Betwixt Exultation And Love's Torment

All so beautiful! This line captured me and made me read again and again.
"You float me easily
Into a new existential realm"

At times there's so much combined emotion and pure desire that two souls generate it can only fully exist in the moment within a new found realm of their own making.... I'm so glad you enjoyed reading.... It does my heart good to know you found beauty here... several times, is truly humbling..

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, dear poetess... It means a lot.

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This is melting the ice down here in Antarctica… way to go my dear…

Thanks for feeling the heat 🔥 LilD.
Glad you enjoyed.

Can't wait for further updates!
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Ah yes!

Like so many things, love demands its own share of homeostasis!  

That delicious yin and yang, where one balances out the other....and when together they both are monumentally stronger.... a true force to reckon with...
Love to them, feels multiplied.


I thank you for sharing your thoughts, MS. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed and took time to visit and say so

.....

Much love and appreciation,
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The intensity of desire and heat of passion know no limits. This leads to the guilt-free domain to reign. I love this when it goes like and see-saw. Wish you happy holidays with full of fire of passion.

Love and hugs,

KS

Hey there, KS
You're so apt, my friend!

The give and take of gentle but purposeful ups and downs, entwined with a deeper rapture that only exists within a place of complete trust and solemn oaths is to me, where the wonder and beauty of fulfillment lies

Happy Holidays to you and yours, my lovely.

It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
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Absolutely smashed clear over the bleachers go girl. So pleased you are back. Hope it's for good
Love and light
Ron xxx

Thanks for the kind words, my bravest Knight. 🙏🏻

You were and are a truly wonderful source of inspiration and creativity; allowing me to tap into my internal writing reservoir a little bit easier... I'm so happy you found this piece worthy of sailing over the bleechers.... I'm often questioning myself but your thoughtful comments hammered it home, erasing any worries....

It's such a pleasure to see you.... I missed you!

Much love
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Blu

a double pleasure...titillating envisioning wrapped in the masterful beauty of your use of language...so happy to have you back...you have been missed...Lawrence

You made me smile from ear to ear, dear Lawrence.... Thank you - 🙏🏻

I wrote this piece from a very personal place, so I'm beyond delighted that you felt what I wanted to get across.... It warms me so.

I missed you all, too.

A thousand thank you's.
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Season's Greetings
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OMG , every line is a like a breathless whisper, adding fuel to a fire that lingers deep.
Great work Blue.
And welcome back.

To leave you in the need of long deep breaths to regain composure is a dream and a hope... You do me the honor of being so beautifully affected... deep thanks for that, my lovely friend.

When I'm stripping back the layers in an attempt at finding the honesty in exposure, there will always be a small part of myself that's going to feel vulnerable and a little trepidacious. Opening up to reveal core truths is where the meat and potatoes lie.... I'm so glad you enjoyed my little morsel.

Don't know if I'm back but I couldn't help but put one out there.

Just glad there's someone left to read it and appreciate like you do.

Happy Holidays, Walter!
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Sultry ... Bless and love ... ..

VA-VA-Voom.... *wink!

You made my day, dearest FeNyX

Thank you.
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This is fabulous!!!!

Thanks so much for that lovely sentiment, dear lady.

I'm thrilled you enjoyed reading.
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xo

minutiae of sensation....

Just like magic is science that is as yet not fully understood, so too are the leftovers, that which has yet to be put into perspective, the as yet unintegrated.... that takes vulnerability because it doesn't happen to us but rather with us....

Sometimes we want someone else to bring the heat, when in fact it's an exothermic/ endothermic balance. The heat is brought out.....

Hi, RT ;p

It's that notion of 'want' or way of thinking that I've probably already experienced or had interaction with that I thought meant that there wasn't much more left to take advantage of, only to realize just how how wrong I was with by sheer abundance of just much was indeed still untapped and undiscovered.... For me it's the glory of that exultation... A realization, made.  

Allowing yourself/myself the honor and opportunity to be so vulnerable and open isn't always easy and honestly isn't usually my forte... I feel like I am an explorer of sorts and it's absolutely breathtakingly beautiful to peel dense layers back, in new a stark and revealing discovery.... I am still scared and/or trepidatious but less and less with time...

You're so correct, about wanting someone else to bring the heat or at least keep my feet held to the flames ... NEEDING it, is more like it!  



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xo

Giving ourselves permission is the balance of self-care and self-discipline.

You always narrow it down so wonderfully well, RT...


Thank you for that.... it was much needed.
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Swimming under water, singing a single note, holding a bite of ice cream....

These are temporary....and then they pass, to be taken up again.

Build up.
Assuaged sensitivities.

Edging.
Release.
Satisfaction.
Anticipation.

Echoes and reminders....
Dreams of lips on wet lips...

Again.

If another's words inspired this, it beggers the imagination what a man marking you his soul purpose would elicit. Brava! 🌼

It's actually a culmination of inspirations that infused and permeated until had no choice but to write and write what I desperately needed to get out.... Yes, and I too, often wonder what it would feel like and look like to be so marked upon with sworn and uncompromising fidelity... in kind.

You honor me with such a lovely and deeply searing sentiment, J.

A warmest and most heartfelt thank you.
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MMMMM...how I've missed you, Lady Blue❣ And how I've missed your poetry. This piece is a real tingle-maker. Sultry, seductive, romantic and replete with titillating imagery that thrill the senses. This passage made my vocal chords yearn for some reason to growl,  
"Deep internal growls...  
Can be heard rumbling wisely  
In an animalistic choral 'come hither'"  
 
And oh to feel "Scorched breaths" on my face and to hear "Aching mews of "Don't stop!."  
And the pic is super sexy...totally demonstartes sensual euphoria
Welcome back Goddess BB 🐻💞🐰

Dearest BB,
You make me feel like a million bucks, while also making me feel like a kid in a candy store! Your comments are filled with all the dreamy sweet treats that I long fantasized about devouring ... thank you!!!.. And thank you for being so beautifully open, supportive and motivating. I adore you and can't quite properly convey the scope of my sincere gratitude. I deeply love that you missed me... trust me, it was likewise! Your a bastion of wonderful and poignant reads that always hit me hard with all your killer senryú/ haiku might!

The lines you've chosen within, are some of my favorites, too... Being driven to my baser instincts is so powerfully alluring and something that just had to have a 'hat tip'...

You are my joy, my lovely.
Much love and my deepest appreciation.
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"Sandpapered whisper" - perfect!  

Well hello Blue.  You showed up bang'n!  My right arm is getting a workout, from carrying a dictionary!  Because your plethora of vocabulary within this makes it a higher rung of desire for sure.  

Excellent craft!  Good to see you sharing with us!

Hey, you.

Glad you enjoyed that line.... me, too... ;p

Har Har Har... my vocabulary isn't any more vast than yours, I don't feel.... I think I just arrange them differently... lol... but I do appreciate the compliment and your thoughtfulness in thinking I have any type of bar that I set for myself (I don't, btw) The words come and go as they choose to do....  

Your 'excellent craft' is high praise... I'm thankful for it and for you.

Happy Holidays to you and yours, if I don't see you again!... I hope you enjoy the season.  

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-B

Hoi hoi
What a beauty, this poem.
I’ll be back later to try and digest it fully.
Thank you!!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi

Awww... much obliged, dear Gus.
Take all the time you need.... I'm grateful for any visit you can make time for.

Be well and be safe out there, my dear.
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Your eloquence has organic flow, the cadence of the piece is razors edge vibrating passion and chemistry. I really encounter such proportionally and a subtly struck eros, that place of surrender that borders on mutually assured destruction. You have masterful command of your voice.

Hi, Daniel ;)

To balance upon the razor's edge of passion and chemistry is such an amazing compliment, deep thanks for thinking so. I write what comes, when and if it does; sometimes it's just there and others it comes a little bit at a time...I just never know.

I am so enormously pleased that you found something that potentially spoke to you. It makes me hopeful that you felt like I had command of my voice. I think that's still a work in progress but I know that I am my own harshest critic... by far!

I hope your construction is going well and that you've avoided any hiccups. Sending out wishes for a smooth time there and for a very festive and joyous holiday season.

Seeing you on my page is always a huge treat....I am lucky to have you visit.

Much 💙
-Susan

It was my pleasure honey. 💖

Bluevelvete I'll make you a woman all night and day long.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.  You should wear what woman In picture is wearing, because it will look good on you.

lol... That's quite a claim, Francisco!!... and who knows maybe that woman in the picture is someone familiar?!?!.... or not.... It's a mystery!

Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my lovely.
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I first read this while at work
Came back for an encore

An excellent nightcap indeed!!

Wow, you leave me with a Cheshire Cat-like grin as I ready for bed, myself.  
 
Thank you for that, Naajir.  
I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it... yet again.  
 
Sweet dreams ✨  
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Susan I gasp for breath,

Girl, this is exponentially magnified poetry power to the hundredth degree and beyond. Each phrase is etched upon my mind as recognition follows me upon my roving eye on your words. Not a word was forgotten or unrecognized. You molded this into the shape of a desire that singes the soul. Your whole was so passionate I reviewed for passages that stood out but they all were miracles of the language. Here is one that epitomized your art:

Twine shadows conjugate sweet lustre
Pacing each promise
betwixt exultation and love's torment
Overseeing a fierce cascading rhythm
Fixated
Eye to Eye

There is genuine magic in your golden verse that sings to me a song of passion become love. And your beat goes on for eternity.

Love you honey,
John

My darling poet,

I honestly can say my heart skipped a beat, reading these otherworldly comments. I think you're one of the sparse few who are able to completely understand my thought process and how I incorporate my ideas that the way I do into my poems. I am truly fortunate to be so lucky, as I am, to have your wonderful depth of insight.

The true magic is the kind you continue to stoke the flames of inside me.... Enormous amounts of returned love to you, too, my sweet soul!

-hugs-
Susan

Sexy as always dear Blue...takes one's breath away.:) <3

Dawww... you made blush, Dear Grace!!

Thank you bunches for thinking so.
I'm so grateful and happy to see you 🦋

Hope you are doing well... Sending out warm wishes for a happy and joyous holiday season.

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xo

Thank you, I appreciate the kindness.

Welcome back to DUP!
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45 comments wow!
             
                    🍻   🍷  🎄  A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOURS  🎄 🍷 🍻
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(someone said you're hard of hearing) hmm, what?

Thank you so much for your lovely holiday wishes, dear Rew. That was very thoughtful and kind. I deeply appreciate it and I hope you and yours a most joyful and prosperous new year ahead.
Sorry for the late reply, it's been very hectic and beyond busy these last few weeks and I haven't really been on DUP all that much!

(Yes.... I am blushing at the comment total... it's beyond all that I could hope for and I'm truly grateful for each and every one!)

lol... If you're loud enough, I'll hear you eventually! ... 😂 😂

Much love and deepest regards,
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-Susan

Susan,
My fondness for your love poetry leaves me hopelessly searching for the words
to articulate a proper response to this masterful write.
Your passion can deeply be felt with every verse.
Your words have a ''pulse'' that reverberates through my heart.
Your poem truly comes to life with the intensity of your unparalleled poetic genius.
I am genuinely enamored by your brilliance and yearning expressed in this exquisite write.
Will you marry me??? Hahahahaha
I want to bathe in your ink superstar!!!!

OMG! You're a sight for sore eyes, my dear Ron!
I haven't been on DUP participating for a while now, so returning to read your lovely comments leaves me feeling such a beautifully warm and refreshing sense of care ... Oh how it permeates and leaves me aglow from head to toe. Thank you.

I guess now you're officially my DUP fiancé....
🤵🏻‍♂️👰🏻‍♀️Hardy Har Har.... 😂 😂 😂

I hope we can officially celebrate 🎉 proper *wink*until then, have a very happy new year, my dear sweet hubby to be!!

Much love and all my deepest appreciation,
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-Susan

Beautiful.
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Thank you, my dear KP.... 💙💙💙
xo

it's a sensual read indeed !!!

i just love how your poems made me feel <3

Vick,
You made me smile ear to ear, my lovely friend!
I'm truly humbled and touched that you feel my ink like you do.... what a beautiful thought- thank you.

I can assure you that the feeling is mutual... your pen is always such a motivating and immensely moving force... One that I'm enormously glad is still showing us how beautiful poetry is crafted.

Much love and all my deepest appreciation,
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x

No longer a kitten, awoken as a tigress.

Like the line, “Stir my wickedness” – your carnal desires bubble.

Captivating piece when the right “healer” cures past emotional wounds, making your core desire stronger; becoming a passionate no prisoner lover.  “Dr Love” has healed you.  They a fortunate person.

Hey, Leo... ;p

I can't tell you how much I love your personal takeaway from reading this piece, my lovely. It's nice to hear, considering I was called 'fat' with a big ass, because of the image I've chosen to use as an accompaniment here... It's amazing to me, how easy some people fling their cruelties when it's done safely behind a keyboard surrounded by the protection of internet and anonymity. It's still surprising, though.... I admit... and hurtful... which I guess is the point. So, yes, they sadly succeed but your kindness scours away the majority of that pain to highlight the beauty of ecstasy in finding one's own rapture and all the wonderfully wicked delicious twists and turns therein.

Thank you for seeing what you do.... it's brilliant and has brought me back to life...
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x

Eros in every sense of the word.
Taunt and captivating.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

The depth of the passion you described left me wanting more. Your words are ✨ magic