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Dark Forest Lurking
I’m watching
Lurking
Behind that tree
Do you see me ?
LumberJack
Ripped flannel shirt
Whiskey breath
Protrusion in pants
Sinister
Waiting
Hardwood
He surprised her from behind
Dirty calloused hand over mouth
Nicotine stench
She should have been afraid
But wasn't
He reached lewdly under her soft sweater
Fondling her breasts
Toying with her nipples
His breath hot on her neck
Misty forest odors
She felt damp between the legs ..
Lurking
Behind that tree
Do you see me ?
LumberJack
Ripped flannel shirt
Whiskey breath
Protrusion in pants
Sinister
Waiting
Hardwood
He surprised her from behind
Dirty calloused hand over mouth
Nicotine stench
She should have been afraid
But wasn't
He reached lewdly under her soft sweater
Fondling her breasts
Toying with her nipples
His breath hot on her neck
Misty forest odors
She felt damp between the legs ..
Published 23rd Jan 2023
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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23rd Jan 2023 8:10pm
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23rd Jan 2023 8:19pm
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2023 8:48pm
Stop staring
23rd Jan 2023 8:59pm
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2023 10:47pm
OUCH
(Yeah yeah I know)
(Yeah yeah I know)
Anonymous
24th Jan 2023 1:03am
Lord yes I know.....
23rd Jan 2023 9:52pm
Look at you getting all Bob Rossy with the darkness, That darkened twist to the erotica adds to possibly the longest most descriptive piece we've read of yours. To tight dude
23rd Jan 2023 10:59pm
Well all I can say is when you think you’ve seen it all, Poetspeak arrives on the scene to blow your mind a little bit. This was a fun one pen. Get some creep out.
Appreciate the high praise ME
THX
Appreciate the high praise ME
THX
23rd Jan 2023 9:58pm
Nice PS. Very nice indeed. Truly ekphrastic. Applause from the Welsh rock & hills.
23rd Jan 2023 11:08pm
Wow, that is some serious commentary on my dark and Sadistic tale of the creep laden forest. Had a damn good time writing this one.
Dig the Welsh praise. Righteous
Thx Rob
Dig the Welsh praise. Righteous
Thx Rob
23rd Jan 2023 11:33pm
Ever consider that she was waiting for you??? There are women who think like you too…
Love the sinister wood(s).
Awesome painting and poem and I dig that you had more to say than usual.
Love the sinister wood(s).
Awesome painting and poem and I dig that you had more to say than usual.
Working in the lumber business finally paid off with this creep fest.
I got a flannel shirt for Xmas that prompted this write. Maybe if I wear it for 6 months and don't wash it I can slide into this character for real ...
Thx Mary.. watch for me
I got a flannel shirt for Xmas that prompted this write. Maybe if I wear it for 6 months and don't wash it I can slide into this character for real ...
Thx Mary.. watch for me
24th Jan 2023 1:31am
You give her wet pussy orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
24th Jan 2023 1:35am
24th Jan 2023 12:38pm
You paint an image of horror. I felt I was there watching some nasty scene unfold. Yet the final verse brought it back to something less barbaric.
The painting takes you to the pine forest. I have walked among trees like that.
It is a very human and real piece of poetry. Taking a look at the darkerside of life. The side some people deny from existence.
regards
James
The painting takes you to the pine forest. I have walked among trees like that.
It is a very human and real piece of poetry. Taking a look at the darkerside of life. The side some people deny from existence.
regards
James
24th Jan 2023 12:41pm
My sister in law gave me a flannel shirt for Xmas that prompted thus horror. I may have to model the shirt before winter is over.
Thx James
Appreciate
Thx James
Appreciate
24th Jan 2023 5:23pm
It’s hot. I know it. You know it. Everyone should know it…at least once.
Fab art. A new favorite.
Xx
Fab art. A new favorite.
Xx
24th Jan 2023 6:57pm
Yeah, a lot of creep here. It's a good feeling to create that thrill.
Thx on the art. On or those I knew was going to come out well in the middle of doing it
BIG THANKS
X
Thx on the art. On or those I knew was going to come out well in the middle of doing it
BIG THANKS
X
24th Jan 2023 5:28pm
Ah! So that’s how you get your wood! :)
I like the painting and that you set a scene with it.
Interesting you started out in the 1st person and moved to the 3rd person.
Were you only watching?
Was there more than one person there?
Questions need to be answered
Flannel works!
I like the painting and that you set a scene with it.
Interesting you started out in the 1st person and moved to the 3rd person.
Were you only watching?
Was there more than one person there?
Questions need to be answered
Flannel works!
24th Jan 2023 7:02pm
I play all parts
Able to assume different positions...
It had been awhile since I let the creep out.
Stay tuned, I, might model that shirt....
Thx NG
Able to assume different positions...
It had been awhile since I let the creep out.
Stay tuned, I, might model that shirt....
Thx NG
24th Jan 2023 9:28pm
I jog in a forest that looks a lot like that. Mostly only worry about bears...
Super art, horny write
BIG LICK
I mean LIKE 😉
❤️k
Super art, horny write
BIG LICK
I mean LIKE 😉
❤️k
24th Jan 2023 9:31pm
We may have to collaborate soon my red punk maiden
Fuck in the woods first
Nobody has to know .....
❤
Fuck in the woods first
Nobody has to know .....
❤
24th Jan 2023 10:55pm
24th Jan 2023 10:59pm
Poetspeak is trolling the forest looking for delicate maidens for his pleasure .....
24th Jan 2023 11:21pm
funny there is an orchard I often trespass in the trees sometimes press in and remind me I could get lost here not knowing who lurked there...
24th Jan 2023 11:27pm
Ah, that could be a creepy exciting experience….
Think of the poems you could pen ..
Think of the poems you could pen ..
24th Jan 2023 11:33pm
I live on a commune kind of a place in the country there is an orchard across the street and my sister likes to wander there more than me...we both wander there often...
24th Jan 2023 11:36pm
24th Jan 2023 11:40pm
24th Jan 2023 11:45pm
Living with me is an exercise in madness and humor. Possibly eccentric…. I have a whacky sense of humor 🤠
30th Jan 2023 2:38am
A bit of horror and lots of erotica, great combination. Now we just need to sit around the campfire and hear more.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
30th Jan 2023 12:26pm
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