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Problematic
too much me
not enough them
they rather see love and tranquility
once I start getting some
then you'll start getting some
so I say
I'm not young enough
not old enough
don't have the right amount of faith
or kiss enough butt
can't like the things I like
can't talk about the things I want
otherwise I might get shunned
don't play well with others
I have a big mouth
saying the truth way too often
I don't lie to them enough
my poetry isn't real "art", so they say
it's too rough
too pornographic
too immature
guess all great artist played it safe
or so it seems
problematic
I wear that like a badge
next to my heart
best to ignore me
you probably would
if it wasn't for
these gigantic balls
not enough them
they rather see love and tranquility
once I start getting some
then you'll start getting some
so I say
I'm not young enough
not old enough
don't have the right amount of faith
or kiss enough butt
can't like the things I like
can't talk about the things I want
otherwise I might get shunned
don't play well with others
I have a big mouth
saying the truth way too often
I don't lie to them enough
my poetry isn't real "art", so they say
it's too rough
too pornographic
too immature
guess all great artist played it safe
or so it seems
problematic
I wear that like a badge
next to my heart
best to ignore me
you probably would
if it wasn't for
these gigantic balls
Published 24th Nov 2022
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24th Nov 2022 9:35am
24th Nov 2022 9:47am
wouldn't want to do it if I did.
thanks, friend. the read is much appreciated :-)
thanks, friend. the read is much appreciated :-)
24th Nov 2022 10:38am
24th Nov 2022 11:04am
I plan to keep on bringing it. That is if I don't explode from too much turkey later haha.
Thanka for the read, friend 😁
Thanka for the read, friend 😁
26th Nov 2022 00:53am
Arts meant to make you feel things. You certainly make that happen. I love this poem. Wish ya well DevilsChild
26th Nov 2022 2:37am
Hey BlueBeastGirl 😁 hope all is well with you, and also hope you had a great thanksgiving.
That is very true. Art is all about the feeling.
Thank you very much for the read. Very much appreciated.
That is very true. Art is all about the feeling.
Thank you very much for the read. Very much appreciated.
