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Indigo
Arcenic laced feelings
make their way through my being
poisoning my soul.
Turning it a deep blue hue
the fingers of my being getting numb
no longer able to touch your heart.
The poison in my soul
has pushed you away
I spit fatal words that cut you in two.
My blue lips no longer able
to give your essence a penetrating kiss
i've let the toxins infect my thinking.
Swirl through my thoughts corrupting my psyche
love cast aside by my indigo heart
longing to bite you and infect you with my venom.
Let the arcenic like hate enter your being
feeling the emptiness of my soul for the first time
no longer hidden behind my facade.
make their way through my being
poisoning my soul.
Turning it a deep blue hue
the fingers of my being getting numb
no longer able to touch your heart.
The poison in my soul
has pushed you away
I spit fatal words that cut you in two.
My blue lips no longer able
to give your essence a penetrating kiss
i've let the toxins infect my thinking.
Swirl through my thoughts corrupting my psyche
love cast aside by my indigo heart
longing to bite you and infect you with my venom.
Let the arcenic like hate enter your being
feeling the emptiness of my soul for the first time
no longer hidden behind my facade.
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7th Apr 2012 8:02pm
Whoah...
I like the way you put poison in the picture..
It's so.....different .. ^-^
I like the way you put poison in the picture..
It's so.....different .. ^-^
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toxic....
7th Apr 2012 8:26pm
through the veins of the Soul
the venom turns it cold
while the body remains strong
but Life is long gone
& the only thing left
is to understand the unavoidable death
but if you dont want that path
then make sure that God Is Who you have.....
the venom turns it cold
while the body remains strong
but Life is long gone
& the only thing left
is to understand the unavoidable death
but if you dont want that path
then make sure that God Is Who you have.....
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re: toxic....
7th Apr 2012 8:45pm
ty Eric you always make me smile with your wisdom and poem comments..I tried to give your comment a thumbs up but there seems to be a glitch that won't let me..ty again peace Crim :)
Yes
7th Apr 2012 9:43pm
re: Yes
7th Apr 2012 9:57pm
A GOOD STRONGLY WRITTEN POEM
7th Apr 2012 11:50pm
re: A GOOD STRONGLY WRITTEN POEM
8th Apr 2012 1:22am
Very dark and foreboding
9th Apr 2012 4:36pm
Very dark and foreboding dearest Crim, a great contrast from your previous piece.Well done!
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
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re: Very dark and foreboding
10th Apr 2012 9:42pm
Awesome
13th May 2012 6:07am
You are so gifted and your talent is limitless. Keep up the nice work, fcxx
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Re:Awesome
15th May 2012 7:11pm
ty beautiful lady for such a heartfelt comment..your talent is limitless mine seems to have waned..peace Crim :)
Re: Indigo
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23rd Nov 2013 6:23pm
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re: Re: Indigo
23rd Nov 2013 8:17pm
thank you Mr. A you made me smile wide and blush with your comment :) much love Crim
Re. Indigo
8th Dec 2017 3:04am
Its stupid, but necessary it seems, to push people away when you only have a little left to protect.
Great talent shared here my lovely lady.
Great talent shared here my lovely lady.
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Re: Re. Indigo
8th Dec 2017 3:08am
thank you beautiful Jade you see
& understand so much
i've spent years pushing people away..
I cherish your insight
& love you show me..
love Crim
& understand so much
i've spent years pushing people away..
I cherish your insight
& love you show me..
love Crim