good heart FYI..

The intertwining of several emotions creates a nostalgic air filled with despair as well as beauty. So many lines deliver a soft surrealist dreamy undertones that are not can feel the ache in your voice..

Well done

So often several emotions intertwine definitely giving a nostalgic feel and I am glad you found beauty in it. I love the description of soft surreal dreamy undertones... There is definitely an ache in the voice at times. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I love that.

👏 👏 👏 👏 great 👍 👌 ink spill 👏 Kristina I take my hat 👒 off 2u!! And mr. Black616 he revised it a bit with a little more poetic musing adding a few tips 😉 all an all both excellent 👍 work ok 👌 👍 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

I am so happy you think it's great ink and I think MrBlack's revision was great too. I really appreciate your thoughts so much and thank you for taking a moment to visit me, read, and provide your feedback Richy. I love that and the encouragement too!

Your very welcome 🙏! Always peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

The whole write is a rainbow of thoughts.  Basking in the hues of this write is wonderfully enlightening.  
Well written, Kristina.  What a nice surprise to read this.

A rainbow of thoughts, I love that. You can bask in the hues of my writes anytime Styxian, I always love seeing you here and knowing that you think it's well written really means a lot to me. Hopefully I can keep surprising you! ;) Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts.

Do you still want to hear my order??

Oh boy, that sounds like a loaded question... Should I be scared to say yes? lol

Hmmmm

Ah yes, the glass or two or three of wine results in a colorful display be it euphoric or tragic. Like a prism, your bases, happiness and despair, are the same size and shape. The reflection cast dependent on the source (of light) and wine (existence) poured. As in consuming wine, one moment life can be euphoric but later comes the hangover (gloom).  

Young lady, clever the interweaving wine with the struggles in life.

I do love a good glass of wine, especially red wine. Perhaps a Rioja. Always a colorful display, euphoric or tragic... A prism reflects so much... so much happiness and sadness, despair. The reflections are constantly changing. The source and the wine too. Euphoria often leaves a hangover because it cannot last forever. As usual your genius is able to see into the true meanings DaVinci. I am so happy you got the clever interweaving wine with the struggles of life. :) Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts!