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Mmm.. The Cake Is On Me
Thy Apollo unto my stars at night you shine
The moon dance I beguile your eyes on nigh
Let my alluring whispers beseech in the calling of midnight
Radiance of the rhapsodize illuminate as stalwart souls take flight
Oh yes…
I feen for his love when he has me on my back, satisfied, in the moments of keeping me, wet
Enveloping words to make my heart melt
In the midst of energy surging, heighten souls purging, endorphins merging
Overflowing within me the current of his grunting release
Bathing the elongation of his soul in the wetness of my need
My moistened sugar walls tightening in the nature of his greed
The moon dance I beguile your eyes on nigh
Let my alluring whispers beseech in the calling of midnight
Radiance of the rhapsodize illuminate as stalwart souls take flight
Oh yes…
I feen for his love when he has me on my back, satisfied, in the moments of keeping me, wet
Enveloping words to make my heart melt
In the midst of energy surging, heighten souls purging, endorphins merging
Overflowing within me the current of his grunting release
Bathing the elongation of his soul in the wetness of my need
My moistened sugar walls tightening in the nature of his greed
Published 14th Oct 2022
| Edited 8th Sep 2024
Author's Note
In dedication to a very handsome a charismatic poet, my friend, poet Tenderloin on his special day..
Mmm.. much poetic love to you to the moon and beyond, always
SKC
Mmm.. much poetic love to you to the moon and beyond, always
SKC
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14th Oct 2022 11:48pm
16th Oct 2022 4:29am
A very unselfish thought from my friend, is always such a blessing, and thank you for taking the time to read and adding an awesome comment
Please enjoy your evening and may a fabulous Sunday greet your presence and given rewards throughout the day...
Please enjoy your evening and may a fabulous Sunday greet your presence and given rewards throughout the day...
16th Oct 2022 9:50am
my Sunday will be fabulous having you as a dear friend stay blessed and safe
15th Oct 2022 2:02am
Wish your friend a happy birthday. Make sure your friend has a good time on his birthday. Keep on writing my Queen.
16th Oct 2022 4:33am
Aww... thank you my handsome poet, that means a lot because that poet has been a dear poetic friend indeed, in as much, thank you for scribbling well wishes upon my canvas in regard to the poem.
Please enjoy your Saturday evening and have a remarkable Sunday.
Please enjoy your Saturday evening and have a remarkable Sunday.
16th Oct 2022 7:04pm
17th Oct 2022 1:59am
15th Oct 2022 4:39am
16th Oct 2022 4:36am
Your words are taken with much regality, and very much appreciated in merit and with respect.
Please enjoy your evening and may a restful Sunday embrace your tomorrow.
Please enjoy your evening and may a restful Sunday embrace your tomorrow.
15th Oct 2022 7:36am
Lovely birthday wish (now I cotton on what the cake in the title was about). Enjoyed the sensuous flow. Favourite lines:
Bodies in fluidity quivering, anticipating in the receiving, giving in the taking
In the midst of energy surging, heighten souls purging, endorphins merging
Overflowing within me the current of his grunting release
Bathing the elongation of his soul in the wetness of my need
My moistened sugar walls tightening in the nature of his greed
Bodies in fluidity quivering, anticipating in the receiving, giving in the taking
In the midst of energy surging, heighten souls purging, endorphins merging
Overflowing within me the current of his grunting release
Bathing the elongation of his soul in the wetness of my need
My moistened sugar walls tightening in the nature of his greed
16th Oct 2022 4:49am
Well thank you sincerely my wise poet for taking the time to leave a beautiful summary in tow and that thankfulness extends for reading.
Have a delightful church service as well...
What does... "Now I cotton' mean..
Have a delightful church service as well...
What does... "Now I cotton' mean..
16th Oct 2022 7:33am
'Cotton on' in English vernacular means you realise something that did not come to mind immediately. In this case I realised the cake was a birthday cake. (Otherwise it might have been food that was being used in lovemaking - I recall story of an aristocrat who used to pelt his mistress's body with cream cakes, then lick them off.)
17th Oct 2022 2:01am
Thank you for the clarification, my wise poet... and have a blessed Monday any day going forward...
