Glass Cup Lips

Very clever and well conceived!  Reminds me a bit of Lyn Lifshin's "Not Made of Glass" series of poems, but yours is an original take.  Good write!

Hi PW:)

hahahah - What can I say - I just kinda went for it. LOL
Love that freaking song!!!!
It just made me want to write something about glass
and love - so I came up with this.

thanks for the RL and enjoying this little escape:)

Hey Stevo!!

If I'm not smiling I'm dying amigo. hahaha
Wanted to find a way to combine glass and love
and I came up with this.
And I'm addicted to the song - so there is that. LOL

Thanks for the RL buddy:)
Hope you are having a great evening - it's Friday!!!
Woop Woop!!

Awwhh - thanks Steve:)

You are a sweetie pie!!

Great job, awesome read. Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx

Hey Ron!!

So happy you enjoyed buddy.
Thought I'd try something with a little heat in it. LOL

Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

nicely done Adelphina, i am thirsty.

Hi James:)

Then mission accomplished. hahaha
You are awesome - so glad you enjoyed!

Thanks for the RL buddy:)

Enigmatically phrased and surrealistically exhortative...and yet I still find myself hoping that safety glass is what is being described.  

I never thought of glass as being so inviting...before now!

Hi MS

I Just thought how our mouths could be like cups. hahaha
My mind just went there so I tried to make it engaging and interesting to read. LOL

No safety glass - you just need to be careful. LOL

Thanks for the RL and commenting!!

Dear A,

Those fellows may be thirsty but this piece is singeing with heat and sizzle! There is so much fire between the lines. I lived an evening or two like this. Ah the sweet memories…I’ll have a glass of whatever you’re having 😉
Wonderful write. H🌷

There's my girl H!!

So happy I brought back flavorful drinking memories. hahaha
Wanted to make this fun and engaging to read. So mission accomplished!! yeesss - hehehehehe.

Thanks for the RL and stopping by lovely:)

Great write with a great song from yesteryear
Romantic and fun
You've got a perfect face for cradling
Boom
Score

BIG LIKE

Hi PS:)

Awhh - thanks for your snaps on this.
Was in a kissing mood buddy. hahaha

Love when my face gets cradled.  
It demands my attention in a way. LOL

Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)

Listen pal, I can't have you changing up from Yosemite Sam to Jessica Rabbit!  

First you let your hair down, then you start writing like this!  My world is broken!

You do know by now I'm sensitive to sensory overload, right?   Why the torment!  

Okay, fine.  Change the rules.   (Shhhh, I like it!)

This is an awesome, eye opening write from you!  The symbolic choice of glass,  I actually see a hint of demurity even in the boldness.  I know it goes with the song, but you chose to go with it.  

Good write!  I'm trying to contain my smile as I write this.  Some surprises are good after all!

Hey there buddy - hahaha

Just wanted to write something fun and seductive. And well
I like a good kiss so I rocked this little glass cup. hahaha
It's good to change things up and expand my senses into overload. LOL.

I'm totally here to torment you - Demon Angel remember? - duh

Breaking rules - what rules - huh - where are they?  
I think they are in your pirate boat somewhere - ask you little rainbow splashed bird on your shoulder - Captain Marco Polo. hahaha

Keep smiling!!

Thanks for the RL and stopping by for a comment amigo

Who wouldn't want that experience..inviting Amiga :)

Hey Tim:)

Mission accomplished then. hahaha
Just something I wanted to try and capture in a cup.
I enjoyed the challenge of it to be honest.
And FYI - it is an amazing experience - hehehehehe

later gator

Drink from my wishing well! Are you serious???I love that line🔥❤️ this was creative and seductive.well written 🤘

Hey Jigg!!

Glad you enjoyed that line - totally serious - hahahaha.
Just expanding my imagination a bit with this. Love the song
and got inspired to write about glass and love.

So glad you enjoyed:)
Thanks for stopping by!

You break them; you buy them!  But then you own them 💋 Cheers!🍷  

Hi NG  
 
We do - don't we. hehehehe  
Salud!  
 
Thanks for the RL and stopping by chica:)

You are drink the golden nectar of the gods.  Keep on writing.

Hey Sisco!!

Just something I wanted to try out.
My mind goes all over the place when listening
to music that inspires. LOL

Thanks for stopping by:)

So does my mind.

You took the Blondie inspiration and flew with it! This is an enchanting and profound reflection that gravitates me into a world with the delicacy of glass. Your metaphor of your lips as glass really worked for me totally. The finesse with which you pulled off the analogy is a wonder to behold. A delight to read and contemplate. Your poem lived up to its muse. And we are happier to read.

Xo
John

Hey John:)

You totally killed this comment!!  Loved everything you said in this.
You totally made my evening with this rocking comment amigo.
So I guess we are both happy right now:)

Thank you so much for reading and the RL amigo:)

Cute
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God bless you


New erotic poetry coming soon

Hey Trome!

So glad you enjoyed -lol

God bless you too amigo:)

Though it is not a long write you give the reader so much room for interpretation you are a mind expander.

Hey Jazz

So happy I can expand your mind amigo:)
I enjoy the notion of less is more. When you really pack your poems with enough visuals and metaphors  - mission accomplished:)
Honestly - I can talk your head off. LOL
These are great practice for me. hahaha

Lead crystal kisses? WOW! 24% or higher (Lead content). You really don't have to answer that!

Hey Billy!

So you enjoyed the ending with the crystal kisses.
You don't have to answer that. hahahah

Thanks for stopping by buddy and leaving a comment:)

Not seen your writings before today but seems I may need to go back in read bravo

Hi Liam:)

I've been here a little over a year now but post randomly.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Hope you enjoyed some of my other stuff as well.

Heh.
Halfway through my first reading of this eloquent vibe,
I realized I was reading it too fast.
I started over, slowed my thoughts and let your words marinate like
Quality tequila and a good smoke.
I'm good now.
Thx for posting this.

Awh - hey thanks.

Glad you enjoyed. What a great comment!!

Tequila and a smoke - perfect pairing for this reading.
Thanks you so much for taking the time to read and leaving
me your thoughts:)

We do have our ways, don’t we?
🔥
Love, love, love this!

Hello Her:)

Thank you so much!!
We certainly do - hahahaha

You are positively glowing in your avatar lovely!
keep smiling:)

Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your kindness. Your pics are always so vibrant and lovely.

Awh - thanks:)
You've just made my evening!

Hi, Adel

I knew, when I first read this over a week ago, that I would have to return when I had a little more time, to give you a response.

A delicate -- if not detrimentally fragile -- piece, I daresay!  Its smooth ellipse points not only glide the reader's mind from point of entry to point of departure into another world; it also creates that uninterruptible dreamscape sauna that makes the whole resemble "a kiss to die for."

Structurally, your diadic rhymes in a triadic linear assemblage (AAB) demonstrate your understanding of the liberties of literary form.  For me, the rhyming couplets (AA) signify completeness and resolution, while the third line of each stanza (B) seems to bring on the "Sturm und Drang" that waits hopefully for its own resting place.  You maintain the pattern seamlessly through stanzas 1-4, and then throw the reader into total disarray in the last, whose reason without rhyme is probably the outcome of the poem's climactic abandon or suspended animation.

Subtlety, depth, and calculated intrigue are the fashion points of this wonderful work.  I truly enjoyed reading it.

Hey Cab

That is quite the comment amigo. When writing I wanted to focus
on the feeling and experience. How I hear it in my
head and how it sounds in my mind.

The way you broke this piece down is so educational for me. I've never really paid attention to AAB or AA or B. It's more of a feeling for me. So to say that I appreciate this lesson in an understatement. Thank you so so much for responding with your strategic insight on poetry. Loved it!!