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Har Megiddo (הר מגידו)
Har Megiddo הר מגידו
In the time that is yet to come
on an ancient battle plane,
Har Megiddo is the chosen one
that has been foretold to be the place.
The word will be the weapon
that cleanses all that has become profane,
this coming will be the second
heralding the dawn of the final change.
The warriors are carefully chosen,
light and dark are the sides they claim,
the ranks filled with the denizen,
the losses will be a woeful shame.
Where will you be at this time,
will the mark of darkness be displayed?
Hopefully I will be beyond this wartime,
not witness to how humanity has fallen and decayed.
*Har Megiddo הר מגידו / Armageddon
Gypsy red
March 2012
In the time that is yet to come
on an ancient battle plane,
Har Megiddo is the chosen one
that has been foretold to be the place.
The word will be the weapon
that cleanses all that has become profane,
this coming will be the second
heralding the dawn of the final change.
The warriors are carefully chosen,
light and dark are the sides they claim,
the ranks filled with the denizen,
the losses will be a woeful shame.
Where will you be at this time,
will the mark of darkness be displayed?
Hopefully I will be beyond this wartime,
not witness to how humanity has fallen and decayed.
*Har Megiddo הר מגידו / Armageddon
Gypsy red
March 2012
Published 29th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2012 7:38pm
Well done...a subject that I have done and worried over...the last line is a great closure
29th Mar 2012 8:01pm
Yes, it is a subject for much conjecture and worry. Thank you so much for your generous comment.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
29th Mar 2012 8:00pm
you have so much knowledge that you put into poetic art..I learn some thing from you all the time..brilliant!!! peace Crim :)
29th Mar 2012 8:05pm
I tell my best friend that I am overflowing with useless knowledge and she tell me(like you) that she learns from me all the time and that I am brilliantly mad lol, also that my knowledge is not useless if others learn from it.I guess so...
Thank you lovely Crim, for your visit and comment.
Thank you lovely Crim, for your visit and comment.
1st Apr 2012 5:16pm
Splendid write! Very timely for Christians! The line, "The word will be the weapon", Makes quite an impression being someone who follows politics!
1st Apr 2012 10:58pm
I suppose so Jazz, especially coming from a bonafide card carrying heathen lolol I believe in many things, just not the way bible thumping fire and brimstone Christians do. Glad you liked it.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
1st Apr 2012 11:17pm
Nice tight verse ... Who gets there first? Nostradamus, Huxley, Lindsay Anderson Bradbury, Arthur C Clarke, or any writing one of us? … G-d willing I and mine shall be pushing up daisies long before the Anti Christ rides to cut his teeth again ……….. Smashing write !!!
1st Apr 2012 11:47pm
Well thank you so much you are too gracious, I know to many this type of piece is not "their cup of tea" so to speak, but I feel, we, as writers should able to write(studiously so) about any and everything.
"I know a little about a lot of things, and a lot about even the little things" LOl How is that for a quote? lol
Gypsy red
"I know a little about a lot of things, and a lot about even the little things" LOl How is that for a quote? lol
Gypsy red
2nd Apr 2012 00:07am
'tis a good quote dear scribe. The best advice my elders gave when I but just a little thing was ... Know something about everything & Everything about something ...this type of write is just my cup of tea, little finger crooked of course (((LOL)))
2nd Apr 2012 00:13am
