Ashes to Ashes

hello Jimmy damn this is good...you're a master poet 💕

Thanks so much, Brenda... I'm no master, but I try my best. It's good to hear from you, and I'm happy you liked the poem 😌❤️

Let go of the monster you foster inside. Great ending! Nice one.

Thank you, Jigg... I'm pleased to hear that you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read it 😌

Dear NB,

The entire poem is simply lovely. That last stanza is 24k gold! This poem comes at rather interesting moment for me and I have to say I appreciated its timeliness in helping me to accept some things I can not change and the courage to on move on. Wonderful write.
H🌷

Let go the monster with negative evil thoughts and make new good memories.  Keep on writing.

Dark and beautiful. Well done.

Hey NB

I always enjoy reading your poetry. Not just the poem but the background you
choose for your pieces. Great style all around. Everyone already hit all
the high notes of your poem!! LOL

Thanks for sharing:)

Yes, sins are the most terrible thing in our life. When we cry them out, we feel much better. You expressed this idea in a very good and poetic way.

Love this. Sins are either what we believe them to be or what was forced as a young age. Love this and you. <3

Damn, that was a powerful piece with a gut punching stanza at the end.
Amazing work NB.

I love the embrace the last stanza gives.

LJ

Started out thinking of David Bowie, then the work of Joan Baez, but by the end it is a vibe like Santana and "Europa".

Well done. Could even be a nursery rhyme in a dystopian future.