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I am your artist, I am your muse
Weathered
Like the painting
I am
Barrio Urban
South side
Writer’s block
You could cut with a knife
Art is my remains
Mentor, lover, muse
Choices and regrets
Sliced and diced
I never give up
The struggle
A piece of cake
Prefer Key Lime Pie
Work harder
Sleep tomorrow
Like the painting
I am
Barrio Urban
South side
Writer’s block
You could cut with a knife
Art is my remains
Mentor, lover, muse
Choices and regrets
Sliced and diced
I never give up
The struggle
A piece of cake
Prefer Key Lime Pie
Work harder
Sleep tomorrow
Author's Note
Beating the crap out of melancholy, a stranger I don’t know and who won’t be here long …
Painting by Poetspeak as shown by him
Painting by Poetspeak as shown by him
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 1:47am
Some of the piece seems to describe the painting, we have zero artistic talent. But we like what we like, tight work
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17th Mar 2023 1:48am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 1:59am
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17th Mar 2023 2:04am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:01am
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17th Mar 2023 2:05am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 2:06am
Hi 😊
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:08am
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 2:12am
I kicked the shit out of the melancholy for you as I was passing through. You'll be back bigger and badder. You always are
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:14am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:21am
Dear PS,
Nope. Not buying it. Your muse is right there I see it in the painting. Now get back to ass kicking 🤭
We miss you!
H🌷
Nope. Not buying it. Your muse is right there I see it in the painting. Now get back to ass kicking 🤭
We miss you!
H🌷
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:40am
Dear H,
Hope to be back soon.
Working through seasonal depression.
That bitch ain't gonna last.
Thx for the visit and RL
Count back FROM 10
Major Tom is Lurking
Thx ❤
Hope to be back soon.
Working through seasonal depression.
That bitch ain't gonna last.
Thx for the visit and RL
Count back FROM 10
Major Tom is Lurking
Thx ❤
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 3:53am
You're a mensch who looks dangerous. Hot combination. Good poem. I liked the prefer key lime pie part, maybe because I do too
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 11:23am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 5:18am
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 11:25am
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 10:03am
We all get clawed by melancholy from time to time PS. The mind can be the loneliest place. The art is to fight back. Something tells me you are a natural born fighter mate. Enjoyed this whole piece. Rob
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 11:27am
Life tries to take me down sometimes but yeah, I'm a fighter. No fists, mind play all the way. Art speaks for me. Life long journey.
Good to see you Rob
Stay tuned
Thx
Good to see you Rob
Stay tuned
Thx
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 11:26am
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 11:30am
Yeah, that bitch took hold this week.
Swimming in sludge but working my way through the pipe. I'll be back soon .
Stay tuned LJ
Thx for the visit
Swimming in sludge but working my way through the pipe. I'll be back soon .
Stay tuned LJ
Thx for the visit
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 12:41pm
Writers block
Roadblock
Deadlock
Airlock
Headlock
Gridlock
Cockblock
Hemlock
Butchers block
Building block
Nighthawk
Sleepwalk
Sweet talk
Small talk
Double talk
Poppycock
Cinderblock
Shellshock
Bedrock
Aftershock
Dirty sock
Moonwalk
Punk rock
Peacock
😎🦚
I know melancholy, and it's no match for you.
❤️❤️k
Roadblock
Deadlock
Airlock
Headlock
Gridlock
Cockblock
Hemlock
Butchers block
Building block
Nighthawk
Sleepwalk
Sweet talk
Small talk
Double talk
Poppycock
Cinderblock
Shellshock
Bedrock
Aftershock
Dirty sock
Moonwalk
Punk rock
Peacock
😎🦚
I know melancholy, and it's no match for you.
❤️❤️k
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 12:55pm
You wrote that like that Billy Joel song where everything rhymes. Love that song and love this comment. This cowboy's getting back on his horse.
Thanks k
❤❤
Thanks k
❤❤
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 12:59pm
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 1:13pm
Billy Joel
"We Didn't Start the Fire"
brokentitanium style
Rock it Kid
We help each other !
🤠❤💯💥
"We Didn't Start the Fire"
brokentitanium style
Rock it Kid
We help each other !
🤠❤💯💥
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 1:36pm
Oops, I'm late to the game again 😅.
Who's that handsome devil 👿? Here's a piece or two 🥧🥧 of pie. It's key lime.
Who's that handsome devil 👿? Here's a piece or two 🥧🥧 of pie. It's key lime.
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Anonymous
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17th Mar 2023 1:59pm
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:03pm
I'm loving your comment Z
You speak of me but you're own exuberance is showing through.
You have to know the finer things to write of them.
Keep writing your magic.
You are a mood man, I can tell
Appreciate your comment greatly
Thanks !
You speak of me but you're own exuberance is showing through.
You have to know the finer things to write of them.
Keep writing your magic.
You are a mood man, I can tell
Appreciate your comment greatly
Thanks !
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:00pm
Never too late
You brought pie too !
Key Lime
My favorite
Tart and sweet
That's me
Thanks OH ✋ !
You brought pie too !
Key Lime
My favorite
Tart and sweet
That's me
Thanks OH ✋ !
Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 2:09pm
You know how much I care about you. To you, I owe so much ❤️
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 2:39pm
You're doing the gritty hard work here, cutting through all the bullshit people who have unkind agendas. They are most likely jealous of your writing capacity and the ease the good writing flows from your pen.
My job is to clear the path and get you to stay and not give up. We need writers like you !
I`m happy to help
🤠❤💯💥
My job is to clear the path and get you to stay and not give up. We need writers like you !
I`m happy to help
🤠❤💯💥
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 7:38pm
Omg, quit bitching and write some shit.
Also, nice poem.
Also, everything sucks because you’re in New York. I’m drinking tea in my back yard in a sunbeam, wearing shorts. Because it’s 80.
Because fuck winter.
Hey. Hope you find your mojo.
Also, nice poem.
Also, everything sucks because you’re in New York. I’m drinking tea in my back yard in a sunbeam, wearing shorts. Because it’s 80.
Because fuck winter.
Hey. Hope you find your mojo.
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
17th Mar 2023 8:03pm
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 2:31am
Good lighting, PoetSpeak & I'm glad you had a shave! Bold & honest write. You won't be melancholy for long, I agree!
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 2:43am
Yeah, I'm beating this bitch up pretty good.
Day light savings time plans tricks on people. I'm one of them.
No more beards for awhile.
Thanks Billy
Day light savings time plans tricks on people. I'm one of them.
No more beards for awhile.
Thanks Billy
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 12:15pm
Well said my friend,
Never give up, my moto is you can give up on your dreams when you're dead.
Your art is always a meal for the eyes.
regards
James
Never give up, my moto is you can give up on your dreams when you're dead.
Your art is always a meal for the eyes.
regards
James
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 12:19pm
Thank you so much James
I'm feeling better
The light is different in the morning
Just had to tweak a few things
Appreciate the comment and RL
I'm feeling better
The light is different in the morning
Just had to tweak a few things
Appreciate the comment and RL
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 12:35pm
Your picture of you, you have the expression of someone who has seen stuff, and knows stuff... Like hard wisdom.
At least you know about key lime (that is actually yellow!) pie!
It has to be a glass of sweet tea with it, for me. Inseparable!
At least you know about key lime (that is actually yellow!) pie!
It has to be a glass of sweet tea with it, for me. Inseparable!
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 12:42pm
I had to think 3 or 4 times about using that picture. It's like standing naked in
Times Square. I went with it though, it fits with the painting and that was the whole idea.
When I lived in South Florida for a few years I discovered Key Lime Pie and the Keys. Both were grand in their exterior and interior. You haven't lived until you've experienced both I say ....
Appreciate the comment Styx and RL !!
Times Square. I went with it though, it fits with the painting and that was the whole idea.
When I lived in South Florida for a few years I discovered Key Lime Pie and the Keys. Both were grand in their exterior and interior. You haven't lived until you've experienced both I say ....
Appreciate the comment Styx and RL !!
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 3:32pm
My favorite face 🥰
you always have that “look”. I think it’s your eyes. They have a twinkle but underneath is a mischievous side that anyone who knows you, knows how fun it is!
Your muse will swing around and kick that melancholy’s ass!
Xx
you always have that “look”. I think it’s your eyes. They have a twinkle but underneath is a mischievous side that anyone who knows you, knows how fun it is!
Your muse will swing around and kick that melancholy’s ass!
Xx
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 3:49pm
It's all in the eyes, isn't it ??
I think I'm looking more and more like my dad. Nobody ever much knew what he was thinking. Strong silent type. For better or worse everyone knows what I'm thinking.
Everyone us my muse lately so I'm returning the favor. But yes, they are all whipping me I to shape and if that fails, plain whipping.
Hey, best of both worlds
Thx E
X
I think I'm looking more and more like my dad. Nobody ever much knew what he was thinking. Strong silent type. For better or worse everyone knows what I'm thinking.
Everyone us my muse lately so I'm returning the favor. But yes, they are all whipping me I to shape and if that fails, plain whipping.
Hey, best of both worlds
Thx E
X
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 4:25pm
Something silly, something true
kick the shit out of being blue
melancholy collies frolic in holly
for most just utter folly
I wish I were in Bali being jolly
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A ridiculously bad poem to make to smile.
kick the shit out of being blue
melancholy collies frolic in holly
for most just utter folly
I wish I were in Bali being jolly
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A ridiculously bad poem to make to smile.
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 4:52pm
I just read a news story about Bali and how tourism is ruining it ....
Not surprising..
I like your poem though !!
Thx Mister
Not surprising..
I like your poem though !!
Thx Mister
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 8:00pm
Hey PS
Couldn't swing by DUP without visiting one of my favorite people.
You know Key Lime Pie in Texas is art all on it's own. Edible art!! haha
I prefer it with coffee.
Nice to read ya buddy!!
Hell yeah- barrio urban - kindred spirit!!
Couldn't swing by DUP without visiting one of my favorite people.
You know Key Lime Pie in Texas is art all on it's own. Edible art!! haha
I prefer it with coffee.
Nice to read ya buddy!!
Hell yeah- barrio urban - kindred spirit!!
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Re: Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
18th Mar 2023 8:15pm
Hey there A,
Yeah, I do love Key Lime Pie.
Have you ever met someone who didn’t?
Key lime kisses are even better.
Just working through my usual struggles and a little glory too. We artist types are always in conflict, often with ourselves!
Good to see you back in the Underground
Thx for the visit
Yeah, I do love Key Lime Pie.
Have you ever met someone who didn’t?
Key lime kisses are even better.
Just working through my usual struggles and a little glory too. We artist types are always in conflict, often with ourselves!
Good to see you back in the Underground
Thx for the visit
Re. I am your artist, I am your muse
20th Mar 2023 00:07am
"A piece of cake
Prefer Key Lime Pie
Work harder
Sleep tomorrow "
Work harder, a call to those who want to make it.
BIG LIKE
Prefer Key Lime Pie
Work harder
Sleep tomorrow "
Work harder, a call to those who want to make it.
BIG LIKE
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20th Mar 2023 1:46am