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Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 1:38am
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11th Sep 2022 2:36am
Thanks so much, Brenda... I'm no master, but I try my best. It's good to hear from you, and I'm happy you liked the poem 😌❤️
Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 1:54am
Re: Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 2:40am
Thank you, Jigg... I'm pleased to hear that you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read it 😌
Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 2:55am
Dear NB,
The entire poem is simply lovely. That last stanza is 24k gold! This poem comes at rather interesting moment for me and I have to say I appreciated its timeliness in helping me to accept some things I can not change and the courage to on move on. Wonderful write.
H🌷
The entire poem is simply lovely. That last stanza is 24k gold! This poem comes at rather interesting moment for me and I have to say I appreciated its timeliness in helping me to accept some things I can not change and the courage to on move on. Wonderful write.
H🌷
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 2:55am
Let go the monster with negative evil thoughts and make new good memories. Keep on writing.
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 11:24am
Re. Ashes to Ashes
11th Sep 2022 7:13pm
Hey NB
I always enjoy reading your poetry. Not just the poem but the background you
choose for your pieces. Great style all around. Everyone already hit all
the high notes of your poem!! LOL
Thanks for sharing:)
I always enjoy reading your poetry. Not just the poem but the background you
choose for your pieces. Great style all around. Everyone already hit all
the high notes of your poem!! LOL
Thanks for sharing:)
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
13th Sep 2022 11:27am
Yes, sins are the most terrible thing in our life. When we cry them out, we feel much better. You expressed this idea in a very good and poetic way.
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
15th Sep 2022 3:13am
Love this. Sins are either what we believe them to be or what was forced as a young age. Love this and you. <3
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
23rd Sep 2022 6:14pm
Damn, that was a powerful piece with a gut punching stanza at the end.
Amazing work NB.
Amazing work NB.
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Re. Ashes to Ashes
12th Feb 2023 11:58am
Re. Ashes to Ashes
18th Feb 2023 7:55am
Started out thinking of David Bowie, then the work of Joan Baez, but by the end it is a vibe like Santana and "Europa".
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