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miscreants
your touch are flowers
laid upon my
grave
as we walk through days
of darkness and
nights of
fire
we smile tenderly
at each other like
killers carving
murder into the
face of rain with
our thirst
drinking
satisfied
stomach's full
of
blood
laughing
at the world
burning
around
us
while no one
else takes
notices
the beauty
of it
all
Written by
buddhakitty
Published 15th Dec 2022
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Re. miscreants
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- Edited 15th Dec 2022 00:56am
15th Dec 2022 00:55am
miscreants same. RL
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15th Dec 2022 3:34am
Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 00:58am
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Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 1:10am
so passionate a feeling described here beautiful Kitty
yeah, just like that...
yeah, just like that...
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Re: Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 3:37am
Passionate. A word I seldom hear about my poems. Deeply appreciated, crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 1:21am
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15th Dec 2022 3:38am
I was on one that night. I get one right every now and then.
Appreciate the good words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Appreciate the good words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 3:47am
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Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 9:35am
Dear BK,
Yep. Second stanza feels like every day at present. Captivating piece. H🌷
Yep. Second stanza feels like every day at present. Captivating piece. H🌷
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15th Dec 2022 9:59am
Re. miscreants
15th Dec 2022 2:30pm
.............laughing at the world burning around us............... We have other cares and concerns.........
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15th Dec 2022 6:36pm
Re. miscreants
16th Dec 2022 6:31pm
You are an amazing and influential poet, BK... I adore your work but sometimes something in your pieces touches me deeper than others—Oh my lovely friend, this is one of those times.
It's a culmination of the whole poem for me, it's brilliantly evoked and deeply deeply felt.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
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*Nominated for Dec poem of the month
It's a culmination of the whole poem for me, it's brilliantly evoked and deeply deeply felt.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
🌹 💙
*Nominated for Dec poem of the month
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16th Dec 2022 8:29pm
Thank you, my dear Blue. I am deeply humbled by the nomination.
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty