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Edge of a knife
We balance on the edge of a knife.
Our flirting is already on the verge...
Games of blind excitement or fate itself,
intends to push us to the cliff?
Add evil and the program will immediately burn,
It's so difficult not to force events
I'm practically sick of you,
But it's impossible to overcome passions.
In your eyes, I also see the gleam of sin,
In them I've been naked for a long time.
Not a rumor, but your chest caresses your words,
Your touch blows my mind.
Blissful sleep with you forgotten in the morning,
Not finding out who is still more intense.
Sleep, fool, I'll clean everything up after myself,
So as not to stir up the course of your personal life.
Our flirting is already on the verge...
Games of blind excitement or fate itself,
intends to push us to the cliff?
Add evil and the program will immediately burn,
It's so difficult not to force events
I'm practically sick of you,
But it's impossible to overcome passions.
In your eyes, I also see the gleam of sin,
In them I've been naked for a long time.
Not a rumor, but your chest caresses your words,
Your touch blows my mind.
Blissful sleep with you forgotten in the morning,
Not finding out who is still more intense.
Sleep, fool, I'll clean everything up after myself,
So as not to stir up the course of your personal life.
Published 5th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Flirting is a language of it's own, so often tempting and drawing us in. Perhaps the most thrilling form of communication. One that excites and so often gets us into trouble. :p
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5th Apr 2023 9:06pm
6th Apr 2023 00:25am
Hey there MP, I am really happy you thought it was a wonderful poem. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I love that. X
5th Apr 2023 9:23pm
Seductive, flirtatious, sexy, the language of love
Awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
Awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
6th Apr 2023 00:26am
You know how much I love seductive, flirtatious, and sexy Ron. ;) Definitely the language of love or at least lust. So happy you thought it was an awesome read. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me. Much love and light back atcha. X
5th Apr 2023 9:41pm
This is very true.
Work flirting is always a strange one. People you wouldn't go for because you are happy seem more attractive, because you shouldn't flirt. And you try to stop, but you are put with them every day in order to make money. i never crossed the line. Your poem touches upon this. You have a way of getting hold of the issue and your words bring out feelings.
Great poem my friend.
Regards
James
Work flirting is always a strange one. People you wouldn't go for because you are happy seem more attractive, because you shouldn't flirt. And you try to stop, but you are put with them every day in order to make money. i never crossed the line. Your poem touches upon this. You have a way of getting hold of the issue and your words bring out feelings.
Great poem my friend.
Regards
James
6th Apr 2023 00:27am
Ah yes! work flirting can definitely be a strange one. :p It's hard not to get caught up in it sometimes and people are always attracted to the forbidden. lol It just makes you want to do it that much more. But getting involved with someone at work can definitely have it's pitfalls especially if you break it off. And of course the classic manager-subordinate relationships. I may have crossed the line before but I admit nothing. So happy my words bring out feelings and capture the issue. I love that. Thank you so much for stopping by to see me James. X
5th Apr 2023 10:09pm
Danger lurks around every curve wtb you.
Some might be afraid
I say bring it on
Flirting is an art we both seem steeped in
I always want to know what’s behind door # 2
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
BIG
Some might be afraid
I say bring it on
Flirting is an art we both seem steeped in
I always want to know what’s behind door # 2
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
BIG
6th Apr 2023 00:28am
Shhhh... Yeah yeah but you aren't supposed to tell everyone that damnit. Around every curve, I love that. Some might be afraid but others are always lurking around the curves, flirting. lol There is this one guy who... * nevermind, innocent look * Some things apparently are considered flirting and I don't realize it so that gets me into more trouble. I mean who said a glance is flirting anyway. I feel like everything is flirting apparently. :p Is it an art or does it just come naturally. Door #2, oh boy... not telling... Love the BIG LIKE (BIG just isn't the same damnit) and thanks so much for the RL. X
5th Apr 2023 10:20pm
You imbue that sense of psychological tension with a practiced hand K.
6th Apr 2023 00:29am
Oh yeah psychological tension is something I know a lot about Daniel. I do have a lot of practice with it and I am glad you could feel some in this. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. I love that. X
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5th Apr 2023 10:53pm
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6th Apr 2023 00:30am
Welcome back Tabbyblood; 2013 wow - that's a long time. Thanks so much for visiting me on your return and sharing your thoughts. I love that you thought it was an amazing poem and like the structure. That means a lot to me... X
6th Apr 2023 7:30am
You have a beautiful passionate soul. You tell a hell of a sexy story as well. Awesome ink.
I would like to RL this but there are limits now, because you know, that's a real issue 🤷
I would like to RL this but there are limits now, because you know, that's a real issue 🤷
What a lovely thing to say, thank you so much DC. That's a beautiful sentiment to start the day with. :) Oh yeah! everyone loves a hell of a sexy story. Especially those inspired in reality. ;p Really happy you think it's awesome ink and I love that you wanted to RL also. Not real sure how the RL limits work exactly. :p Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I love that! X
I like the way you say you could still love someone you are practically sick of. Seems there is hope for us all! PS I only use knives for slicing bread! 🤣
I wondered if anyone would catch or mention that. lol You know that's how it goes sometimes... :p Like I have one guy who is always asking me for meaningless stuff to come over and hang out with me. lol But anyway, there is always hope.;) Is that all you use knives for? They are so versatile. * innocent look * X
6th Apr 2023 2:56pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 great 👍 work 👌 I love the analogy ♥ and metaphors!! Like 👍 the edge of the knife!! It can also mean that everything seems more exciting when 🤔 your on the edge!! And yes 👍 you never know whats lurking around the curves 😉 its tempting and also 😉 inviting looking forward to the thrill!!! I'm impressed 👏 please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always
6th Apr 2023 3:55pm
Oh yeah! absolutely means everything is more exciting when you are on the edge. So glad you get the analogy and metaphors Richy. So much danger is lurking around the curves. lol You have to be very careful. That temptation can get you into real trouble and cut deep sometimes but at least it will be one hell of a thrill. So happy you are impressed and I love your comment. Thanks so much for stopping by to visit me and sharing your thoughts. X
6th Apr 2023 10:57pm
7th Apr 2023 00:05am
Danger and murder does turn people on. My mind is burning inside. Keep on writing.
Well I know danger can be a big turn on for me. :p But I do love the thrill of it all.. And I like setting minds on fire too. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me Francisco and sharing your thoughts. I love that. :) X
A seductive romp on the cutting edge, and if not careful the cut can be deep. The perilous flirting with one that you know there will be repercussions (husband, finance, boss, co-worker; or relative of a close friend). And yet the peril of the forbidden is its own aphrodisiac.
I forgot to comment on, "I'm practically sick of you" - Making me think it's a person you are around a lot who can get under your skin (pest, obnoxious) and yet to your shock sparks desire in you too.
I forgot to comment on, "I'm practically sick of you" - Making me think it's a person you are around a lot who can get under your skin (pest, obnoxious) and yet to your shock sparks desire in you too.
23rd Apr 2023 11:19pm
Always on the cutting edge and I have been cut deep. Sometimes self inflicted but that's something else... Ah, perilous flirting can be so much fun and so damn exciting but oh yes there can be repercussions. But like you said the peril of the forbidden is definitely a powerful aphrodisiac. Doing things you shouldn't, where you shouldn't... ;) X
12th May 2023 2:35am
It’s a sharp spill, intuitive in all its underlying themes, open to interpretation and imagination.
Great work Kristina
Great work Kristina
23rd May 2023 1:51am
Hey Wally! You know I love a sharp spill... And so many underlying themes indeed and definitely open to interpretation and imagination. :) It's so great to see you! I hope your year is going great so far.
