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Well Of Tears
Depression like a dark specter
lit upon my soul
kissing me deeply
stealing my very essence.
The fire inside me
that once burned so bright
turned to cool ash
the sweet taste of wine
now just bitter stones upon my toungue.
Left hollow feeling dead inside
my body so heavy as if made of steel
withering, fading, falling
into a well of my own tears.
lit upon my soul
kissing me deeply
stealing my very essence.
The fire inside me
that once burned so bright
turned to cool ash
the sweet taste of wine
now just bitter stones upon my toungue.
Left hollow feeling dead inside
my body so heavy as if made of steel
withering, fading, falling
into a well of my own tears.
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sorrowful...
Anonymous
28th Mar 2012 7:29am
sorrowful indeed! :( I feel the pain in this piece crim....
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deppression
29th Mar 2012 9:55pm
this is a great depiction of what deppression can make you feel like...
Well done!
Well done!
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re: deppression
29th Mar 2012 10:07pm
ty Firebyrd..you give me courage to post poems I usually wouldn't..I have schizophrenia like my mom did..I've submitted other poems talking about it but none as revealing as the one you gave me courage to post..hugs Beautiful lady and ty again..peace Crim
hopeless.....
30th Mar 2012 2:05pm
re: hopeless.....
31st Mar 2012 7:03pm
it's an old poem I never posted I don't feel like this anymore..ty Eric for dropping in..I enjoy your comments..peace Crim :)
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24th Apr 2012 7:52am
Depression is the worse .. This demon is so hard to fight. But you must. And I see you have beaten it. You go Girly :)
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re: ..
25th Apr 2012 8:20pm
I have my days when I feel depressed but for the most part it's gone..ty for your kindness Gg..peace Crim :)
Re: Well Of Tears
15th May 2012 7:08pm
Oh My this is heartwrenching and beautiful..fcxx..I suffer with days of depression too..today is one of them..this is a great write.
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Re: Well Of Tears
15th May 2012 7:14pm
i've been depressed myself lately beautiful lady so I understand..i'm sending you my best wishes and a big hug..peace Crim :)