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obscene
in chaos I wept, tormented by your internal storm
it flood me with emotions foreign to me
speaking crushing desire to my soul
in a dialect my body doesn't understand
I watch you in the dark in-between the two worlds
the one of three dimension
and the other operating on all dimensions
you quiver with salacious thought,
perverse to my thinking
I convulse with orgasm none the less
you are taboo and I can't resist you
you are the darkness I fear
my soul and yours intertwined
intricately bound in a sadomasochist dance
it borders on the obscene
a macabre dance of the damned
shall be our undoing
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Re. obscene
10th Mar 2023 7:27pm
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10th Mar 2023 9:51pm
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Ohh myyyy!! I bow down to your deliciously gothic erotic prowess, dear lady!! The way you flay yourself open upon the page, exposing yummy dark delights in the intoxicating way only you can, is beyond reproach. Maybe it's that tinge of taboo that you capture, but there's never one doubt in my mind when I read your BDSM spills like this one, that you reign supreme Queen... Totally untouchable in your craft and the creative dark sexy space you so generously share ...
All hail Crimsin!!
Much reverence and love, sent
🥀🖤🥀
B
All hail Crimsin!!
Much reverence and love, sent
🥀🖤🥀
B
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Re: Re. obscene
10th Mar 2023 9:55pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue I'm so happy to see you on my pages you made me smile...these kind of writes I find difficult... to open myself up is hard sometimes I hold back I'm really grateful for your beautiful review...it is salacious in its own way I love it thank you 💕
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Re: Re. obscene
10th Mar 2023 10:00pm
hello Mr. Black thank you very graciously for such a wonderfully thoughtful review of this write.. I am envious of your skill at recognizing what makes a read a good one...my desires have always been as such... darkly evocative...that this spoke to you on the level it intended is pleasantly surprising...it is a difficult feeling to convey for me... I deeply appreciate the time and thoughts you invested ❤️
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11th Mar 2023 00:22am
I love your darkness. The twisted kink is absolutely mouthwatering, and you did a beautiful job in the presentation.
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11th Mar 2023 2:26am
Re. obscene
18th Mar 2023 1:10am
"my soul and yours intertwined
intricately bound in a sadomasochist dance
it borders on the obscene
a macabre dance of the damned"
Classic line, you can feel the bond.
Nicely done.
intricately bound in a sadomasochist dance
it borders on the obscene
a macabre dance of the damned"
Classic line, you can feel the bond.
Nicely done.
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