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Lips
Just lips
Some say my calling card
Fat
Juicy
Thin lips scare me
Don't trust them
Mostly belong to uptight politicians
Be wary
These lips would look good on yours
Yes you
You're not surprised, are you ?
Some say my calling card
Fat
Juicy
Thin lips scare me
Don't trust them
Mostly belong to uptight politicians
Be wary
These lips would look good on yours
Yes you
You're not surprised, are you ?
Author's Note
Lips by Poetspeak
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Re. Lips
21st Aug 2022 11:42am
I absolutely love this! Everything about it but especially how cleverly it's constructed. Way to go!
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21st Aug 2022 11:53am
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21st Aug 2022 12:18pm
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
21st Aug 2022 2:34pm
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21st Aug 2022 2:58pm
The sizzle and the steak, I should retire now and Just sell these lips on pay per view ....
Thanks Ted, you gave me a good smile !!
Thanks Ted, you gave me a good smile !!
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
21st Aug 2022 3:14pm
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21st Aug 2022 5:08pm
I've been in sales in one form or another my whole life.
My sales manager who also is an owner is only concerned with the sale. That's not my philosophy. I'm more 360. For me it's prospecting, qualifying, competing, closing, making the company buy the right products ( very difficult) retention, taking less margin when my competition gets tired of losing sales to me and me doing the same thing to them. Most of all it's the relationships of course. In the old days I just went in and told the customer, I'll save you money and it worked in Manhattan because I took a territory nobody wanted and did damn well. Recession 2008/9 most of my Manhattan customers moved to the outer boroughs. I did well following them but all my margins dropped 5 to 10 points. I like outside sales. I've never owned a car and have never driven to a customer on my own.
A true Renegade. The inside guys said I wouldn't last 6 months. That was 20 years ago. Can I help you ???
My sales manager who also is an owner is only concerned with the sale. That's not my philosophy. I'm more 360. For me it's prospecting, qualifying, competing, closing, making the company buy the right products ( very difficult) retention, taking less margin when my competition gets tired of losing sales to me and me doing the same thing to them. Most of all it's the relationships of course. In the old days I just went in and told the customer, I'll save you money and it worked in Manhattan because I took a territory nobody wanted and did damn well. Recession 2008/9 most of my Manhattan customers moved to the outer boroughs. I did well following them but all my margins dropped 5 to 10 points. I like outside sales. I've never owned a car and have never driven to a customer on my own.
A true Renegade. The inside guys said I wouldn't last 6 months. That was 20 years ago. Can I help you ???
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
21st Aug 2022 6:08pm
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21st Aug 2022 6:14pm
It's ironic because I was an Operations Manager when I worked in Broadcasting for many years at the networks. I despised management, like changing diapers but I was good at it. When I took this outside sales gig I swore I'd never work in an office again and haven't.... I'm Grey collar now .. So many ways to sell, I always say I'm a finesse pitcher with an occasional fastball and a nasty slider.
Baseball really is a great sport to compare life to !!
Baseball really is a great sport to compare life to !!
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
21st Aug 2022 6:28pm
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Re: Re. Lips
21st Aug 2022 6:33pm
Yeah, the curves are a real downer ...
Thanks so much for the enlightening engagement !
Thanks so much for the enlightening engagement !
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21st Aug 2022 2:47pm
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21st Aug 2022 3:00pm
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21st Aug 2022 3:23pm
This lips are made for walking, and that's just what they'll do ( Oops! Wrong reference...).
BIG LIKE
hugs,
buddhakitty.
BIG LIKE
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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21st Aug 2022 6:07pm
Nancy Sinatra
I remember bk
I love that song
She can walk on me, I will look up her skirt
Win Win
I remember bk
I love that song
She can walk on me, I will look up her skirt
Win Win
Re. Lips
21st Aug 2022 3:55pm
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21st Aug 2022 6:08pm
Bloodied is another whole ball game
Depends whose lips and whose doing the bloodying
Nice Tim
Depends whose lips and whose doing the bloodying
Nice Tim
Re. Lips
21st Aug 2022 3:56pm
Kinda creepy but I loved it. Liked the way you turned it around to take a pass at the reader. So good!
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21st Aug 2022 6:16pm
I like to do that, challenge the reader
Makes for some fun engagement
Appreciate your comment LV
Makes for some fun engagement
Appreciate your comment LV
Re. Lips
Then kiss those big luscious juicy lips hard and make her panties/thong really wet. Keep on writing.
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21st Aug 2022 6:17pm
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21st Aug 2022 6:44pm
Love me a pair of great lips. I love kissing and a good make-out session (like a couple of hrs).
You know the one that makes your lips a little numb and a bit pink. hehehehe
I totally agree with the thin lip
line. They are scary!!! Run.
You know the one that makes your lips a little numb and a bit pink. hehehehe
I totally agree with the thin lip
line. They are scary!!! Run.
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Anytime, any place. I'm ready
Your lips are super sexy A 💋
No wonder I call you Hot Sauce 💥💥💥
Yum
Your lips are super sexy A 💋
No wonder I call you Hot Sauce 💥💥💥
Yum
Anonymous
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21st Aug 2022 7:14pm
Re. Lips
21st Aug 2022 7:33pm
This reminded me of all the sayings that have been created about lips. Also Grima Wormtongue from Lord of The Rings.
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21st Aug 2022 7:45pm
I just go by experience. Look at Mick Jagger, he’s all lips and a sex symbol. Works for him. No choice in the matter either Jazz
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21st Aug 2022 10:38pm
You got that right. I have one female friend in Jagger’s age bracket that jokes about being married to Jagger. In fact were are going to a Bonnie Raitt concert this week. I have other friends who don’t mind telling you they would take the least attractive Beatle or any Rolling Stone any day.
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21st Aug 2022 10:50pm
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22nd Aug 2022 5:52am
I was under the impression we were referring to the look and thus the lips….
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22nd Aug 2022 11:08am
Anything goes with lips Jazz
Lips on your face
Lips downtown
Lip service
This is a wide open comments festival
Jagger would be proud I think ...
Lips on your face
Lips downtown
Lip service
This is a wide open comments festival
Jagger would be proud I think ...
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But that stubble.... the toil and trouble. Lol.
(I think my attempt at humor was not humorous to some. Thus, edited.)
(I think my attempt at humor was not humorous to some. Thus, edited.)
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Re: Re. Lips
22nd Aug 2022 4:16am
I was waiting for that sermon too. I get grief for other stuff I write, might as well pile on for thin lips. I've been studying lips for years. Married a woman with lips like mine. Mr and Mrs Jagger I sometimes say. Sometimes in winter we share the chapstick, that's love son ...
Re. Lips
22nd Aug 2022 12:30pm
Never just lips...
The gateway to verbal communications.
A gateway to non-verbal communications too.
Oh how the lips can caress...
Another pair of lips.
Touch your heart and soul.
And a different pair of lips too. ;)
Hold onto something big...
Gliding along... Pressuring... no it won't escape...
Without * nevermind, innocent look *
Lips are made for another pair.
They look best on another...
The gateway to verbal communications.
A gateway to non-verbal communications too.
Oh how the lips can caress...
Another pair of lips.
Touch your heart and soul.
And a different pair of lips too. ;)
Hold onto something big...
Gliding along... Pressuring... no it won't escape...
Without * nevermind, innocent look *
Lips are made for another pair.
They look best on another...
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Re: Re. Lips
22nd Aug 2022 12:35pm
Very true
The best part of romance is the lean in to that first kiss ..
From there anything is possible
It's one of my favorite ways to communicate
I'm looking at yours, they'd definitely look good on mine
From there ... no innocent look
It will definitely be a trip downtown....
The best part of romance is the lean in to that first kiss ..
From there anything is possible
It's one of my favorite ways to communicate
I'm looking at yours, they'd definitely look good on mine
From there ... no innocent look
It will definitely be a trip downtown....
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29th Aug 2022 9:15pm
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29th Aug 2022 10:17pm