Temporary Grave

Great piece for a comeback kid, we like this, tight

Hahaha

Comeback kid - I love it.
Thank you for your snaps Meme!!

When writing I like to start somewhere
and end up somewhere else. Sort of like a journey
inside a song/poem. hahaha

“I’m doing fine
Got veins that vine”
Love the determination. Excellent poem.

Hi Her:)

Thanks chica:)
Always find the brighter side of life
even when it's pressing on you.
Or at least try:)

Thanks for the RL lovely!

Righteous spill Hot Sauce 🔥
My money is always on you
You should get award for Upbeat Poet of the Month

BIG LIKE

Hey PS!!

Thanks for the righteous!!
It's such an awesome word. hahahaha
That you think I'm deserving
means more than the award amigo:)

Thanks for stopping by!!
Still loving your style buddy:)

You come out of your temporary grave a better person. Keep on fighting. Keep on writing.

Hey there Cisco!!

You should always think of a bad spot as temporary. Even
under the worst circumstances in my opinion.
Time moves and so will you eventually:)

Hope you had some great turkey and enchiladas for thanksgiving.

Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Magnificent!

And line 5..."Got veins that vine"...brings to mind the famous seventeenth century erotic poem by Robert Herrick titled..."The Vine".

Hi MS

I need to check out that 17th century erotic poem!!
Thanks for the info!
So glad you enjoyed my veins that vine. hahaha

Seriously going to check that out:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting

Here to offer some water or do you prefer wine to quench your growing needs...most excellent A

Hey Tim:)

You know I was going to add red wine into that section but
took it out last minute. LOL
Thanks for the snaps on this buddy:)

And so Del goes "Boom!".

"... a garden of verses"  - nice!  

Although I myself have gotten away from rhymes, I still can appreciate the skill of it when the flow and continuity is there, such as yours here.  Well done.
And the anthem that it speaks is also enriching to read, and perhaps take some motivation from for ourselves.  
I love it.  Positive messages are a blessing to me right now. So thank you for this.

Hey Styx

You are most certainly welcome handsome:)
We all need some positive reinforcement.

Life is unpredictable and can
hurt in moments. Gotta remember it will pass - if you let it go:)
Glad I can make you feel good even if its just in a reading.

Thanks for the RL and commenting!!
Woop Woop

I love to go Boom - hehehehe

You've earned extra frosted flakes, young lady.  

Great cause they are my favorite cereal. Has to be frosted
not the unfrosted. Who eats unfrosted anyway?

Weird people that's who!!! hahaha

Bitter, unsweetened people.  That's who!  Non exciting, generically existing blanks of a soul. That's who.  Lol

People who use sweet n low to sweeten their tea instead of
real sugar!!  I know you feel that one. LOL
Or worse - they use Equal!!  
I'm on a roll here. hahahaha

Awesome just Awesome loved the fight in this
Love and light
Ron x

Hey Ron:)

Swing for the fences buddy:)
So glad you enjoyed and gave me
two Awesomes. hahaha
You rock!!

Thanks for the RL and commenting on my stuff!
Woop Woop

Short but fierce 🔥 had a wicked pause in between slices,making the words and message feel sharp and fatal. Really, no coming  back from this one.but like my grandma always said,,,if you’re not happy smash a beer bottle over the fucks head and smash the gas!

Hey Jigg:)

Dude - thank you so much for the comment. Your
grandma sounds awesome and feisty. Love that!!

I will take that into consideration but then I would have
nothing to write about:)

thanks for stopping by and commenting:)

Dear A,

Temporary is the key turn phrase here. It might feel like an awful feeling or event will last forever but eventually it turns and light shines through. I think this write wonderfully expresses life’s endless series of problems and solutions, ebbs and tides. I hear a song in this. I’m totally envious of the rhyming. Brilliant write. H🌷

Hi H:)

This is true. You might feel stuck in a rut but it's not the case.
There is a lot to be said for being patient and figuring things out
on your own. Really get inside your mind and analyze what the issue is. Sometimes fear of change can really grip you.

Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday.
I just finished a slice of pumpkin pie with lots of cool whip!!

Thanks for the RL and commenting:)

Wonderful write! The desire to keep going against the darkness is inspired! Keep blooming 🌹

Hi NG:)

Right!  So glad you enjoyed this piece. We all need a little
shine when things are cold and crumbly.
You keep blooming too!!

Love your pic
Sexy Mama!!

I need to borrow some of your positivity & fight today. Thanks for sharing.
❤️k

Hi BK:)

Take all you need lovely. Plus some more:)
Rooting for ya BK.

Thanks for stopping by and swing for the fences!!

Wow! You make being 'buried alive' sound just so dandy. I must try it someday! Seriously, loved the write & haven't even begun to delve into its deeper meaning, lol. (Pardon the mini pun with deeper, buried deeper, well you know? ;-)

Hey Billy Blue:)

I see someone took their witty pill today. haha
So glad you enjoyed btw.
yes - in this buried alive is a frame of mind. How things can
totally take over your life and you don't realize it till your done
buried - deeper - you know buried deeper. hahaha

Thanks for stopping back Mr. Snaggy

What you mean is... how can things get any worse, right? Billy knows, he's been around a bit, not so much around, just getting old really. ;-)

We all are. Day by day:)
Actually my Bday is coming up so there is that.
But I'm looking forward to it.

Adelphina, you already have your shine on through this emotionally charged poem! This flows smoothly as molasses. And the metaphors are gorgeous. You really shine through your poetry. And I am honored to be one of your readers.

Xo
John

Awhh - Hey John

You truly are a golden human being amigo. Thank you so
much for gracing me with your presence this evening.
I truly appreciate everything you said in this comment.
I'm honored to have you read it buddy:)

Thanks for the RL and stopping by

bloom and grow

Hey James

That's the plan amigo:)

thanks for commenting buddy

There's a symphony of time and tide within the smoothly flowing voice, which is somewhat wry. It's beautifully elucidated.

Hi Daniel.

Thank you so much for this comment. Was in a mood when I wrote this - and yes - I can be a bit of a smart ass.  But I will do it with some style and rhythm. At least I will try:)
As writers, I love the fact that we can make something out of nothing.
All we need is our brain words.

Thanks for the RL and stopping by.

I will help dig you out Adel. ;)
Because I am worried about you down there.
Got veins that vine, getting ready to climb.
I love that... I love the unique rhyme and rhythm.
Such a gorgeous flower, always blooming...
Your garden of verses is spectacular.
You have definitely grown your own sense of style...
Always hoping to shine a bit more light on you chica!
But you always shine bright, wherever you are...

Hi Kristina:)

Thank you so much for the help. Of course you'll help - cause we're cool like that. hahaha
We all have moments amiga. This write has a lot of double meanings for me. Growing while life is on pause was the biggest for me.
In other words, I'm here - I'm going to make the best of it
while I'm here and see what happens. Our moods are so influenced by our surroundings. For me, that's why writing is so important.
They are my vine lines. hahaha

Thanks for stopping by and the RL  chica:)
It's always lovely to hear from you.
I've been MIA for a couple of days so fixing to do some
reading in a bit.

I love how the first stanza really sets the tone of piece, hopeful and powerful. I enjoy your descriptive style and I love
" Got veins that vine/  Getting ready to climb." Thank you for your words :)

Hi Q:)

You are most welcome!
Keeping hope alive can be challenging in
hard times but you gotta try. LOL

Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)