There's Such Sights To Show You

You are turn me on with your naughty thoughts.  Keep on writing.

haha... Thanks for the vote of confidence, Francisco. I wasn't sure how this particular poem would go over, considering I just wrote it minutes after watching the new movie... Glad to see you enjoyed the nightmarish dreamscape!

I appreciate you
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make me imagine

I'm definitely glad you were able to brave my imagination.... there's much in store! Thanks for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts.  

Welcome to DUP
Please feel free to visit anytime.  

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B

Girl you got skilllzzzzz. You may need therapy but hey don't we all
Loved it, weird freaky sext,
Love and light
Ron xx

I love that!! Ohhh yeah!!!  
You're so awesome, my brave Knight!
hahaha...Part of my therapy is this, right here!! lol..
Perfectly freaky, sexy and ultra horrific, was my absolute thought process, so I'm all evil smiles 😈 you felt it like I was hoping!

Thanks for braving the read ;p
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I'm B- ...mixed together that makes negative BO...enjoyed your flight of fancy...L

To commingle on the most intimate of levels... ;p

Thanks so much for indulging in my little horrorfest, L.

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Captivating with this one… great movie… love where it took you…

Thanks for experiencing my little jaunt into some dark delicacies, LilD.

Hope you're doing well and enjoying the fall weather moving in...
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Hey B:)

Oh the title says it all!! hahahaha
This is truly spectacular write. The pic is awesomazing!!
Ties the whole piece in a chain link bow!!
Love that movie!! Classic horror.

Thanks for posting and sharing.

Hey there, A

The title is a classic line from the movie itself... it's always felt very creepy to me, so I'm stoked it caught your attention!

It's always a pleasure to have a new plaything wander into my nightmare!! *wink

Thanks for digging/feeling the vibe!

It's much appreciated, dear lady
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I love having you playing in my deep depraved games..... just no tears please it's a waste of such good suffering... Mwahahahaha!!!.. Oh that sweet sweet suffering... it will be legendary even in hell!!

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The box 📦has been opened! .... 👀 👀
What painful PLEASURES await...

Be careful what you wish for, Steve! 🫣😲😬
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What beautiful screams you must make....
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x

The sounds of such sweet suffering is music to my ears... what games there are still in store ....  endless pain and ultimate pleasures of the flesh... the screams of eternity in every second....

Giving and then taking all that there is... and then some more.. Brilliance becomes.... all that binds 😈

Mwahahahaha!!!!

I adore that you enjoyed my nightmare.

Just be careful....
of that box 📦

heh heh heh heh

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You have paid homage to hell raiser and The Cenobites here.  chilling imagery.
Regards
James

The pain and suffering is sweet and intoxicating... The sights that await.... Oh how they'll make you scream!!

Yes!
Pin head and the cenobites... my off the cuff 'shout out', indeed.

I'm so glad you could see where I was going...
Thanks for the visit, the list add and the kind words, James!

Happy Halloween
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B Velvet!!,

        Stem the bleeding were scars wipe tears. Rip themselves open revealing rivulets of unconcealed chaos. Single flash vulnerability lightning striking the harvest night in all their aching proof. This stanza in "There's Such Sights To Show You" will open the casement of thy ah brain and make u look at it, as it says, do u hear how thyself in female form is ah talking to u via this ah poem. She's ah teaching u who thy art and whom u shall ah be. Honesty within thine ah selfly in ah which u ah see. Excellent Ah Worth It Penmanship!!!!!🤜🤛🌷👅💋🍑🌈👄👁️🤎🤍🥥

You are the BEST at being motivational and finding what it is that speaks so loud to you and then letting me know how well that work edges on the poem ... I mean how cool is that?!?!.. It's amazing and totally awesome!  It's super meaningful to me, too. Thanks for finding this Hellraiser tribute poem as cool as you did!!

Yessss!!!

Be well and be safe out there!
🌹-B
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It's so ah cool, I ah gotta say u are welcome! And, I will be sure to stop by again and journey into the ah past. 👁️🍺🍹🥂🍻🥃👅💋🍑👄

good evening beautiful Blue this is wickedly stimulating
I was transported by the beauty of your dark write
so seductive and alluring... sin'sational 💕

To follow me into my nightmare is to surrender... Oh the sounds...sinful surrender, the sacrifice of flesh and feasting upon pain... That's where the cries of all the sweetest suffering can be heard!!

Welcome, my dear.... welcome!! *wink  

Be careful... not to turn the box 📦 the wrong way..

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This is so good, friend 😁 favorite lines "Blood washes away our sins
Your crimsin ink pen flows my O+
Writing me
from flesh and blood
to hearty bone"

Awesomeness 🤓

I was so excited for you to hopefully see this one DC! It literally fell into my lap after watching the remake of Hellraiser and I had it fully written in a couple minutes or so... which normally NEVER happens for me!  The horror vibe/blood was definitely flowing, I guess ...

I am so psyched that you found those lines as favorites... I was totally trying to channel my inner poetic cenobite!  😈

hahahaha

Beware and try to avoid having your soul torn apart.... the sweet painful pleasures of the flesh... are calling... ;p

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I am a big Hellraiser fan myself. Haven't seen the new one though. I love it when a poem just flows out of me. Some of the best are ones that just come out.

Yes, I can tell you very much killed it haha 😁

Btw; you have to have a soul for it to be torn apart,  muhahaha!!! 🧛🏼

heh heh heh heh... nice one!! 😂

Hoi hoi
À remake? I didn’t know there was a first one to begin with!
Even when you write about things where I don’t have a clue, your razor sharp writing takes me into the poem!
Fabulous!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Awww..
I think that's one of the best compliments I've ever received, Gus... Thanks so much, my lovely friend!

I guess you probably have to be a horror movie fan to know the Hellraiser movies....
Pinhead?... That scary movie monster figure? Never heard of him before?

No worries... it's a horror franchise that started in the 80's and there were a ton of subsequent sequels. This year they sort of remade it altogether.... More like a reboot I guess!

Hence, my inspiration.
https://youtu.be/oUlgwJNdu2I


It seemed perfect for Halloween!
I'm so grateful for your visits and you taking the time you do with me....It's special!

Much love,
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B

Symphony of dark and raw imagery woven into a portrait of erotically charged macabre that wraps around me like a vampiric story that travels beyond reason or rationality into a world of heady bone and desire. You have pulled out all the stops and made black magic of unconquerable delight. Better than the best horror movie because it is art of the highest kind. And I am most awed because I have never come across such a mating of macabre and art. You really brought this home completely.

Xo
John

Ohhh myyy...
To read your comments is to know that I hit upon a nerve where darkness and eroticism commingle into an art all their own..

I was inspired in the moment to write this off the cuff and I'm so very heartened by your encouragement and perfect takeaway from reading.  

It's not often that I incorporate these aspects together into a poem, so it means the world that it came across in a way that was effective and moving....

You are truly a great sounding board... I am unbelievably fortunate to have you in my corner, my darling

Biggest hugs and kisses 💋
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Susan

I loved your darker side.
It's a calm and chilling read.
I felt and loved the gloominess

Oh how a adore your comments, Vick

Thanks for diving into my nightmarish dreamscape and finding something that spoke to you... That's such a treat, itself.

Have a wonderful and Happy Halloween
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I am an aberration
You can't keep from dissecting  

This line appeals to the mad scientist in me…
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Yesss, I can see how that side of you would definitely find allure there, KP... I agree my bride of Frankenstein side, does as well...

It's not often that I find someone who can appreciate my darkness, so thank you.... for seeing what you do.

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xo

Lyrical?!... I wouldn't have guessed that.. but hey, I'll take it! What a very beautifully surprising compliment! Thanks, Ted.
I appreciate the read and you, for getting that this piece is a shout out to my love of all things creepy and ghoulish... lol. Halloween is absolutely my favorite time of the year, indeed!

Always a pleasure to see you... I'm grateful to be on your radar...

Be careful out there.... heh heh heh 😈

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-B

I couldn't help but think of two people, nude, sitting and facing each other. And giving each other tattoos.  If you think of Tatts, and read your poem again, hmmm.
The red color is ink, not blood (The pen).  The threat, but ultimately bearable, of pain is the tattoo gun.  
Each one of them doing their own ideas on the other person. Based on the moment.
Could be interesting!  Giving someone the freedom of expression, permanently!, on your body.  That, my dear, is bravery!  

Anyhoo, you, I love the depth of this. It carries your strength throughout it, even as you invite someone to take a chance.  That's how I see it anyway.  

Awesome and creative expression here.  Great write, young lady!

In all honesty, I wrote a way too long reply to your comments here that I could have sworn I submitted without issue until I just now read your message... Confused, I checked and low and behold, nothing is here... I mean really!?... .. Sometimes this place totally feels like it's out to get me....grrrr...

I apologize that happened.... Sincerely.

I won't try to redo what I spent too long replying with, maybe that's a sign for me to keep things short and sweet going forward.

You sounded like you were/are annoyed with me , so I'll thank you very much for how you visualized/ conceptualized what my ink felt like via that depicted scene you shared. I'm appreciative and grateful you took the time to leave that detailed takeaway.

I am far from confusing but understand why you feel as you do.

Again, I'm sorry things don't always work out like they're meant to.... It's the story of my life.

Be well and be safe out there,
-Susan

You beat me to the punch with your comments on Hellraiser for your title instantly conjured up said movie. The original one and the remake was not bad either .
Disturbingly beautiful poem, oh yes and written in visceral no mercy spades.
There is to be found an alluring agony bathed in crimson when writing and imagineering the beyond wicked,  alluring  dark ones.
Real captive beauty  transformed through chaos.
A willing captive seeking and finding constant  pleasure and drinking it in and to never let go.
Beautifully done BlueVelvete and thanks for sharing Hell's tortuous taboo.

I just couldn't let Halloween slip by without an ode to Hellraiser, could l!!

Tearing souls apart is a specialty!! Mwahahaaaa....
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The remake was ok; there's just something about the original that will always leave me feeling the creeps!

I am all gory graphic smiles that you found this piece disturbingly beautiful, which was my hopeful intent!

To enrapture one's senses with the spinning butcher's block of human flesh, is no easy task!!

I watched a documentary where the fetishistic tendencies that Larry had that lured him into becoming a science class display without skin, was also his utmost joy at the end! He was so into the extremism and his enamormemt with pleasure and pain that at the moment they show all the hooks in him; face body etc... He's almost smiling with pleasure, right before he gets torn apart! They ventured to imagine that he was also 'at attention' too.... Hahaha... Lol... I couldn't help but be even more fascinated, not realizing that fully, until now!

Alluring agony, indeed!

Thanks for sharing your killer thoughts and opinions with me, my lovely friend! I can't thank you enough for yet another kindred moment.

Much love and shared respect,
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-Susan

Loved the original and what it offered at the time Stephen King raved about it and Clive Barker and don't forget Clive Barker not only wrote it but also directed it.
King said of Barker...I have seen the future of horror and it's Clive Barker.
Great dark movie and terrific throughout, there's something about it years later.
And Susan I will up that Season Of The Witch poem and dedicate to your BlueVelvete name, unless you want Susan?
I can easily amend it.
Respect and dark blessings to you too Susan.
Oh! And Happy Halloween!!

Either is cool... You decide!
Thanks so much. ;p
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I went with Bluevelvete.
Hope you enjoy it.... and the pagan mayhem!!!!
S.

Perfect combination of horror with erotic undertones.
That third stanza drew me in, with vivid imagery and emotional pull.
Outstanding work Blue. Hope you had a great season.

The wind needs no reason to blow. It just does. Passion needs no reason to exist. It just does-no matter what form it takes. If everyone could accept that premises then the world would be filled with people less guilt ridden and anxious over their humanness.
Well done

hugs,
buddhakitty.

"As time withers away
the rhyme
and all the reason"

That's just awesome. The whole poem is downright magical, but these lines struck me hard. Thanks for sharing!

Mundus

Hey there, Mundus.... Lovely to have you back with us! ;)

It's often difficult to stand back and gauge how a poem I've written will be received, so I deeply appreciate that you felt that line and the piece as a whole, like you have. It was actually an ode of sorts to my love of horror movies and Hellraiser in particular... but I also hoped to to try to leave it vaguely ambiguous as well....

Thank you for feeling my words and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me... it means the world to.

I'll definitely be stopping by to visit in return!
Much love and warm regards,
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B