Catching sunlight

Shagadelic!

haha... I giggle at that cute response, MS.
Thanks for the smiles! Your wit never disappoints!
I'm thrilled you found this piece shag worthy. I believe there are so many different ways to find each other's 'pressure points' of pleasure. There's such deep arousal in skill and knowledge; being confident in understanding exactly what you or your partner might need.... and delivering.

I love and deeply appreciate that you've taken the time to spend with me today.  ;)

Much love and hopes for many shaggedelic days ahead.... *wink!
🌹 💙
B

Ohhh purrrr... hubba hubba, indeed!!  

I was gathering my wits about me, after reading these comments! Plus there's just something about the yummy essence of authority that I pick up on which leaves me weak kneed, when being called "My little temptress"... Yes, Sir!  *wink

Ohhh that dense, deep growl worthy passion, where mutual rapture echoes out long and loud... So be it!! Throwing caution to the wind.... let everyone hear, see, feel .... real desire!!!

Adding that heated flavor of spice... is exactly my "sweet spot"... taste, and you'll agree!  😋

The rampage and rhythm of a particular kind of want, for me attracts the balance of chaos something that I believe to be.... light and dark.... yin and yang... chaos and tranquility... Polarity  

Ohhh the delicious kink, it inflames!  
... I love all the highlights you have chosen, my dear.... You, master my mindset and mood
 and I deeply thank you for it.  


Much love for all that you see, feel and deliciously express.  
🌹💙 - 💋  
↶(’ᴗˉ✿)Ψ

Mmmm.... and how very decadent it would be. ;p  
I get utterly lost in those senses of taste and smell.... They're linked together so viscerally and palpably so.  
 
Love that you found something potentially mouth watering here... *chuckles*... It's a thought like that which makes for a very happy Blue  
 
Thank you, Jay  
I appreciate you taking the time you do -  
It's always a pleasure to know your thoughts..
🌹💙  
B

Absolutely sextastic, a kinkfest of a read
Love and light beautiful
Ron xx

I do believe those are compliments of the highest order, coming from you, my lovely knight! Being the resident kink authority, you have made me feel like I accomplished that conveyance of fetishistic rough and tumble that leaves me riddled in goosebumps.... hopefully you were, too ;p

I bask in your love and light.... thank you.  
🌹💙  
B

Wish that was you and me, LOL.  Enjoy the wild ride of orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Oh those wishes.... lol... thank you, Francisco!
I giggled at your obvious charms and deeply appreciate you.

🌹-B

I'm your sexy charmer who charms the panties/thong off you,  LOL.

This is a sensory overload. You have taken the reader to the bedroom with you. The visuals ,the tastes , the odors, the sounds and touch. Almost a complete short film that each sense could  enjoy.  Could hear the fabric tear. Beautiful work my most gifted poetess.

Hey there, Keith  ;)  
Taking a deliberate delve into mutual deep seeded desire, the kind that knowledge and experience can (and do) enhance, becomes that very journey into a whole sensual sensory overload. Your thrilled accompaniment leaves me with such enormous satisfaction, a jolt of delicious excitement....and it adds to my own pleasure, exponentially so.  
 
Ohhh how I love to assault the senses.... *wink  
I'm thinking that this one might be needing audio....?!... Hmmm.... maybe!  
 
Thank you for your amazingly beautiful comments, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading like you did.  
 
Much love, dear poet  
🌹 💙  
B

I am in total agreement on the audio!!
:)

-💙

you're good!...got me off.....keep it cumming...

There are compliments and praise and then there's blatant beautiful honesty.....I thank you for sharing your honest truth.

I'm thrilled you think I'm good—thank you.
Most would quip back that they're good at 'being bad.' I think differently and deeply relish in my penchant for fetishism and wickedness... and yes, I do try to just be... very very good, indeed. *wink

Thank you for stopping in and feeling my fire, Lawrence.
It's appreciated
🌹💙
B

Your words are to poetry what Venus Di Milo is to art.  This sizzled like a flame of desire that cannot be quenched. Each line was a deep thrust of powerful flex that made me into the steel of lust. When you spoke of panties ripped and reutilized as bindings I melted into a million diamonds of heat. But this poem carried me into the sun of your corporeality like a concupiscent solar force that could not be resisted. Your feminine power swirled around me like a tornado of loving dreams. I felt your libido as it unfolded onto me with the slippery edge of your lips whose gravitation was a tractor beam of delight. This is my ultimate erotic golden path to heaven. And you made it all come true for me. I am grateful to you for bringing me full force into the melody of your womanhood.

XoXoXo
John

My dearest,
You definitely know me and my love of words, even with that being said, I'm still rendered utterly speechless by your truly astounding complimentary feedback.
I'm a deer in headlights, left wholly nonplussed, John. I am sincerely blown away by your beautiful soul and enormous spirit of like mindedness. I need a bit to process your breathtaking comments, as I feel they require that type of deep reflection and heartfelt consideration.

I just quickly wanted you to know how affected and appreciative I am to have you here with me, it's enormously meaningful

I'll update my complete thoughts soon...
-💙
Susan

Likewise, your presence here is a deeply meaningful part of my life. Your poetry resonates with me. Take your time my friend. I will be here.

Xo
John

And I am delighted milady. To be your enormously meaningful fan gives me great joy. In fact, your poem gives me a tremendous lift. ;)

XoXo
John

John,
I adore each and every heart stopping takeaway you pen in this observational feedback. It's almost indescribable how powerful and reaffirming it is to have your beautifully abundant encouragement and support fuel my sometimes waning coffers of confidence. I hope that comes across as profound and heartfelt as I mean it to because I feel like that's the highest level of praise and adoration that I have, and I so willingly give it.  

The brightness and care that you lovingly instill in your writing, obviously comes directly from deep within your own inner wellspring; I feel it radiate out in waves, so genuine and warm around me.


Thank you, my dear.  
🌹💙

Dear BV,

Jesus! I need a fire hose to extinguish this heat!  I remember him well. My Adonis. Ooofah! This write flooded memories of a similar ilk, not that I’m one to tell tales out of school but he did school me. You provide just enough to fill the floodgates with great imagery yet let the reader wander where they will.  This is some grade A+ writing! H🌷

Ooofah!!
hahahaha!! Yesss!
I'm absolutely grinning ear to ear, Honoria!
To have those memories flood back; reliving the delicious 'lessons' your beau hopefully taught and taught you well, made me truly happy. I love that... so. much. What an enormously big compliment, in my opinion, one which I'm so humbled and overjoyed that my little spicy poetic number was able to earn.

Thank you for feeling that heat and sharing your memories with me.... it was such a pleasurable treat.

🌹 💙
B

Damn woman!! I wouldn't mind being lost with you in all your seduction.
E.

lol... Awww... love that, E

The breadth of various seductive wants runs vast, deep.... and aplenty. It's enticements like you and yours that keep me on the cusp of yearning.....and oh how I thrive there.

Thank you for stopping by and sharing with me.
Such pleasure ✨
🌹 💙
B

Wow.
I'm so taken aback and left in an almost shell shocked stupor, Tim... 🤯 😲
That was quite a beautiful compliment, which I don't take lightly or with anything but deep appreciation and humble gratitude.

Sometimes I've faltered and sometimes I've flown high, when it comes to finding my poetic voice. I thank you for being part of that journey. It's a joy and truly meaningful to me that you show up and share in my travels.

I'm mostly speechless so I'll say I'm beyond delighted you found that kind of worth, here...
Again, thank you.

Much love, my friend
🌹 💙
B

one motion has me perfectly placed....

Now, I'm thinking....what position into what dimension....

Which convoluted, transpostionally entangled tangential must be so asymptotic that it approaches such perfection for her? Hmmmmm.

Hmmmm.... indeed.

Perhaps it's an intention?
To potentially spark intrigue, leaving one to ponder at length... visualizing ...all. the. possible. positions.

and then letting me know what you have deliberated on...
;p

(You and your big vocabulary! ... do you think it makes me even more pliable?.... Now it's my-Hmmmm... )



-yeah, it totally does-
😈

I count on my vocabulary's being able to narrow the field while widening your sense of my appreciating your sapio quality mind....it's a way of talking directly to you while leaving others out....it's that word play that is foreplay....unabashedly...

Yes, I figured as much, long ago (about your vocabulary)....and do appreciate the confirmation  

Foreplay fetishes come in many varied forms with almost endless possibilities... sure. DUP has taught me much about those possibilities, people's truths, innate motivations and the often stark reality of how the world really does work.

It's a microcosm....  



Thanks for highlighting things and really making it clear. I often get lost in the anticipation of hope and goodness and needed to be grounded in truth.

Rossetti has a poem about grass growing through his lover's finger tips while he is able to see the sky reflected in her eyes....he is above her and she is lying on her back on the lawn.

Silent noon?"
if that's it, I just read it

hidden bliss, remarkable love basking within the peace and stillness...




(It's poetry that keeps me going and my own damaged heart that smartly keeps me at bay...)

amazingly wrought, your use of sensuality your words painted
leaves reader’s senses quite bewitched…fantastic write
thanks for sharing ~ x

Hey there, s_o ;)
It's so wonderful to see you again! 🦋
I'm excited that you've returned and definitely can't wait to catch up with your own writing, too .... I've been popping in and out of DUP without much time to pursue the reading I normally like to do, but I'll certainly be by your little corner, indeed!

I'm beyond thrilled that you found a bit of sensuality and bewitching while visiting me and this little piece; what a tremendously awesome compliment that warms me from head to toe! I adore those permeating thoughts /feedback and sincerely bask in their affects of motivation and encouragement.

Thank you, dear lady ✨

Much love and warm wishes your way,
🌹 💙
B

hiii, you’re very welcomed….and i thank you, so much for the warm welcome upon my return xo…
i myself have only been online//social platforms sporadically myself, so i hear you ;)

and no worries, no rush…just feel free to visit//read my
gibberish at your own leisure. i look forward to returning to visit
upon your poetic artistry again, soon.

brightest blessings  to you ~ xo 🌬🖤✨, s_o.

if you do my chance see this, please know you were a pleasure to read and interact with on my page, too ... I wish you all the best with your future writing endeavors!! I hope to be able to cross paths again...  

Thanks for sharing in a little poetry with us!
🌹 💙
x

hii, i just wanted to quickly reply back to tell you that i wholeheartedly thank you 😊🥀🖤 for your lovely words…and i definitely look forward to reading your art again, soon as i can!

i’m just taking some time out of from cyberspace to try to better focus on researching/working new writings.

at times, writing sites/social sites becomes too distracting for me and it’s easier (for me) to have my words bleed out on paper,
when i step away for a spell.

again, my wholehearted thanks for your gracious words and showing an interest in my ramblings. i wish you the best in all your creative endeavors…

🥀✨much love n light ~ s_o

It speaks volumes.... and is more than enough, to me.

Thank you for the visit,
I enjoy seeing you 🦋
🌹-🤍

Thanks for the very generous RL add, Colin! It's lovely to see you 🦋

Miss my partner on crime.... very very much!
Hope you are doing well, my dear friend 🙏
🌹💙

Much love from across the pond ✨
-xoxoxoxo

Bluevelvet,

    Listen up Bluevelvet I tell u this. This poem is a flava food only described of thy kiss oooooo. This flow of to my eyes so ah sweet, is a flow so vibrantly understanding. Close held are the two that this poem of speaks. Such engulfing is the vibe of its sexually hey. U are a writer that is on the swing. And, this erotic ecstacy is what the day bring u. Blue u are one of a kind. These aluvaz ah spoken about, to each other ain't the sublime. They are one by the voice of the girl. Brilliant and perfectly is he and she to there worlds. Granduer ah job!👅💋🌈👍🛳️🍑👁️🤎🤍💎🛳️

Dear dear, Birchel

I'm listening, my friend!! How do I ever live a day without feeling and experiencing your awesomely cool energy!!? I am completely digging that you felt the delicious tastes and scents that are so powerful and truly enticing. Awww... You know what, you're totally one of a kind, as well!!  
Of course!
Thank you so much for being here and feeling the sublime nature of being...

You're always a welcomed visit and one that I very much appreciate.  

Stay safe out there, my dear poet!  
✲ﾟ｡.(✿╹◡╹)ﾉ☆.｡₀:*ﾟ✲ﾟ*:₀｡
🌹💙 - B

Much aluv to u Velvet! And, u are welcome ah muchly dear
💋👅🌷🥃🍑🥂🍻🍺👍🌈🤜🤛

Hoi hoi
‘You inhale deeply…’
Yes, exactly that.
That’s what heaven is made of.
Later today, or maybe tomorrow I’ll be back to inhale this one again.
Love it to pieces!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi!  
Yesss... There's nothing like those intoxicating scents that when deeply inhaled can totally deliver you to heaven's gates, themselves! ... I love that figurative language and absolutely agree. To activate all those senses in unison is otherworldly and something to wholly aspire to ;)  
 
I'm so glad you found enjoyment and yes please, return to partake.... as often as you're able!  
 
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me, dear Gus!  
 
Warmest regards and much love,  
🌹💙  
B

Chère B.,  
Eons ago, I wrote:  
 
Die geurtjes en smaakjes  
Die horen erbij  
Die maken het helemaal  
Af voor mij  
 
Lovely smells and tastes  
Are needed you see  
They make it all  
Heavenly for me  
 
By adding ‘tje’ (one) or ‘tjes’ (more than one) indicate either small or lovely in Dutch. The English is not an exact translation.
I guess you might say it resonates with me.
 
So yes, of course I’ve been back! Thank you again.  
Kind regards, Gus

Ahhhh, just beautiful!

Yes, I can certainly better understand that resonation, Gus.... Smell is the biggest sense memory for recall.... and for me taste goes hand in hand...

Lovely language... I thank you for the explanations, that's wonderful knowledge to impart!

I'm overjoyed to have you visit again, my dear
🌹🌺🌼🌷
x

damn..pheww not shabby, not shabby indeed, actually im intrigued and a question arises..ever collabed on such? I would be honored to do so with your gifted pen...I will upload a more recent Sinister-Sexy piece so you can see, i'm about passion-class..not trash as i see your so endowed:) Enslaved shine will be it, but theres a few others...reminds me i got one in the notebooks

Your very keen insights are truly welcoming to read, SS. I think inspiring intrigue is a most exciting and excellent feat, I'm more than delighted your curiosity was piqued. Passion that elaborates on our real impulses is sexy, indeed. I look forward to reading yours and will definitely head over to check out your ink.  
 
I'll let you know about collaboration.... it's often been a tricky tackle for me here on DUP...  
 
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, I loved seeing you again and deeply appreciate the kindness you've shown.  
 
Much love,  
🌹💙  
B

B,

By the time I read "suncatching", I had a big smile. I felt content and strangely it reminded me of being a wilful participant, not a voyeur. That in itself is an art form. Some very, very interesting and radical choices have gone into this. It's so many things at once. It's rabid, poetic, crude, intimate and delectably mischievous. Just like it's supposed to be.

I will come back and take a more objective look. :)

My new friend,

I'm relieved that you were smiling big before reaching the end and that instead of looking in you felt you were looking upon. Sometimes it's difficult to portray one's self on the page in a light that really reflects correctly, especially to those we've just met. I am so appreciative that you find my words here exactly as intended... not one thing but many. There's a lot of joy I derive from a new pair of eyes kind enough to take a gander, so much thanks to you.

Please, feel free to stop by anytime. You're more than welcome here.

🌹💙
B

It has been a while Blue and coming across this piece well off to a great start to be reading you again. While reading this one could hear how an audio would suit this.

Cheers

Glenn

I'm delighted to see you're back with us, Glenn
A hearty welcome back!  ;)

It's nice to be read, I'm glad this piece started you off on the right foot. That's kind of you to say.

I was thinking about recording audio for this one but felt like I've kind of over saturated my page with audio recently, so thought better of it. Maybe I'll change my mind.... who knows! Glad to know you'd think it would be of benefit!

Thanks for stopping by to visit,
I'll definitely return the favor.

Warmest regards,
🌹 💙
B

O...

M...

G...

*heart eyes*

-💙

Take a pinch of Paul McCartney’s “Rough Ride”, add a bit of his “Heaven On A Sunday”, and pull off the cobwebs of Lennon’s “I Want You”, and you have this!  (Okay maybe Heaven On A Sunday doesn’t fit, except for that is this day of the week)

Oh Jazz.... this 'compilation' is perfect 👌🏻
You really made me smile with this clever musical bounty! Now I have a full on Beatles hankering!
;).... or maybe some Paul and Wings...

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me and taking the time you have.

It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 💙
x

Well, that may have overheated certain devices across the DUP universe.
Wow, that was not only intense but also consuming with passion and fire.

Bravo Blue (applause) bravo.

Thanks for the visit and for feeling my words, W


I highly doubt anything or anyone overheated, though.... but that was nice of you to say!

Much obliged, my friend
🌹 💙
B

certainly worth reading.

Thank you.

Nice to see new faces!
Enjoy your time here with us

🌹-B

Ohh my 🤤


Lovely to meet you.....

Charmed, I'm sure.


Thank you for sharing in the excitement, Daniel.
It's always a pleasure to see new faces.
Welcome!
I hope you enjoy your time here with us

🌹-💙
B

Such a lovely warm welcome 🙂

Thank you

You're welcome.
🌹

Almost sounds interrogation notes from you last capture; or how you hope one will play out!  : )

Who doesn't enjoy a bit of spiciness.  🌶🔥🪑⛓

A tad bit alluring torture; just enough to get one teetering on that edge...

Yes, indeed! You have to have a little spice, it wakes up the palate quite nicely...

Yummy!
😏 👏🏻💋🌶️♨️

Hoi hoi
No news from greater Amsterdam.  
- because we’re not there
- because I simply went back to read this ‘eye candy’ (I know the different meaning of the word) (could be eye candy both for the person who posts as well as the poem. On second thoughts…).

I simply came back for another eye full of happiness.
And to make the applause- list a bit longer.  
Leave it up to me to murder the language!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
Your grasp of English is wonderful, Gus... no worries there.
Thank you for finding this poem intriguing enough to give it another go around! I'm so thrilled you felt the urge for another 'eye full of happiness' that really makes me feel wonderful and has set a great tone for my upcoming day today.

You made me giggle about the *applause list*...I see the comments as tools to motivate and learn from and I'm sincerely happy and appreciative you decided to add another bit of kindness to it's ranks.

Have a wonderful week ahead, my friend
🌹 💙
B
x

Good piece:) 👍  

Thanks, William.
🌹💙

Of course!

Seems I must of missed this one. A shame as it's a very favorable one for sure 😁

"fearless, stands naked before you"

Wonderful, friend.

I'm just imagining
I couldn't express my admiration for your poem
But when I read it, my fantasies fell in love with it

Big like
mp

Falling in love can be divine or treacherous, so beware!  *wink

I'm only teasing, btw! ;p

It's an honor to evoke such strong emotions; thank you for stopping by and enjoying the written experience like I'd hoped.

You're much appreciated and genuinely valued, MP
💙-B

At long last, I have found that internal naughty girl you first spoke of when I joined DUP... And she is glorious!

Only took me a month of deep diving...

You're so silly... hahaha... there's LOADS! I Think my titles are throwing you for a loop... haha....

Thanks for finding this one, it's pretty hidden unless you really get into it.

It's actually a relatively new favorite!

I'll direct you to some doozies...just a few...

(I'm more incognito or maybe just a little more solemn nowadays.)  

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406238-the-vivid-nature-of-exigent-fucking-a/


https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/465026-how-sleeping-beasts-stir-to-a-rouse-a/

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/436394-spitting-it-out/

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/433445-valuable-lessons-learned-from-ghosts-of/