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Initials Carved into Trees
Quagmire
Deep forest
Initials carved into trees
We left our love there
Moonless nights
Your youth running fever
My needs insane temptation
You seduced and challenged
Our lust serenade
No stone unturned
Deep forest
Initials carved into trees
We left our love there
Moonless nights
Your youth running fever
My needs insane temptation
You seduced and challenged
Our lust serenade
No stone unturned
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 1:11am
OMG this is beautiful! My two favourite things... trees and RED... and beautiful words to top it all off!! Be still my heart... 😍🤩😍
A+++
❤️❤️❤️k
A+++
❤️❤️❤️k
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 1:13am
You just made my night Red.
I thought of you when I did this painting awhile back.
Tree influences, why not !
Appreciate so much
❤❤
I thought of you when I did this painting awhile back.
Tree influences, why not !
Appreciate so much
❤❤
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 1:17am
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2nd Sep 2022 1:21am
Thank so much CF
Always great to get a visit from you.
RL is icing on the cake
Appreciate
Always great to get a visit from you.
RL is icing on the cake
Appreciate
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 1:33am
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2nd Sep 2022 1:38am
That's good
I might have done something right for a change.
You honor me Brenda
Love ya
❤❤
I might have done something right for a change.
You honor me Brenda
Love ya
❤❤
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 2:21am
Beautiful painting and the perfect
write to go with it. I have to admit
the line “ Your youth running fever”
says a lot in 4 words.
write to go with it. I have to admit
the line “ Your youth running fever”
says a lot in 4 words.
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 2:34am
I have to admit
I wrote that poem and saved it.
Hours later when I edited it I said to myself, damn did I write that?
Thanks so much NE,I appreciate your visit and comment
I wrote that poem and saved it.
Hours later when I edited it I said to myself, damn did I write that?
Thanks so much NE,I appreciate your visit and comment
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 4:51am
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2nd Sep 2022 11:39am
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 8:56am
Dear PS,
This write beautifully captures that intense heat between two people who can’t wait to be together. I love the idea of leaving a legacy of existence by the initials carving in a tree. Proof for that fleeting moment two people had that exquisite moment. The painting is an added gift of beauty to a beautiful poem. H🌷
This write beautifully captures that intense heat between two people who can’t wait to be together. I love the idea of leaving a legacy of existence by the initials carving in a tree. Proof for that fleeting moment two people had that exquisite moment. The painting is an added gift of beauty to a beautiful poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 11:44am
Dear H,
Thank you for your lovely comment and added RL.
The forest has many pleasures of this being one.
I lived near a state park growing up. This poem derives out of that time and the many trees bearing Initials. Funny how so many years later a poem becomes that memory.
Thx
❤
Thank you for your lovely comment and added RL.
The forest has many pleasures of this being one.
I lived near a state park growing up. This poem derives out of that time and the many trees bearing Initials. Funny how so many years later a poem becomes that memory.
Thx
❤
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 3:33pm
It’s been awhile since I’ve walked this path, and your words and strokes reminded me of what I’ve missed. You’re a true master wordsmith.
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
2nd Sep 2022 3:36pm
Damn Lo
It has been a long time ⌛
I hope things are good on your side and I'm happy to see you back !!
Appreciate your comment and RL !!
It has been a long time ⌛
I hope things are good on your side and I'm happy to see you back !!
Appreciate your comment and RL !!
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
4th Sep 2022 00:04am
Hi PS
Carved initials - such a lasting memory. Regardless if it lasts or not.
Automatically taken back to a memory without a photo.
Your youth running a fever is an awesome line!!!
Love all of the lines in you painting. Up and down strokes - amazing:)
Carved initials - such a lasting memory. Regardless if it lasts or not.
Automatically taken back to a memory without a photo.
Your youth running a fever is an awesome line!!!
Love all of the lines in you painting. Up and down strokes - amazing:)
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
4th Sep 2022 1:03am
Glad this rang true for you Adel,
Gotta admit that is a good line
How we remember our hormones running wild
What a feeling
The painting is different, one of my personal favorites
Digging your avatar, but you have a pair of shoes to match.....
Thx 🔥
Gotta admit that is a good line
How we remember our hormones running wild
What a feeling
The painting is different, one of my personal favorites
Digging your avatar, but you have a pair of shoes to match.....
Thx 🔥
Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
4th Sep 2022 1:09am
Working on it. LOL
I have red gladiator sandals
but nothing high. . . .yet.
The band is awesome!!!!
I have red gladiator sandals
but nothing high. . . .yet.
The band is awesome!!!!
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
4th Sep 2022 1:15am
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Check out the album
titled Ghosts on Tape!!!
Fave song Morbid Fascination:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JT2KUQpRNcY
titled Ghosts on Tape!!!
Fave song Morbid Fascination:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JT2KUQpRNcY
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4th Sep 2022 2:21am
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4th Sep 2022 2:22am
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
4th Sep 2022 2:42am
This might be one of my weirdest .....
I fingered her while watching the super bowl last
year
I think it was the same finger I accidently poked into the 10 layer black
bean dip from the big box store
I fingered her while watching the super bowl last
year
I think it was the same finger I accidently poked into the 10 layer black
bean dip from the big box store
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
6th Sep 2022 3:27am
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6th Sep 2022 3:30am
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2022 11:31am
What a captivating ink.... And the beautiful painting goes so well with the piece...what a delight ! ❤❤❤
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Re: Re. Initials Carved into Trees
7th Sep 2022 11:37am
It's a pleasure to see you on this poem ID.
Yes, young love. Burning hot and needing a place to be alone.
That was my take and my painting fit nicely with my words I believe.
I appreciate your comment and RL.
Many thanks !!
Yes, young love. Burning hot and needing a place to be alone.
That was my take and my painting fit nicely with my words I believe.
I appreciate your comment and RL.
Many thanks !!
Re. Initials Carved into Trees
19th Sep 2022 11:06pm
Magical and lustful. We can only dare imagine the details,.
Great work Poet.
BIG LIKE.
Great work Poet.
BIG LIKE.
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19th Sep 2022 11:09pm