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Shower Senryu
a long hot shower
thoughts wandering here and there
now you’re on my mind
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
thoughts wandering here and there
now you’re on my mind
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
Published 19th Jan 2023
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20th Jan 2023 2:44am
20th Jan 2023 7:24am
20th Jan 2023 11:57am
Hoi hoi
A long hot shower
Hands wander everywhere
Mother’s spot braille
Thankyou for your inspiration.
And sorry that I stole half of your senryu!
If you want me to take mine off, I will do so.
Kind regards, Gus
A long hot shower
Hands wander everywhere
Mother’s spot braille
Thankyou for your inspiration.
And sorry that I stole half of your senryu!
If you want me to take mine off, I will do so.
Kind regards, Gus
20th Jan 2023 6:24pm
20th Jan 2023 8:01pm
